FORBIDDEN LOVE ~2 updated prt19 on pg 130( 17/8)

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Originally posted by: bangalores

sorry yaar if i hurt ur feelings...i know it is difficult to imagine our MSK thus...
but during the HP days he was rude towards women...remember him asking geet in front of the whole pind if her brother priced her correctly...or the time when he asks her if she came to him at night so that she cud spend the night with him and demand more? i took that for inspiration while making him so...it is an entirely diff matter that though he was harsh with his words he was a thorough gentleman😊...
here geeet was the one who started the relation...so why shud he feeel bad about asking her to continue what she started? or be angry when she resists...their lovemaking does affect him ...that unknown pull along with his arrogance won't let him accept geet's rejection...
and loveless coupling does occcur ... even in marriage that began as love marriage😭...as i mentioned in another comment i know someone who went thru this...her husband telling her that he felt it his duty to fulfill her "biological needs"😡...take this as my sympathy for her situation...

thanks for replying dear
i read ur previous explanation wher u said that u potrayed maan here as he has straits of dev in him
i would differ from u how much rude maan might be be he does nt have any straits of dev in him he might say that he whatever he want to by having se* but he would definately not do it but here u have made him a despo for s** and he just wanna have s** with geet irrespective of anything
is this what the culture hsi dadi gave to him

u can tell all this thing about dev as he only wanted to have s** 😡 knowing that he would be leaving her that's why i have not forgave dev till the end of the show the cv were a bunch of idoits to have him in the path of redemption and showed NT as the culprit how could Nt be the culprit did she ask dev to do what he did
and the cv's made the devil as saint 😡

i m still not able to digest the character of maan here sorry to say i cant read it 😭😭😭😭😭😭

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Mrs.MSKForever

@Mrs.MSKForever

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: bangalores

sorry yaar if i hurt ur feelings...i know it is difficult to imagine our MSK thus...
but during the HP days he was rude towards women...remember him asking geet in front of the whole pind if her brother priced her correctly...or the time when he asks her if she came to him at night so that she cud spend the night with him and demand more? i took that for inspiration while making him so...it is an entirely diff matter that though he was harsh with his words he was a thorough gentleman😊...
here geeet was the one who started the relation...so why shud he feeel bad about asking her to continue what she started? or be angry when she resists...their lovemaking does affect him ...that unknown pull along with his arrogance won't let him accept geet's rejection...
and loveless coupling does occcur ... even in marriage that began as love marriage😭...as i mentioned in another comment i know someone who went thru this...her husband telling her that he felt it his duty to fulfill her "biological needs"😡...take this as my sympathy for her situation...

I dont think the one you know who faced similar situation needs sympathy...coz its the man who needs sympathy...
n about Geet having voiced her need for physical intimacy...well, she didnt ask Maan to again get purturbed by Geet's silent treatment and grant her a wish a day...n then show her a glimpse of the man Maan once was...and what I assumed from the parts I read( I might be wrong here), that Geet's voicing of their strong physical attraction was the ultimate surrender to the man she loved... for a person can forget the emotions..but she probably thought how could he forget the emotions their coupling brought in them.. Maan had always treasured Geet's each intimate gesture... be it calling him "maan" for the first time in hospital or kissing him first time on forehead in hospital or the cheek kiss on their confession...Geet had acted her age in all those circumstances where a teenager had finally succumbed to her excitement and vulnerability and did what was asked of her...whereas Maan had behaved the mature one and made it profound between the two of them.. probably Geet had expected something similar, alas!! the ruthless soul that has replaced the tender heart that once there was, has taken away his good manners as well... at made him utter those ill-gotten ideas
n I refuse to believe that Maan had vile thoughts back in HP days... he might have utteredc those... but he did that to a stranger... not to a woman whom he had been introduced as his wife not just by his brother but also by his daadima(someone who he implicitly trusts)... asking a wife to do wifely duties when in return u cannot even utter sentences that have essence of friendship in it, is like marital rape... isnt it? or am I too big a feminist here? I have always thought of physical intimacy as just a way of expressing your faith in the strong emotional connect... if u dont have a connect then it becomes a rape since one of the party doesnt have a consent in the situation... sorry I think I have too strong and staunch views about "that" aspect of life

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ammu5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

feel like hitting maan. hw can he say something like that to her. no wife will accept that. loved the update

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abinash079

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: Mrs.MSKForever

I dont think the one you know who faced similar situation needs sympathy...coz its the man who needs sympathy...
n about Geet having voiced her need for physical intimacy...well, she didnt ask Maan to again get purturbed by Geet's silent treatment and grant her a wish a day...n then show her a glimpse of the man Maan once was...and what I assumed from the parts I read( I might be wrong here), that Geet's voicing of their strong physical attraction was the ultimate surrender to the man she loved... for a person can forget the emotions..but she probably thought how could he forget the emotions their coupling brought in them.. Maan had always treasured Geet's each intimate gesture... be it calling him "maan" for the first time in hospital or kissing him first time on forehead in hospital or the cheek kiss on their confession...Geet had acted her age in all those circumstances where a teenager had finally succumbed to her excitement and vulnerability and did what was asked of her...whereas Maan had behaved the mature one and made it profound between the two of them.. probably Geet had expected something similar, alas!! the ruthless soul that has replaced the tender heart that once there was, has taken away his good manners as well... at made him utter those ill-gotten ideas
n I refuse to believe that Maan had vile thoughts back in HP days... he might have utteredc those... but he did that to a stranger... not to a woman whom he had been introduced as his wife not just by his brother but also by his daadima(someone who he implicitly trusts)... asking a wife to do wifely duties when in return u cannot even utter sentences that have essence of friendship in it, is like marital rape... isnt it? or am I too big a feminist here? I have always thought of physical intimacy as just a way of expressing your faith in the strong emotional connect... if u dont have a connect then it becomes a rape since one of the party doesnt have a consent in the situation... sorry I think I have too strong and staunch views about "that" aspect of life

totally valid points i agree with u fully
and yes i also refuse to believe that maan has these type of thoughts during HP days

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

waiting for real game to unfold ...

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Mrs.MSKForever

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Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#176

Originally posted by: tanya_vi
Amazingly written!! Can't even imagine putting myself in Geet's shoes,maybe because I am also a wife.Being humiliated to this extent by the man who rule your heart and soul...unbearable! Your Geet is a very strong person dear. I am very eager to read how she is gonna tackle this situation and well more than that his atonement when the truth finally unveils!!

Truly said!! difficult to imagine the kind of humiliation Geet is facing at the hands of this callous soul... but I dont know what truth are you talking about since as far as I know all facts have been infront of him- Geet being married to him, him having been madly in love with Geet to have saved her in every situation and also the fact that Geet loves him madly come what may...didnt he see her state when she had gone waiste up in water in the lake/river??
Geet being a mare teenager also is a double whammy in the situation since I feel that at 19 we are quite malleable and dont have strong views of life... but Maan is breaking Geet bit by bit which is an irony since he was the man who had carved Geet's submissive character to an assertive one who could have an opinion and live life on her own terms... only her terms are now not acceptable to Maan since he refuses to accept Geet's rejection of his proposal
hey Bindu... FF ke mid mei title change kar sakte hain kya??? You should really name this one as "The Indecent Proposal" now... since it isnt forbidden anymore 😆😆

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

i think she should leave him let his soul cry out for her all he is thinking about is sex he is hurt her in so many way awesome update loved it thanks for the pm

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mystique_girl

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Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#178

I must say how incredibly beautiful this update has been...though its sad but you have captured Geet's emotions beautifully - perfect 10 to you.

Her feelings, the comparisons and the flashbacks are so very valid to this scene...and I loved it that she said no to him..it wouldnt ever do for a self-respecting wife to watch such a downfall of their relationship...

Ofcourse she wished for the permanent stature of her love, this would just be an arrow in the dark future ...

So the game's beginning. Do you plan to bring that other guy into picture now?

Edited by mystique_girl - 13 years ago