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Posted: 13 years ago
part 54
nice part...
glad is fine and Maan is taking care of her...
that Rahul grrr...
oh ho Aman hope the lil' boy isn't in danger...
is Dev acting or really feeling for his son?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
read this story dear..its nice..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..loved it..ohh u ending this FF so soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
I think dev has changed hope so, he should be given a chance.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update di... Bt y did u said Painful union of Maaneet... M getting scared nw... Pls update soon
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loved the update...
waiting to know the next...
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awesome update
loved that maaneet r together
precap is scary why did you say painful reunion
hope aman is fine
update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for updating this after long...

loved the update...

continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 55

Everyone was heel worried for Aman. They was no call from any kidnappers asking for ransom and this made them to worry more. It was like could not do anything. Maan had asked his men's to search for Aman but there was no news from them also. Meera was all the while crying after opening her eyes and hugging Dev. She did not know why she needed Dev this time but felt tat only Dev could calm her and seeing that Maan could not do anything. Fearing the consequences they had not informed the police yet. It was than when Maan's phone rang. Maan was not in a mood to receive any calls but being a unknown private number he picked it up. As soon as he heard the voice on the phone his anger grew ten times like it never did.
Maan: Rahul…
As soon as maan said Rahul's name everyone was shocked and Geet started to shiver. Vicky was soon next to her to keep her in his emebrace.
Rahul: So quick Maan. I just said hello and u guessed it as me. M quite surprised Maan.
Maan: apni baskwas bandh karo. I don't have time to waste on u.
Rahul: chill Maan. Meri puri baat suno phir kaho jo kehna hain.
Maan: just shut up…. Tumhe jo karna tha tumne kar liya Rahul ab meri baari
Rahul: Aman… shayad Aman ko lekar bahut pareshan ho tum sab. Jaana nahi chah the ki Khuranna Khandaan ka beta ish waqt kaha aur kya keh raha hain.
Maan: Aman.. yani ki Aman ki kidnapping tumne ki hain.

Everyone just stood up with his voice and Meera started to cry more.

Rahul: oh gosh Maan. Tum tho bina bataye hi samhj jaathe ho. So let me come straight to the point.
Maan: Agar Aman ko choti bhi karooch aayi tho main tumne zinda maar dunga rahul. Don't even dare to touch Aman.
Rahul: mujhe Aman se kuch nahi chahye. I just want Geet.
Maan: Rahul…. Don't u dare take her name with ur filthy mouth. Don't u dare even take geet's name.
Tat was enough for geet to get more scared now.
Rahul: oh come on Maan, how can I not take her geet's name. I have been waiting for her for so many years. Mera badal har baar adhura rehtha hain Maan. aur uski ke wajah se tumne mera pura Canada ka business barbaad kiya, uski sazza thou she mil ke hi rahegi Maan. she will pay for each and everything now.
Maan: tumari dushmani mujhse hain Rahul, so keep her away from all this matter.
Rahul: dushmani uski ki wajah se shuru hui hain Maan aur tumhe barbaad karne ke liye Geet se behtar kaun hain. I would love to see ur face and anger when I touch ur geet.
Maan: Don't u dare Rahul… Tum geet tak kabhi nahi paunch sakthe ho. Yeh sapna dekhna bandh karo.
Rahul: sapna nahi Maan haqeeqat hain aur ish haqeeqat ko tum pura karoge. Agar Aman ki zindagi chah the ho, tho Geet ko kal mere farm house leke aauo. Wahi farmhouse Maan jaha tum ek baar ushe mere liye leke aaye the, yaad hain na tumhe warna Aman ki maut ka zimmedar tum khud hoge.
Maan: wat do u think Rahul tat I will listen and bring Geet to you for Aman. Aman kya, tum kisi bhi khuranna ke paas nahi aa sakthe.
Dev comes forward and takes the phone from Maan and says.
Dev: Rahul, maine kaha tha tumse mere bache ya gharwalo ko ish sab mein mat lao. Kaha tha tumse ki dur raho Rahul, jo hua hain ushe bhool jao, par tum nahi mane aur haan maine jo galati pehle ki thi ab nahi hone dunga. Aman ko bachane ke liye main Geet ko kya kisi ko bhi tumare paas aane nahi dunga. Tumhe jo chah ye woh karo.
Rahul: so Dev aakhir kaar tum Dev Singh Khuranna ban hi gaye. Chalo acha hua, ab meri baat dyan se suno, agar Aman ko zinda chah the ho tho Geet ko Maan ke saath kal mere farm house bhej dena warna bhool jao ki tumara ek beta bhi tha.
Dev: Nahi Rahul ish baar aisa kuch nahi hoga. Tumhe jo karna hain wo karlo par ish baar main aisa kuch nahi karunga.
With this Dev cuts the call and turns to see that the whole family was staring at him. he wanted to say something when he heard geet crying out.
Geet (crying): yeh sab meri wajah se hua hain. Agar main college mein ushe sabke samne tapad nahi maarti tho humare zindagi mein kabhi nahi aata. Nahi meri wajah se Maan yeh sab kuch kartha. Main hoon hi aisi ki jsiki bhi zindagi mein chali jau uski zindagi barabaad hoti hain.
Maan : just stop it geet. Ek baat apne dhimang mein dal do ki tumare wajahs ekuch nahi hua hain. Main Aman ko kuc nahi hone dunga samjhi tum.
Geet: Nahi Maan, Rahul maar dega Aman ko. Main jaanthi hoon ki woh kuch bhi kar saktha hain.
Dev: kuch nahi kar saktha hain Rahul. Kuch bhi nahi. Main jaantha hoon ki woh Aman ko kuch nahi karega.
Vicky: bas kijiye bhai. Agar aap Rahul ka saath nahi dete tho yeh sab kuch nahi hota. Sabse badi galati tho aapki hain.
Dev: jantha hoon Vicky ki meri galati hain par ab samjh mein aaya ki jab apne saath nahi hote tho paraye bhi kabhi saath nahi dete. Maine yeh baat seekh li hain ki kuch bhi karo par apne parivaar ko dukh dekar hum kabhi khush nahi ho sakthe aur yeh baat khud Rahul ki wajah se mujhe pata chali.
Everyone was shocked go hear wat dev was saying and he continued.
Dev: Haan jab dad ne mujhe ghar se nikal diya that ho mere paas kuch nahi tha. Phir ek din mujhe Rahul ne call kiya aur apne paas bhulaya. Kuch din main uske saath raha yeh samjhkar ki woh mera dost hain par ek din maine ushe apne aadmiyo se baat karthe suna ki who yeh sab sirf badal lene ke liye kar raha hain aur woh jaantha tha ki main uski madad kar saktha hoon kyun ki main Maan se nafrat kartha tha. Woh sirf Geet se badal chah tha tha aur ush din agar Vicky Geet ko nahi bachata tho woh khud mujhe inh sab mein fasa detha aur chala jaatha. Phir mujhe pata chala ki woh kuch aisa karne wala hain jaha Maan ko woh puri tarah barbaad kar dega par main uska plan nahi jaan paya aur jab tak pata chaltha tab tak ushne Geet par attack bhi kiya tha. Maine Maan se baat karne ki bahut koshish ki par nahi kar paya aur jab maine Rahul se baat kit ho pata chala ki woh sirf hume har taraf se barbaad karna chah tha hain. aur ushne kaha ki agar mujhe Geet nahi mili tho main Geet ke saath saath Meera ki zindagi bhi barbaad kar dunga. Aur phir ushne mere samne ek sharat raki ki main Geet ko uske samne kisi bhi tarah le aau nahi tho woh Meera aur Aman ko zinda mar denga. Aur tab mujhe pata chala ki meri zindagi Meera aur Aman hain. unke maut ke darr se mujhe ehsaas hua ki main kitna galat tha phir bhi main kuch nahi kar paya. Main yeh bhi jaantha ki Rahul bahut chalak hain so maine ushe kuch din maange par shayad ushe meri niyat par shaq hua aur ishe pehle ki main Meera se baat kartha ushne Aman ko kidnap karva diya.
Everyone was shocked tat rahul could go to such extent to just take a revenge from college. when they continued.
Dev: main nahi jaantha ki aap sab mujhe maaf kar payege ya nahi. nahi jaantha ki meri galati ki sazza maafi laya bhi hain ya nahi. Maine sirf Meera ya aap sab ko dukh nahi balki Geet ki zindagi se bhi khela. Kabhi socha hi nahi ki pyar zabardasthi se nahi hota hain aur Geet sirf Maan se pyar karthi thi. Nahi jaantha ki aap mujhe phir se apnayenge ya nhi par main sach main aap sab se apni hare k galati ki maafi managtha hoon. Dad I know tat m not a good son but still I would like to be ur son dad. Meera, I know tat I have made ur life hell but still would ask u to give me a chance aur Maan main tumse maafi nahi maanguga , kyun ki main jaantha hoon ki sab se jyada main tumara gunegaar hoon. Maine jo Geet ke saath kiya uski sazza tumne paayi par phir bhi ho saktha hain to apne ish bhai ko maaf kar de. Main apne parivaar ke paas wapas aana chah tha hoon mom. Please forgive me mom.

All had tears in their eyes as they could see the regret and repentance in Dev's eyes. They knew tat he would one day come back to them after realizing his mistakes and he did. So they forgave him.
Vicky: par ab hum Aman ko kaise bachayege. Agar humne uski baat nahi maani tho woh Aman ko…
Geet: anhi Vicky Aman ko kuch nahi ho saktha hain. Rahul jaisa kahega hum waise hi karege.
Before she could speak anything else Maan slapped her hard on her face. He could not even think about it and here she was saying tat.
Maan: don't you dare geet. Aman ko kuch nahi hoga samjhi tum kuch nahi.
Dev: haan geet, mujhe maaf kar dena, yeh sab meri wajah se hua hain par ish baar aisa kuch nahi hoga. Rahul jaantha hain Ki hum uski baat itni jaldi nahi mane ge so woh Aman ko kuc nahi karega.
They all were tensed but could not even think of doing wat rahul had said. Maan knew tat Rahul would not harm Aman unless and until his wish was full filled and he would take this time to find out about his whereabouts. He instantly called his most trusted guard and told him to find everything about rahul. His each second movement, his stay outs everything.
It was night and Maan entered his room only to see his mishty looking out of the window. He slowly went near her and turned her to face him and was shocked to see her eyes shedding tears.
Geet: yeh sab meri wajah se hua hain Maan. Aman ki jaan meri wajah se aaj khatre mein hain. Na main college mein Rahul ko maarthi na aap mere liye uska business barbaad karthe aur na yeh sab hota. Main sirf ek kala saaya hoon aap sab par.
Maan: ssh geet. tumari wajah se kuch nahi hua hain geet. aur ushe tapad marna tumari galati nahi thi. He misbehaved with u and u answered him, its not wrong jaan.
Geet: par Maan ab Aman. Woh Rahul ushe maar dega Maan. aap please uski baat maan liiye.. please, meri zindagi Aman se important nahi hain.
Maan: bas karo Geet, kitni bar kaha hain tumse ki Aman ko kuc nahi hoga. Kuch nahi hone dunga main.
Geet: par Maan.

Before Geet could say anything Maan pulled her into a kiss making her shut her mouth. Maan knew tat he had to divert her now and this was the best option. He pressed his lips more to her nibing and biting lips. Geet could not control herself and soon she responded to him. The kiss soon turned into a passionate one and Maan slowly pulled her to bed taking out her saree. Maan laid geet on the bed without breaking the kiss and started playing with her curves. He slowly unhooked her blouse keeping her only in her inners. Geet slowly started to unbutton his shirt and soon Maan was out of his shirt and trousers. Geet was wriggling under him as Maan now had unhooked her bra and taken away all her clothes along with his. He massaged and bit her curves giving her pleasures. He bit her skin making her to loose herself and Geet moaned his name to make him more wild. Soon he adjusted himself on her feminine part and entered with a strong trust making geet to scream. He waited for her to adjust to him by giving her kissed and later moved with a rhythm. He soon increased him apce making their love making a wild session. It was a long night for them as Maan kept on making love to her. he somewhere was scared of loosing Geet and this made him to be wild with her.

Precap: Maan and Rahul face to face.

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