Why this kolaveri di??$$maaneet(part 4)S$$

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Posted: 13 years ago
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No prologue and epilogue and the character sketch for this...😃
Its just a try to make you all laugh though out reading this...😆😆

please forgive me for any silly mistakes and keep on giving your feed backs...

My previous work.

Part 1 just below this post..
Part 2
part 3
part 4
part 5

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on ur new ff nisha...
count me in .. even i like to be torture by u...lloz...
continues soon... hmm vahi tum hara torture
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1

Do you think we can get over this'geet asked this to maan while resting her head over his shoulders where the cold breeze from the beach is making her calm for a while from the turmoil she is facing from the morning..

It s Chennai marina beach... Sunday morning 6pm where its very rush and busy like all Sundays it used to be'

In that crowd they choose the very peace full corner near the waves where crowds are almost few feets away from there it is noisy but yet it didn't disturb there intimacy and there husky talks

Of course we can dear'he said with confident by pulling her hair strands behind her ears

Maan its not simple as you think.. my family members are not like your staffs... they are complicate to handle they won't accept you so easily'you need tobe patient till they accept us.... can you?

Anything for you dear'

Saying that he holds her palms which she is placing in the sand and making some designs with her forefinger ..and placed a slight kiss on them

Geet we can...we can make this possible just relax..

Saying that he is about to kiss her hands once again but before that a little boy came with tin in his shoulders and shown a paper cone in between maan's lips and geet's hand and said some thing in tamil...

Anna sundal'he is not clear about what he is speaking he don't don't know tamil geet who lift her head from his shoulders and turned towards the boy and said vendam pa...

He knows from her reaction that she is rejecting that snack which he is trying to sell to them'

But the little boy speak some thing blah blah with geet... actually like her to which geet is also replying he didn't understand any bit of there conversation so stare them blankly...

he wonders from both of their talk that all tamilians will speak like this blah blah like geet...like this boy... because he remembers most of his conversation with geet is only a half way communication he is used to listen a lot then speaking with her...

she went on with the same blah blah for some time with that kid and turned towards maan and ask him

Give me your purse maan

Why?

Don't ask question... give me saying that she just put her hands in his pocket and take that with out his permission and give some 100bugs to that boy

He is in reply said thanks akka(di).. and left

What is this I thought you going to buy that dal like thing but you gave him money that too 100 bugs and didn't buy any thing'

Mom he is a poor kid... he said his mom is in hospital and need some money for her medicines so I gave him money

But geet he might have been lied to you to get money

I don't think he is lying and she again rest her head on his shoulders

This kind nature of geet is the one for which make him love her she is very kind and innocent and came to delhi for her project last year where maan met geet in one presentation and fell in love with her that time he didn't know that she is a tamilian and he needs to convince the entire tamil gang of her family members for there marriage

He knows its not easy with out knowing language with out knowing any thing about there life and culture its difficult to convince them for his marriage it's a difficult task for him but as he said early any thing for geet is possible he will ready to convince whole world and bear any tortures just because for her'

Morning 8 at egmore railway station..

Geet came in her white saree which is covering most of her beauty expect some part of her hands and the lime colored hips he mesmerized in her beauty she came in auto as she ordered he came very earlier there and waiting for her nearly half an hour in that crowd rushy busy station which he hates he hats that crowd he hates Chennai'

Where it's like an alien place to him where all speaking different language which he can't understand and all are looking weird for him' different people different language unknown land irritates him so much'when he came here he hates this place from the day one he landed but he loves geet any thing for her is possible for him..

She came running to him after she came out of her auto he glares at her and checks his watch in an indication for her to tell you are late'

Sorry maan I stuck in traffic'

You asked me to came early before half hour the train timing and you are coming late'

I told na I stuck in traffic and by the way train didn't come right..

But what about me am waiting for you here for nearly an hour and why you choose train why can't we go in flight to Madurai I hate this crowd here... I hate train..

Maan don't be silly I already told you it's the easiest and the possible way to reach my village and going in flight is not so most appreciable in my family we always prefer train as the most possible and safety way of transportation

safety he stress the word and said..is it so ? did you see that Bord..

He pointed towards the bord in the station stating to be aware of luggage and biscuits thief..

Maan don't be silly it wont happen offten.. its kept just for awareness'

Ok come soon we need get in to our train..

Saying that she dragged him to the train and he placed his and her heavy baggage under there reserved seats in AC compartment at least he gets AC compartment in that train...

Madurai is the city which is away from Chennai it takes 8 hours travel from Chennai to Madurai in train from there they should catch the bus and it will take maximum 4-5 hours to reach geet's village this is the knowledge he get from geet where he also tries to search that location of her village in google maps but he didn't find it properly he didn't remember the name of the village as it's a tongue twister name for him he is just comfortable by naming it as geets native or village' where her entire family lives'

He is amazed with the natural beauty when the train starts move for some distance he can only see the city atmosphere he is used to that metro city culture as he is from delhi he didn't find more difficulty as chennai is same as delhi other than language and toung twister tamil names of the places but when train started to move he found farms lakes tress mountains and so on...

he is used to travel all over the world and seen more beautiful places but he feels difference difference and loves this travel and beauty of that place its like a heaven to him to see those things with geet..

he wonders its this place is beautiful or he is seeing them along with geet makes it beautiful then it was... yeah if he came here for business meeting or some other things he might have not found more difference in that place but being with geet alone in train making his travel more beautiful and perfect for him'

Where after her conversation in phone over with her parents she turned towards him

after a deep breath she continued..

finally I told them that am coming with my non-tamilan friend that they didn't object

Hmm..

But I don't know how they will going to react if I tell them that I want to marry him'

Ok then don't tell them we will elope..he said that to tease her..

Maan please be serious.. its not funny anymore here convincing my appa(dad) is more important'

That 's it he knows very well now she is not going to stop her bluffer she is telling about each and every one of her family to him from the day one they meet till now'

Now he can recite each and every words from her mouth about all her family members but yet she is nervous and keep on explaining about there nature to him and advice for him to behave properly towards each and every one in her family'

She wants every one to be convinced for her marriage

After she starts her bluffer maan didn't hear any thing and started to think about his new task from now on..

#He hates Chennai... but what about Madurai he will like it definitely not he confirms when one hates the metro city which is different form his own how can he love the city which not at all a metro and a alien language tamil for him'

If he can't love that city then what about the people over there' will they accept a non-tamilian an north Indian as there son in la will they accept me..how am going to do this? how am going to manage this?'

that to with out understanding there language'#

He said any thing for geet is possible for him now to cope up with that people will make them understand about him about his love is possible he wonders..

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Precap::maan's worst bus travel with strangers..

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Part 2


Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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first of all akka



super title

title ah padicha odanae sirika aarabichtaen



dont worry maan ..if geet's family throws u out of their village , come to my home at madurai

u r always welcome 😳

Edited by niticool - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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why this kolaveri ?? 😆 super title

madurai ...vanga sir vaanga

madurai nagaram thangalai anbudan varaveerkiradhu 😳

maan if possible pls come to my home once 😆

cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: niticool

first of all akka



super title


title ah padicha odanae sirika aarabichtaen



dont worry maan ..if geet's family throws u out of their village , come to my home at madurai

u r always welcome 😳



ama la...don't worry if geet's family throws him out i will bring him to chennai..
😍😍😍

inda tittle yen choose pannen na... naama kolaverila irukom la maan ah TN kuptu vara ada nenachu dhan tittle vachen..😆😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarkh26

why this kolaveri ?? 😆 super title


madurai ...vanga sir vaanga

madurai nagaram thangalai anbudan varaveerkiradhu 😳

maan if possible pls come to my home once 😆

cont. soon


sure naan maan ku adress koduthu anupuren..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishha


sure naan maan ku adress koduthu anupuren..



two souls eagerly waiting for


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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW Nisha , Awesome Title.👍🏼

Good stat ,loved the first update👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: krithikas

WOW Nisha , Awesome Title.👍🏼


Good stat ,loved the first update👏


hey krithi thanks a lot i didn't expect you here...😃
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