Why this kolaveri di??$$maaneet(part 4)S$$ - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: maneetlover1

Awesme part dear..bechara maan fully confusd with the introductn of family and very surprsd to find them young than actually he was said..many cnfusns bt cant questn geet accordng to rule...lol..waitng 4 next part


yeah poor maan in between these confusions he needs that rule book to refer rule number..😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh nishu..yennala sirippa adakkave mudiyalappa..
vayiru vazhikkudhu..
maan paavam pa..
intha koduma paduthura..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: valli22

oh nishu..yennala sirippa adakkave mudiyalappa..
vayiru vazhikkudhu..
maan paavam pa..
intha koduma paduthura..😆


idu just chumma jujubi...

main picture inum bhaki iruku la...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
ha ha

super one


what about an over possesive brother for geet , geet's mama , chithappa , periyappa , athimber n all .
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n a naattamai so that maan can tell him " oiye naattamai theerpa mathi sollu " lol 😆🤣


cont. soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
amazing
loved it
poor maan so confused
but cant question her caz of her rules 😆
cont soon dear
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
awesome , wonderful , fantastic update
poor maaan got beatings from paati the first day😆

hey niti told me that u needed sum help regarding the family members

she had already given u some

how about athai paiyan and mama paiyan who are fighting to marry geet😆

maan will get two more competition😆


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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: sarkh26

awesome , wonderful , fantastic update

poor maaan got beatings from paati the first day😆

hey niti told me that u needed sum help regarding the family members

she had already given u some

how about athai paiyan and mama paiyan who are fighting to marry geet😆

maan will get two more competition😆



yeah definitely competition is there for maan
😆

thank you both for your suggestions😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
poor maan...how will he handle all...😆

continue soon...

thnx for PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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PART 3
PART 4

Thank you for all your support...🤗


while going back she gave a deadly glare to isaki who is behind maan its very clear for maan its not only for the man behind him but also for him...

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Maan is in side his room which is allotted for him in that house its very difficult for him to stay in that room which is didn't have any AC and only one window which is half open like that main entrance and the room seems to be more old and dusty when he switch on the fan he only gets some dust and the fan is moving like as if a child which just started to walk...

He don't like to stay there that too for nearly 1 month he just calculated and kept as one month is needed to convince geet's parents but he don't know that its a difficult task which may take even more than that...

while thinking some one came behind him and hugged him from the touch he knows its geet who has the right to hug him but he is shocked by her action its her whom put rule not to touch but now she itself coming and hugging him..he can't believe but at her sudden touch make him smile...for which he is longing for the hours...

He held her hands and pushed her away from him making fake angry face....what is this geet ? you put rules first and now you itself not following that...

she again hugged him but this time not in behind him but front...maan keep quiet i just want to hug you now i don't know after this when we will get some private time...

why now?

because no one is in house expect patti(dadi) and (grand pa) thata every one gone to the attend marriage which is happening in the next town and if all came back we will hardly get time to spend together...
saying that she hugged him more tighter..

Hmmm...saying that he can't control him self more so hugged her back

and the rules are only for you not for me, you understood... she looked in to his face and told..i can touch you ...only you can't ok..

hmm...so miss geeta is ready to break the rules..for her love..Mr.maan singh kurana.. he said with pride..

Am not breaking any rules Mr.Khurana that rules is not meant for me its specially designed for you..

Is it so?...But if you hugged me like this for some more time i can't able to follow those rules geet.. he almost said in a mischievous tone..

maan she hit him playfully on his chest and said...
please don't disturb me let me enjoy this moment for some time...she closed her eyes for a while and remain there...

Geet your patti after he said.. immediately she parted from the hug and straighten herself and checked the door its remain close...

she turned and found a mischievous smile in his lips and found he is playing prank..Maan you...you saying that she hits him badly with her hands...

Geet.... saying that he again hugged her
You know geet i was longing to be near you for the past few hours..

Me too.. she said as a whisper while closing her eyes..

Maan i know its going to tough for you...please bear for me...

any thing for you geet...but just tell me one thing that why you are so frighten for your parents as if they are some gangster and don's... They are the normal people.. they will accept me.. so don't worry...

You don't understand maan they are very conservative they don't allow even love marriages that too an north Indian its very tough to convince them...

Geet i think you are over reacting...


Did you seen that the glare patti gave to you...she can't even accept you as my friend and am coming along with you all alone from delhi then think about the marriage proposals...

I can still remember the glare and also her beatings... saying that he just rubbed his arms as if its paining till now..

she smiled at his little gesture and said..
this and all very small things Mr.Khurana you have to face even more to get geet's hand..

Geet dare you threat me like this...

am not threatening you...Its not easy to get Miss..geeta...

If its too tough then i think i should move on...there are more Pretty girls outside waiting for there dreamy prince charming maan...

she made a pout and parted from him showing her back folding her arms across her chest..

he hugged her from back and said in her ears..
But i am ready to fight with god even to get my misty back..

she smiled and adjust her self in his embrace

maan you can't able to spend even one night with out AC's right and this room is not more comfortable then how you going to manage...Can I make some other arrangements?
she questioned him with a doubtful face..

Geet its not that much bad.. yeah there is no AC and comfort but yet Its chill here see those windows its brings very chill air inside and makes this room chill...and those view from the window is awesome there is no air,noise pollution like Delhi and no traffic its pleasant to see that greenish sight every where..

he made small gestures to make her feel he is telling the truth..But she didn't forget to notice his eyes which is telling truth to her.. he is not used to these situation she knows that very well yet he is telling lies to make her feel good...

Maan...Her eyes are filled now

Geet its and all nothing if you are near me then am ready to live even in desert, Antarctica and even in African forest with wild animals... well any ways your house is not less dangerous that...he smiled for the funny comment he made. But i will try to adjust...

she again hit him playfully for his mischievous words..

He cupped her face and said

Any thing for you geet...Any thing.
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PRECAP::: same previous precap...
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part 5

Sorry for silly mistakes if any thing is there you can also pin point that iam ready to correct my self...

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Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
i love ur kolaveri ...👍🏼

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