FORBIDDEN LOVE ~2 updated prt19 on pg 130( 17/8)

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#811

BEAUTIFUL UPDATE.

Amazing

Dadima putting some sense in
Maan's brain. She is making him
Understand right or wrong.

Maan now feeling guilty. Loved
The way u explained his remorse
Beautifully by words. His breaking down.

Dadi over protective abt Geet. Now
She doesn't trust Maan.
Maaneet face to face. Despite the slap
Geet is still comforting Maan.
She says she is used to this but not frm
Him. Loved this line. It shows her pain.

Maaneet shifting to outhouse.
The song was gud.

Thanks for this update.
Continue soon.

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#812

Another amazing update...

The brewing emotions in each of them was evident. But why would Geet forgive him? That came as a surprise since I cannot understand her reasoning behind it.

However I felt a bit disappointed at no continuation of the discussion which made Geet use the extreme adjective for herself.Further disappointment is the fact that Maan feels just remorse, which is not what the outcome should have been. And his reasonings as to why he behaves harshly with Geet seemed logical yet totally unusual for a man he used to be. Dadima's words are so true, Geet has somehow grown to be more her own.

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#813

Bindu, take good care of yours and your family. Atleast, you are updating and that too a sensiable thing. Although, as per late updates, i find it short but the words you choose makes everything so beautiful.

Maan's remorse, Geet's remembrance and dadima's thought, together made it so lively and amazing to read. They are indeed made for each other. Both are suffering and are not at fault. Even dadima is right at her place. The bond between dadima-Geet and Maan's minute obrervation is superb. Damn, the song selection is super suitable. Overall, wonderful.

Do cont soon and do PM me.