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Posted: 13 years ago
such a cute update glad you are continuing with this
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww awesome update
mindblowing precap
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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago



Epilogue

"Is he going to come or what?" Geet asked impatiently.

"Hey Geet, why are you sooo impatient! Have some patience, remember, it's the key" Josh giggled off her head.

Nikki raced down mumbling "he's coming in his black BMW" her eyes were shining boring onto Geet's.

Priya grimaced and said "how dreamy!"

"It is" Nikki argued.

Geet felt her heart thudding fast.

Priya: Let's open the door for the king!

Geet (confused): King?

Nikki (giggling): The King of Geet's Dream

Geet scowled.

Priya (opening the door ajar): Hey Maan

Maan (trying to peep inside): Hey Priya, where's Geet?

Priya (teasing mode): Gosh, am I so bad?

Maan (awkwardly/blushing): Oh no

Nikki (popping outside): So you got all of us our tickets for the movies!

Maan (horrified): What! [he cried]

Josh appeared: eh, what's so surprising, we are NOT going to leave Geet alone (shocked)

Maan (terrified with the thought): Look, 'ere, I...

Priya, Nikki and Josh burst laughing at Maan clutching their sides.

Priya (through her fit): you went for it! Little toy

Maan (relieved): thank god!

Nikki: gosh, only Geet is going with you!

Maan (teasing/revenging): yeah, even I want someone decent, not monkeys!

Priya (grinning): take her and kept her well lock up or I'll ram your nose! (Warning)

Maan (attitude): Challenging MSK

Nikki: Yup, for Geet

Maan (broke a smile): Funny! I like it!

Josh (pushing nervous Geet outside and closing the door): Byeee!

In Maan's Car

Maan (teasing): Geet you got me terrified!

Geet (shocked): Me!

Maan: Yep, Trio's joke was nasty, I was freaking! Gosh

Geet blushed.

Maan: So finished your homework (teasing)

Geet (thinking): Silly, will he compliment me on my dress or what! all this for nothing (grumbled)

Maan: Geet! I asked you something!

Geet (coming back in reality): Oh yeah, Josh helped me! And you didn't! (teasingly)

Maan (pretending to be hurt): Because I wanted movies for us! Privacy too!

Geet flushed.

Maan (all flirty): Good girl, green suits you, yep, it does!

Geet flushed more red!

Maan (teasing): You can get an award in going tomato!

Geet smacked him on the arm and mouthed: Drive!

@Movies

Geet was watching the show.

Geet thought: very romantic

Suddenly...

BOOO

She got scared.

She screamed: AHHH!!!! MAAAN!!!!!

Other girls and women, children screamed an unexpected ghost! The heroine was a ghost it was unexpected!

Geet closed her eyes terrified from the sudden shock. She was sweating. She grabbed Maan's arm.

Maan thought: I thought she was having a heart attack! She was making me deaf with her sudden shriek! But I like it! She's sweating, she's scared and she grabbed my arm.

Maan leaned against his chair to peep at Geet. Geet felt her heart thudding fast.

Geet thinking: He's going to...

Maan (same time): Geet are you alright!

Geet heart sank and thought: stupid.

She nodded.

After movie finished.

Maan (thinking): I have to do it! Yes, I have to!

Geet (all dreamy): wasn't the hero all nice, handsome, dead gorgeous, good-looking, cool, awesome, amazing, fantastic

Maan was losing his temper. Geet was feeling all happy inside.

Maan (snarling): stop praising him! he was DUMB (shouting)

Geet was shocked with Maan's behaviour. Maan stormed and went into his car. Geet followed.

Maan: sorry!

Geet: it's okay! you're used to listen to only your praises

Maan felt awkward.

Geet tired: is he going to say it or what!

@Geet's house patio

Geet: Bye Maan

Maan: Bye we did have a nice time (winking)

Geet blushed but added: yeah its sad that some boys take so much time!

She left!

Maan was shocked! He grinned! He finally understood.

@College, in class

Geet arrived. No girls was inside. Just Maan and his gang.

She went to dump her bag under her chair; she sat at the last seat, next to the wall, when she felt the gang closing and locking the door. She turned and was shocked.

Geet: What the he

Maan started moving closer to her; hitting her against the wall.

Geet: Maan...are you insane

Maan (grinning): yup, ever since I saw you

Geet: what are you doing

Maan: what silly it's call ki...

Geet (shocked): no! and ur friends are here!

Maan (ordered): close ur eyes or else!

and closed the gap

Geet ran to Priya, Nikki and Josh red-faced!

Priya: Geet, r u okay?

Geet: Maan...he...he

Nikki: what?

Josh: how was the date!

Maan came around with his gang grinning.

Maan (to friends): hey gals, did geet tell u that we have become official couples! and we even ki...

AND THEY WERE SHOCKED!

Geet blushed running away.

Maan: shy girl!

Edited by music_girl - 11 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...
thanx for the update😊
nice date!!!!!!!!!!
men they don understand!!!!!!!!!!!!
atlast geet had to say!!!!!
omg he did it in front of his gang...
poor geet...
going red☺️
hey me first...
m happie dancing...
ll miss ma jock...😭
but ll be waiting for lovely ss😃
update soon
Edited by mayapari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor geet maan teasing her is cute great epilogue!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww frankie awesome mindblowing epi yar loved it a lot muahhh
Edited by sona-rai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it...
So finally they declared as official couples...
loved both their teasing session..
abt the new ss its strikingly terrific..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wonderful epilogue.
Geet is so eager to meet Maan for her first date, here her frens are teasing here.
Not enuf of teasing Geet, 'ey made Maan go thru a mini heart attack by saying that all of 'em coming out with Maan and Geet. Poor felo.
I like the theater scene, Geet was expecting a kiss from him but he didn't. When he wanted to kiss Geet was blabbering bout the hero 😆
Finally the kiss at classroom said it all. Maan teasing Geet was so cute.

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