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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1

Part 2


At last his destination came geet's native where her family lives

finally it came he took a relief breath while getting down..

it's the worst travel he ever had

he thinks about the way travel starts...

Immediately after he settled next to geet one old women who is almost 50 came and ask him to get up which he didn't understand but latter geet explained him to that she is requesting him to get up as there are no seat for her and grand son 5year old...

so shes is asking him to get up and leave his seat for them...

her voice didn't seems to be requesting for him its more than ordering and commending but as geet said its request he believed and left his seat next to geet and stand for half an hour nearly where at last he too got seat near a man who is sleeping by resting his head on the window'

after he seated in the seat which is back to the geet's that old commending lady who seems to be very gigantic and not able to fit in to seat properly next to geet took his grandson who is sitting on her lap and give it to maan first he thinks she is asking him to hold that kid for a while but latter he finds out she is asked him to keep that 5 year old devil with him' and not in a mood to get him back to her as she is in sound sleep...

He is mostly like a little devil who is doing one or other thing with the fellow passenger and its irritating him to the core and each and every time maan apologized to them for that devils action...

once the aunty standing near by him gave him a terrific glare to him as the devil pulled the purse which she is holding...

where at last of the mission that devil took his mobile from maan's pocket with out his permission and started playing games' maan usually don't like some one touching his stuffs but this devil is not listening to him and he can't do any thing other than staring at him..

After that strange family of the devil get down maan felt relaxed and try to shift to the seat next to geet but unfortunately another women who is standing get that seat immediately before him' he fed up with that and gave a glaring look to geet who is smiling at his reaction when that lady sits beside her..

And also the man next to him is also irritating him by shifting his head from the widow and slide that to maan's shoulder he can't do any thing other then shifting his head often to the other side where he is again and again slipping and resting his heads to his shoulders..

which makes geet laugh.. the worst travel he ever had with these almost strangers who all irritating him to the core and the bus it self is a irritating stuff for him with its famous Tamil songs playing he can't even understood the language and he is not in the mood to enjoy the music..

may be if he is next to geet through out this travel he may have listen to that songs and may be it will turn to the best song he had ever heard...But not now..

After getting down he gave a relaxed sigh that at last that strange journey ends'.

But he don't know that there is even more strange thing he is going to face in life form now on..

After getting down from bus she is started her chit chatting with the lady and family who is standing in the bus stand as if she don't know maan she is maintaining distance and not even had a gaze at him through out while she is speaking with them..

he wants to get close to her and hold her close after that tragic travel of 4 hours of not being next to he but she is avoiding him not even looking at him its makes him frustrated and moves close to her to hold her where he is about to reach her all of a sudden one black stick like creature came in between him and her'

Where he is facing back to maan so he can't identify who he is and he also sure geet knows him very well she is taking to that creature for a long while and at last she turns to him when the bus came and the family to whom she is talking till now is left after that she come towards him with that creature..

Where after that creature turns he can figure out that he has seen him in that album which geet shows to him... he is geet's distance relative and working in her farm by doing some gardening and house hold works he is also one of the family her member but not so important one'

Maan' geet waved her hand while walking towards him he is fuming under his berth

now why the hell she is smiling to me as he is not happy with her action after they get down from the bus'

Isaki anna(brother) this is maan my friend'

Hallow is this easki..

From him action and little English which is not in a proper way but its ok for maan to understand that he is introducing him self so he extend his hands for hand shake with that creature but when that creature hold his hand with his two hands and shake more than usual with his broad smile which shows all his teeth... which alone in white in his entire body and its seems very contrasting and funny for maan...

He wonders what kind of creature is this after he leave his hands but as geet said that he is one of the relative he didn't want to comment any thing about him and shed his usual stern smile to that iski or esaki or isaki what ever he is not comfortable with that creature name...

Where geet is speaking some thing to him in tamil which maan didn't understand a single word and remain silent till they finish... after that isaki went to take the car which is parked under the tree near one shop where as maan and geet standing in the corner of the road and waiting for the car...'

Geet what the hell is this why you making so much distance now'saying that he try to hold her hands

Where she pushed his hands with a tap and said

maan don't come close... in a husky voice..

What the hell is this geet--- he cut off as the car approached them

Iskai 's car the old ambastor came before them they get in to the car back seat from when they get in only isaki and geet speaking that too in tamil' he waits for them to stop but it went non stop he is get irritated at certain time as they keep on talking and worried if he didn't get time to speak with geet now then he wont get any time in her home so he fumes at them..

After some time he gets angry with there chit chat and shouted'

can you both please stop this... I didn't understand any thing and I feel very lonely here'

Maan she showed him a angry glare and after isaki asked some thing she turns to him to explain some thing may be she will be giving him some stories for maan is being anger and turned towards maan and said'

What 's your problem now..

Why the hell you didn't understand that I don't understand what you people speaking..... and what is this? he pointed his hands to indicate the distance where she is sitting in the one corner of the back seat where he is in the other end why this much distance between you and me?

she took a deep berth and in a almost whisper she said..

Maan ok let me clear this'

You should have to follow some rules till we are here

1. don't come near me till we are here..

2. don't try to understand what others speaking..

But geet-- she cut off him with a hand and continue counting the rule number with her hands..

3.don't' argue

why?--

4 .don't ask more questions..

he just shrug as he is not able to understand and gave her an frustrated look

5. don't get frustrate and irritate soon

geet--- she cuts off him with her another rule

6.don't shout its not your KC

he glares at her..

7.please maintain a smile always..

but how can---

8.obey what ever i says till we are here.

he rubbed his temple in tension

9.wait for my approval before speaking or doing any thing..

he glares simply out side the car as not in mood to see her..

rule10.please don't stop loving me..

He smiled at her last rule and turned towards her

I like the last rule a lot.. with a smile

But you have to follow all those rule till we convince them...

maan please i know its hard for you to understand what all speaking but i can't explaing every thing which is not important but i promise you this...I will try to explain some thing in between when its necessary or important to you and us... so till that don't ask question...

geet understand...you know its really irritating am feeling like am in an aliens place i don't understand any thing here...

maan please for me... she said this with a much pleading expressions as baby

he didn't say any thing and stares out of the window..

Saying that's she just slide her hands in the seat to hold his and also she make sure as its not visible to the isaki in his rear mirror who is driving... clasped his hand and hold it tightly which he needed now...he just surprised by her action and blankly stares at her now he got his energy back to fight for his love.--for her-- for this hold--

he is now ready to accept all the worst things for her..

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Precap::: a rough introduction about geet family members..

part 3

Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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srart is lov\ely do next soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the update...
waiting to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh god!i thiink geet's family s just like gangster types..!
maan u hv to work really hard..!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Omg!it was really funny..bechara maan nt undrstandng any thng and remaind as silent watcher..i just lovd bus scene..
Waitng 4 maan's introductn with geet's family...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nisha atlast u started this concept remaining i will pm u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2
oh boy Maan will never forget this trip in his life...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ayyo maan romba pavam 😆

tamilnadu na ipadi than irukum nu maan ku theriyama pochu 😆

precap is interesting

cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update dear...
loved it...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome
loved it
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

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