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Posted: 13 years ago
when u update this ff plz update sooon ...
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Waiting dear...
Kahan kho gai ho...😔
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NOTE..
so sorry for not updating this...
so this ff is uptp the end and mostly it has almost 3-4 updates... so i will finish this within 10 days... and hope i stick to my traget now... as right now along with this m having 3 more FF running currently...
and oh dont be sad.. i will update this tommorrow first...
so next update my tomorrow evening...
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Originally posted by: sdlife19

NOTE..

so sorry for not updating this...
so this ff is uptp the end and mostly it has almost 3-4 updates... so i will finish this within 10 days... and hope i stick to my traget now... as right now along with this m having 3 more FF running currently...
and oh dont be sad.. i will update this tommorrow first...
so next update my tomorrow evening...


Dear...
We'll wait...😍
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PART 54

Geet slowly opened her eyes to see her whole family looking at her. she scanned the whole room for one person and there he was standing behind everyone not able to face his jaan lying there on the hospital bed. She looked at him who had his eyes down and it was known to her tat he was feeling guilty now for her. everyone was relieved seeing their princess all fine after fighting for her life. Geet slowly called out to Maan. Her faint voice was enough for him to come out of his guilt and he just rushed to her forgetting about others.

Maan: m really sorry jaan. M really sorry. I failed this time also like always. I failed to protect you jaan.

Geet kept her hand on his lips to stop him and wiped his tears with the other.

Geet: no, maan u are not. You always protected me and will do. But ha, its your mistake to send me away from you and see wat happened. Jab bhi aap mujhe apne se dur karthe hain, problems mujhe dhoondh hi leti, jaanthe hai na ki mere Maan nahi hain mere saath, tho thoda pareshan kar lete hain unki jaan ko.

Maan: nahi jaan, aisa mat kaho. Tumne tho meri jaan hi nikal di thi. I would really die if something had happened to you. This is the worst moment in my life geet. Itni badi sazza dene ki sochna bhi mat geet.

Geet: nahi maan. please aisa mat kahiye, main aapko kabhi chod ke nahi jaungi. Aap please shant ho jaye na.

Maan hugged her from sideways as if holding his life which he had missed. He still could not forget the moment when geet was in his arms covered with blood. He could not even dream a life without his jaan. But he wanted to know wat has happened in her room. He slowly asked geet.

Maan: geet, was it Rahul.

Geet stiffens with the mere mention of Rahul's name and hugs him tight fearing. Maan knew tat wat he though was right but he wanted to know wat actually happened behind the closed door.

Maan: Geet, Rahul ne kya kiya tha geet. How did he shoot you.

Geet: Maan who Rahul, he did try to force… Maan.. he will not leave me Maan….. I did not let him touch me Maan… I did not let him Maan…. I did not let him do … anything Maan…

Maan: sssh… jaan.. kuch nahi hua.. he wont do anything to u jaan.. calm down..

Geet: Nahi Maan…. Rahul kuch bhi kar saktha hain…. he said tat he wont leave us Maan. m sacred Maan, he will go to any extent to destroy us Maan.
Maan: Nahi geet kuch nahi kar saktha hain who kuch nahi. tumhe kuch nahi hoga. Ab Rahul ko Maan Singh Khuarranna ka samna karna padega. He will pay for each and every sins Geet.
Maan consoled Geet and made her to sleep while both the families witnessed the pure love between them. Mohinder was ashamed of himself for his rude behavior and wrong decision for taking Geet away from Maan. He now came to know tat if Geet was with Maan, Rahul would never ever come close to her.
Geet was discharged from the hospital after a week. She was asked to take complete bed rest due to her wound and weakness. Maan finally brought her to the KM as now he did not wanted any risk for her life unknown to the other fear surrounding them. Mohinder was more than happy tat Maan took her with him as he did not wanted to keep them separate any more. The Khuranna's took every measure to keep Geet happy and safe, but somewhere all were sacred due to the incident. Maan has doubled the security around the KM for Geet unknown tat the his one family was in more danger. He did not leave Geet event for a moment.
Few days passed by and KM was once again in the grip of fear. It was just a normal day. Meera had gone to pick Aman from his school as usual. Aman was very happy as the very next day it was their sports day in school.
Aman: Mamma, kal na.. humara sports day aur aapko aur dada ko school aana hoga. App janthe hain na maine running mein part liya hain. Bade papa kehte hain ki Aman bahut strooong hain aur Aman sab prizes.. jeet jayenga. Hain na mamma..
Meera: Haan beta.. humara Aman bahut strong hain. aap sab prizes jeet jayenge. Chalo ab hum ghar chale aapki badi maa ne aapka favorite cake banaya hain.
Aman: sachi mamma.
Meera: haan.
Aman: wah.. badi maa is the best.. vaise mamma kal dada aayenge na
Meera was all quite as she did not know wat to answer Aman. She herself did not know how many lies she would be able to tell him. why Dev was not staying at KM, why Maan beat him and so on when she heard Aman screaming.
Aman: dada…. Mamma dekho.. dada hain. dekho mamma dada aaye.
Meera looked towards the direction where Aman was pointing and yes there stood was broken and miserable Dev at one corner of the road. She was shocked to see Dev in tat state and once she felt bad but as soon as she remembered his mistakes and behavior with Geet she felt disgusted of herself tat she still loved him. while she was lost in her thoughts Aman left her hand and ran towards Dev. Meera came back from her thoughts and saw Aman running in between the road and she panicked seeing him. She ran behind Aman calling out for him but before she could catch hold of him Aman was pulled inside a running car. Meera did not knew wat was happening and just kept running. Dev who was standing the otherside did not know wat was going own due to the moving vehicles but when he saw Meera running in between the vehicles he got scared for her and ran behind her and tats when he realized tat Aman was missing and she was screaming his name. Dev saw car just behind her and he ran and pulled her a side and shouted.
Dev: wat the hell is this Meera. Pagal ho kya beech rasthe pe ish tarh bhagne ka.
Meera: Dev, Aman, dev humara Aman. Woh ghadi…
Dev was so scared by seeing Meera tat he almost forgot about Aman but when meera said Aman's name he realized tat Aman was missing.
Dev: Meera, Aman kaha hain.
Meera: Dev, Aman, humare Aman ush ghadi, woh log… mask… Aman ko le gaye.

And before she could say anything else Meera fainted in Dev's arms. Dev did not know wat to do and he picked her up and carried her towards the car. He somehow knew by her words tat Aman was kidnapped as Delhi was famous for it and being a son of Khuranna's it was not new but still he was somehow sacred for Aman but right now Meera needed him. he asked the driver to take them to KM. they reached the mansion and dev once again carried Meera in his arms and came inside the mansion. As soon as he stepped inside Dadima, Shailaja and Geet who were waiting for Aman were shocked to see him coming inside and Dadima was almost to shout when they saw Meera unconscious in his arms. They rushed to her and dev helped them to take Meera to her room. While Geet called the doctor.

Dadima: Ab aapki itni himmat badi ki aap ish ghar mein wapas aane ke liye Meera ka sahara lenge Dev. Aap itna gir sakthe hain hum yeh kabhi nahi soch sakthe hain.
Dev: nahi dadima, woh..
Shailaja: Kya woh Dev, ab aur kitni baar jhoot bhologe tum. Aur ish baar aapne Meera se kya keh diya ki Meera ki yeh halat hui hain aur Aman kaha hain. Meera tho Aman ko school se pick karne gayi thi na.

Before anyone could say anything else Meera screamed getting up…. " Aman…. Dev Aman ko wo legaye.. Dev..,…. Humara Aman."

Dev rushed to her and tried to calm her down..
Dev: Meera Aman ko kuch nahi hoga… Kuch nahi hoga Aman ko..
Meera: nahi dev…. Aman ko woh maar dalenge… Humara Aman..Dev..
Shailaja could not see Meera in this condition and went near her without knowing anything.
Shailaja: Meera bte, Aman thhek hain.. aap shant hojaye.
Meera: nahi mom.. woh Aman ko legaye. Mom Please Maan ko bhool de jiye ki woh Aman ko legaye..

And with this she fainted again. Geet did not know wat was happening and she called Maan telling him everything. Maan was once angry tat Dev was in KM but more than tat he was worried for Meera. He rushed home with his father.

Precap: Where is Aman ?

A painful union between Maaneet.

Hi dearies… m really sorry for not updating it.. but here m back with this FF. but now the story is about to wind up.. may be 3-4 updates remaining along with the epilogue. I have almost covered all the points which I had in my mind for the story.. so now before I or u lose interest in it I should wind it up.

Do like it and comment.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Tks for start updating.. nice
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
loved it
i hope we get update of love and hate also 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWSEM UPDATE MANEET TOGETHER AMAN KIDNAPPED DO NEXT SOON
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gr8 part.
waiting to know the next
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