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AvNeil123

@AvNeil123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#371

wow ritzy...the concept is mind blowing...

am kinda behind on d updates but il catch up today...

i totally love the concept tho 😃

am gna be dreaming about ur ff nw 😍

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HiddenTruths

@HiddenTruths

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#372

Loved it 👏 every word is fab 👏

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Papon Tabassum

@paponecon

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#373

OMG one of my most most favourite song...its open air background music...whenever i listen it aise ek khalipan mehsoos hoti hain...perfect for maans situation but no one can live in this hell so long...

Kahan Kise Ke Liye Hai Mumkin

Sab Ke Liye Ek Sa Hona

Thoda Sa Dil Mera Bura Hai

Thoda Bhala Hai Seene Mein

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Cynthia

@CiaMaaneet

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Lvly update! 😊 Aww! 😲 Felt vry emotional listening 2 Dadi.. Vry true, its hard 2 stay lonely jst 4 ur own self 😭 Maan gettng ready 2 move on... Yippeee 😳 OMG! Nxt update mein Proposal... 😃 Cant w8 dear.. Update soon! 😉

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LuvScooby

@LuvScooby

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#375

I am so glad that you acknowledged my comment. I can definitely understand that as a writer you have to write the dialogs the way you seem fit to help your story move along. I will manage the Hinglish that your write, it will improve my hindi, MAYBE 😳

Now coming to the update, I loved the heart to heart convo b/w Maan and Dadi, I like that Dadi is so sensible without being pushy. Her logical explanation about a need for partner to lead a satisfied life struck a cord with me, I really loved reading that part.

Waiting for Maaneet to meet.

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KawaiiGeet

@kawaii_geet

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#376

diii thank u sooo much for such a lovely update
dadima is so so so ryt...
u can't live for urself forever!!!
n maan's condition...u made me cry di...😭
so much pain burried in him...
me wondering how many nyts he wud have spent like that..
crying n breaking within..unable to say n e thing to n e one!!!!
it hurts sooo much...hiding that vulnerable self
within...it suffocates like hell...
they say na u can run away from n e thing and n e one
but U CAN'T RUN AWAY FROM URSELF!!!!😭

and the song...ahhh couldn't think n e thing better!!!!!!
maan's condition...heartbreaking!!!!
now waiting for the proposal!!!!!!!
wanna see how geet adjusts herself in his life and how he opens his heart
one thing i can say for sure tht its gonna hurt geet a lottt tooo

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sehrish79

@sehrish79

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#377

Woww excellent update
Loved it to the core ritzy
Love u mwahhh xxx
Waiting to read more about maan and poonam
It's getting very very exciting
I want to tell one thing
I am missing your ff "till death do us apart" :'((
Beautiful written dear
Plz plz continue soon
Love ya xxx