New SS: Noli me Tangere CLOSED Indefinitely - Page 11

Originally posted by: 6thElement

This pic of DD was for me to write something for NMT...Why the embarrassed smilie?

The girl with the green eyes is one from "Tum dena saath mera". Her name is Sonakshi Bhadora.

Originally posted by: ninand

I dont go by what the smilie actually 'means'😆.. mine meant 'smitten' look😆... actually with this embarrassed smiley I have never used it to mean exactly that.

Well I really just have to get to know you then to get your smilies...😃

Congratz 4 new story...
nice parts...

Thanks for starting NMT... loved the concept. It's new and interesting.

Part 1: Dev wrote to Maan while on his deathbed. Maan's apparently miffed coz Dev and Geet are together... from Dev's letter Geet has always been in love with Maan and vice versa. Dev loves Geet. What does Geet feel for Dev? What relationship do they share? Sorry for asking so many questions in the first part itself...lolz... but the curious me can't help it.

Part 2: Maan's an orphan and maybe that's why he prioritized wealth and status above all as mentioned in Dev's letter. Geet and him had a thing for each other from the very start and Dev was the third. Can't wait to know how things played out in their lives to reach at this juncture.

Do continue soon.

H, u have not been sending PM's for this one, have you? or are u just ignoring me? 😭

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

H, u have not been sending PM's for this one, have you? or are u just ignoring me? 😭

Well, a brilliant story. I somehow feel that the protagonist of this story is Dev more than anyone else. And the Noli Me Tangere is also an emotion Dev feels for Geet because he has always known that Geet belongs to Maan. I think this story will end on Dev's death bed with Maan holding Geet's hands (not literally but figuratively). Interesting...

I did send PMs out when I started it...But not for the next update though.

As for your claim about geet holding Maan's hand on Dev's deathbed. I can assure you that, that one scene is sure not in my story.

Gurl! You have to start using some bigger font. Or ship me some glasses...

🤣 My bollywood stories don't impress u anymore?

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

🤣 My bollywood stories don't impress u anymore?

What I actually meant was that all of Maan and Geet's story will be in flashback and the story will actually end with Dev ensuring that Maan and Geet are together. As in, there may not be much of a Maan and Geet story in the future, like A.D.Dev... know what I mean.

So, u only rejected the Maan holding Geet part. So does that mean that you actually intend to write this story with Dev as the protagonist?

And the font was meant as a punishment because I thought I did not receive ur PM. I seem to have punished you for no fault of urs. 😆

Brilliant story BTW.

I can assure you even this assumption of yours is not in my story...😉 That it ends with Dev being on the death bed. Trust me I waited a long time to write NMT...and not because I didn't know how to get it going (plot). I just wanted to get the angst right...

Yes...off late I'm being punished a lot for no fault of mine...😆

Thank you :)