Modern Cinderella Maaneet SS Last Part - Page 9

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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
wow Jasmine I loved your take on this story so Maan remembers her eyes
hmm... and i m sure he will clear his doubts very soon
continue soon darling can't wait for the next part
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
part 3
nice part...
Maan is trying to see through her...
her family is really too much...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
wowww loved it
so ketki n her daughters found out that geet is only cindrella n maan recognised her eyes wow so cute
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
lovely parts dear
plz do send me pm for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

Modern Cinderella Part 4


Geet thinks:Why is Rajkumarji looking at me like this?
Maan:Are you not Cinderella?
Geet's lips shiver.
She thinks:How did he doubt me?
MAAN:Tell me.
GEET:Ya...my pet name is Cinderella.But my real name is Geet.
MAAN:Are you not the one who danced with me at the party?
Geet shivers.
MAAN:Tell me.
Geet can't open her mouth.
MAAN:Please tell me.
GEET:What are you saying Kumarji?I'm your maid.How can i dance with you?
Maan looks at her eyes.
He thinks:I see the same love in her eyes.That day I had felt that i have seen Cinderella before.Maybe because she reminded me of Geet.Cinderella looks different from Geet.But why i feel that there is some resemblance...?
He is confused.
GEET:Please let me go Kumarji.
She runs.This reminds him of Cinderella running.
MAAN:Stop...please don't go.
Geet is stunned.She stands steady.Her body is shivering.Maan goes near her.
MAAN:You are my Cinderella.
Geet is shocked.
She thinks:How did he understand that?
GEET:Kumarji...but i'm your maid.
MAAN:Ya...but you only danced with me.
GEET:Kumarji...
MAAN:Please don't say that you are not my Cinderella.You can lie.But your eyes and gestures can't lie to me.Your image is stored in my heart.Each movement of your's is byheart for me.Because you are the first girl who touched my heart.It is in your eyes i saw true love for the first time.Now tell me the truth.Are you not my Cinderella?
Geet is too weak to lie.
Tears are falling down.She nodded.
He wipes her tears.
MAAN:Why did you hide yourself from me?Did you not understand that i love you?You thought that i'm like any other guy who cheats poor girls?
GEET:No Kumarji...i trust you completely.I know that you are a nice man.I love you from the bottom of my heart.
He smiles:You said you love me.That is more than enough for me.
GEET:But i'm just a maid.You deserve a better girl.
MAAN:I won't get a better girl..You are best girl for me.I saw lots of girls.But only in your eyes i could see true love for me.The other girls are just after my wealth.I was struggling hard to find where you were.
He holds her arms.
MAAN:I can't wait anymore to tell others that i have found my true love.
He takes her to the front room.
MAAN:Mom...dad...
Meenakshi and Purush come.
MAAN:I found my Cinderella.Geet is my Cinderella.
They ae shocked.
M:What are you saying Maan?Geet is Cinderella?
MAAN:Yes.This is the truth.Today itself i want to get engaged to her.I lost her once.I don't want to lose her again.

Ketki,her children and Raghupati come to the palace.Geet runs to them and hugs Raghupati.
GEET:Cinderella...i told you...nobody can snatch Maan from you.Because you both love each other sincerely.
Geet smiles.
Ketki:Please forgive us Geet.We tortured you a lot.
GEET:I'm not angry with anyone.
They smile.

Maan gives a grand green salwar kameez and ornaments to Geet.
GEET:What is this Kumarji?
MAAN:This is for my Cinderella.You must wear this for our engagement.
She smiles.

Geet wears the green salwar Kameez.She is unable to tie the chain around her neck.Suddenly somebody catches her chain.She is scared.She turns back.She is surprised to see Maan in a grand shervani.
MAAN:I will help you.
She is shy.He ties the chain around her neck.

They both exchange rings.Then a beautiful romantic song is played:

Thode bheege bheege se thode nam hai hum,
Kal se soye voye bhi to kam hai hum.
Dil ne kaisi harkat ki hai,
Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai,
Aakhiri baar mohabbat ki hai...{Kaminey}.

Maan and Geet dance together.They are lost in the love which is filled in each other's eyes.

Maan and Geet get married in a very grand way.

Night...
Geet wears a beautiful red saree and red stone ornaments.Maan can't take his eyes off her:You look gorgeous.I think you came out of a fairy tale to make my life as beautiful as a fairy tale.
Geet blushes.

Maan takes Geet to a beautiful boat.
GEET:Wow!Lovely..
She looks at the sea.Maan stands close to her romantically.

The End.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
so cute nice ending wished her family was punished
thank for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
wow... sooo cute ss...
loved it...
super ending...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
lovely update...👏👏👏👏

its finished...im feeling sad...😭😭😭😭

no prblm...others r dere...keep on going...😊😃😆😉😳

thank u fr d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
SO SWEET SS .
HAPPY ENDING
LOVE MAAN HE
FIND HIS CINDERELLA
FROM HER EYES.
LOVELY UPDATE
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
lovly ending

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