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Posted: 13 years ago
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Saying that's she just slide her hands in the seat to hold his and also she make sure as its not visible to the isaki in his rear mirror who is driving... clasped his hand and hold it tightly which he needed now...he just surprised by her action and blankly stares at her now he got his energy back to fight for his love.--for her-- for this hold--

PART 3

At last the destination comes the place where he has to get down geet's house,maan is very excited to see all his in-laws...

where he already know about all there in that house through geet's bak bak and some old family album which she showed to him so he is feels comfortable and eagerly waiting to meet all characters there in that house...
Its a big house in that village till now he has seen more huts and building with single floor and all are small small buildings where as in the center of the village is where his in-laws house situated...

Its the only some what heights building he found in that village from the view of the house he understood they are the prestigious family living in that village for more than 100 years but it seems to be the very traditional old house...
as an architect and MD of construction company he will able to estimate the value and the age of that buildings the construction work done in that house very traditional and amazing..

he wonders the beauty and the technical work done in that buildings for a while and he turns to ask geet some thing but he shuts remembering her rule book...(4.don't ask questions?)

After a while he found some well build man coming in front of them he seemed to be middle aged man and geet is very excited to see him she jumps in excitement and went near him and hugs him and he kissed her in her forehead...

some one feels very jealous here seeing that
#from when we get down she didn't allow to touch her but now she is hugging some one in front of me...I will teach her a lesson for this...#

maan... this is my grand pa..
she introduced that man to maan..

grand pa? he questioned
#he really don't seems like a grand pa for this 24 years girl what is going on in front of my eyes.. am i day dreaming .#.
he rubbed his eyes for a clear view and bend slightly near geet ears and murmur
That maan is well build with black hairs and black mustache and
geet Is he is really your grand pa?

maan i am telling na... he is my grand pa...
she fumes at him while telling this..

but he seems to be very young... he utter those words just like that because when he seen in the album he didn't found this man either... geet introduce one old man actually very old man in there traditional dress and white hairs as grand pa...but now who is he...he questioned...

maan come out of his thoughts when that maan introduced himself to him hi Mr.maan khurana am ammaiappan...

now he understood he not geet's direct grand pa but her grand pa's brother...

so he is not the one i seen in your family album right
..he asked..

maan how many times i told you my grand father died and this is his brother and he is my grand pa too... you might have not seem him in that album because i didn't see my grand pa either...


but you showed a old man as your grand pa and he looks too young now..

maan stop blabbering...he is only that old man you can't see he dyed his hair and mustache..

Very good you can't even remember the face of a single member in my family then how can you able to handle all...
geet stop it am little confused with his black hair and mustache but i can able to identify others..

what ever lets come inside we need to meet others...
while going inside he felt the same silent in KM a he and dadi alone there in KM it will always remain silent... he some what feel at home while entering...

where as he is eagerly waiting to meet geet's dadi i mean her direct dadi ma her fathers mother a window old man he has a little hope that she will be like his cute sweet heart dadi... and she will be easy to handle...

But the sight in front of him was..an old lady with a huge bamboo stick in her hand and beating one creature maan felt sad for that creature which is shouting and running in the house... when that creature came near them he found out that its that same isaki anna driver servant relative all in all... is shouting and running to save his life from that old lady...

her features are same like dadi maa... who seems very young and energetic at her age with her white saree and the white horizontal bindi in her forehead shows clearly she is geet's dadi,,,,

But why she is beating this creature like this he didn't understand but at the same time he cant pose questions too how can he clear his doubts with out asking questions he wonders...

where as in a mean while that dadi shouted and beat that relative and scolding him which as usual an alien language for maan...
that creature came behind maan and hide him self to get escape from dadi's beating..
geet try to console dadi by holding her stick its not a simple stick but it seems like a long lengthy thick bamboo stick if some one beats heavily it will definitely hurt...

while dadi trying to hurt that isaki some more beats fall on maan shoulders and arms then he realized how it feels when that stick fell on him...

Ouch!!! he shouted and rubbed his arms with his other palm..
then only geet remembers maan beside her and immediately introduced him to her...

dadi idu maan.... enoda friend

maan only understood the words dadi maan and friend and he understood that she is introducing him to her...

vanga she said simply with a node of her head in a vertical way once...
he some what convinced that she is welcoming him but the reaction in her face clearly shows that she didn't like him...

while going back she gave a deadly glare to isaki who is behind maan its very clear for maan its not only for the man behind him but also for him...

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Precap::: more characters are going to be introduced to maan..
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part 4


sorry for some grammatical and spelling mistakes..😃

put your valuable comments and suggest some characters as geet's family members...

I didn't edit this and also i don't get any idea before typing this i just put down what came in to my mind... 😃


so give your feed back is this going good or need some change...
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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Awesme part dear..bechara maan fully confusd with the introductn of family and very surprsd to find them young than actually he was said..many cnfusns bt cant questn geet accordng to rule...lol..waitng 4 next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
wow...awesome ss 😳
loved it...very funny😆
plz continue soon...😃
sorry like button is not working...
Edited by anisha_maaneet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
part 3
nice part...
aate hi Maan ko mila pitaayi...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ha ha ha super pati
romba nalla iruthatu
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
oh god!maan and me still in confusion..!
wat s going on in geet's house...
i think maan ahs to work hard..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anisha_maaneet

wow...awesome ss 😳

loved it...very funny😆
plz continue soon...😃
sorry like button is not working...


Its ok... but in between you really liked it..😃😃
thank you..😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ambbiha

ha ha ha super pati

romba nalla iruthatu


VAANAKAM
you too tamil OMG i didn't know that yet...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 3
nice part...
aate hi Maan ko mila pitaayi...
cont soon dear...


yeah poor maan.😛..
pata nahi aagae kya hoga..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

oh god!maan and me still in confusion..!

wat s going on in geet's house...
i think maan ahs to work hard..


me too remain in that same confusion now...
maan is in danger..😆

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