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Abgina

@crazydevil87

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#381

first of all thank u sooo much di for using awarapan banjarapan its my all tym favorite song n dis update is double d tyms special to me due to d song...
now dadima ko geet mein poonam ki jhalak dikhi n now she has started dreaming bout maan n geet gud kahin shuruat hui...
luved d way dadima explained to meera d changes in maan n d life partner his changed self requires now...fabulously written di...
m sooo loving dadima di d way she nicely explained maan d reasons she wants a life partner in maan's life was really touching...
n every bit of d song sequence was really touching n moving di...
i felt both dadima's n maan's pain while reading...u r amazing at narrating di...
fabulous use of a beautiful n intense song...luved d whole update to d core di...thnks again...
luvya loadzzz...u r fab...

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evasumi

@evasumi

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#382

Hey Ritz..

I Just read all the updates today..

And really loved the way you started the story describing Geet and Rahul as free birds and and top of that very bold and also at the same time traditional who went to attend the Janmashthami puja and also participated with her devotional songs and dancing.. so I totaly loved that part of Geet and Rahul which told me so much about their characters.

Her relation with her dad and mom her and her brother at the same time her daring and her dealing with elders and children and her devotional

Very well done..

Oh yes absolutely loved Maan's entry... my mind went back to his treadmark entry in Geet.. loved the way he barked orders and made every one tremble in the office.. Ruthless businessman.. and also at the same time a man whose nights are lonely and painful.. a lonely man who misses his fiance and may be feels responsible for her death..

Loved dadima with Meera and Dev..

And of course love little vicky the beloved nephew of Maan... the way Vicky said my name is given by my bade pa.. also shows his bond with his uncle.. tauji...

Very good start of the story and already loving it.

Reading it takes you to so many plots of the various shows and feels like the characters have come alive from various shows and very well put together...

Ok dear lady waiting for the next chapter... The proposal.. hmmm u r taking story fast means you know your destination...

All the best for the new story..

Edited by evasumi - 13 years ago

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Mishti13

@Mishti13

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#383

very well written

awesome update

cont. soon

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desikalakaar

@desikalakaar

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#384

I think I'm beginning to understand what happened in the past...

Continue soon!

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#385

wow...beautiful...
dadi me jo baat ki hai 100% sahi hai...
kash maan maan jaye...
its lovely...i loved it...
plz jaldi jaldi update karo na...

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awesomepooja

@awesomepooja

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#386

Thank u di.
Will b waiting.
Senti but Mind blowing update.

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shristi1

@shristi1

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#387

Amazing part.

Feeling sad 4 maan n his loss.

Update soon.

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#388

Hi Ritzy sorry for the delay in reply but just read both the 3nd & 3rd parts of Vivah.

What struck me and amazed me the most was the total contradiction of the Geet in the first part & Geet in the second part. The two natures were a total contrast to each other but having both these sides of nature in one person just makes that person oh so very interesting

For the kind of person that Maan has become now Geet will work as the perfect healing antidote cause she herself seems to be such a challenge (I think this is how you visualized it)

I loved the talk between Maan and Daadi, the speech you wrote for Daadi was perfect, it conveyed everything that needed to said to someone in Maan's present state of mind, I was very impressed with how you handled that scene.

And I loved how you showed Maan's turmoil after his talk with Daadi, looks like Daadi knows her grandson very well.

What I'm waiting for most is the meeting between Maan & Geet, so eager to see how it's gonna be 😉

I'm really enjoying this one, so far loved all the characters (Vicky sounds so cute)

Please update soon, I'm waiting eagerly 😛

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#389

dadimas advice was superb. that is the fact of life. I too have a brother who doesnt want to get married hope someone like dadi make him understand as we all failed. loved the update.