Modern Cinderella Maaneet SS Last Part

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Modern Cinderella Part 1

This is a short FF which has only 4 parts.I wrote this long ago 4 Yudhishter Rani.I replaced their names with Maan geet.So there mayb mistakes.plz 4give me


Dhatri is a pregnant lady who is dreaming about her future baby.Her husband Balram sees her reading the fairytale 'Cinderella'.
B:Dhatri...why are you reading Cinderella?
He chuckles.
D:Cinderella is my favourite story.I hope our's will be a daughter and she will be as beautiful as Cinderella.
B:Sure...our daughter will be beautiful.Because you are her mother.
She smiles:She should be named Geet.Because she will be the Queen of our house.But her pet name must be Cinderella.
B:Very nice names for our daughter.

A sweet baby girl is born for them.But unfortunately Dhatri dies after the delivery.Balram passes away in an accident.Balram's sister Ketki takes Geet with her.Ketki has two daughters-Chukti and Bindi.Ketki's eyes are on Geet's property.Though her name is Geet,she leads a life of a servant in Ketki's house.Only her grandmother Raghupati loves her.Geet goes to a palace to work as a maid.

Geet is always busy with her household work.After finishing chores,Geet goes to her dream land about meeting her Prince.
The oldest servant Hema cals Geet:Geet...come for cooking lunch...today the Prince Maan is coming back from US after completing his studies.
Geet is excited.She wants to meet him very badly.
Geet cooks delicious lunch for him.

Maan arrives.All are around him.Geet struggles hard to see him.But she is not able to see him.She feels sad.
Yudi eats lunch:What a tasty food?Who prepared this?
His mother Meenakshi:The youngest cook of the palace made lunch for you.
MAAN:Can i meet her?I want to thank her.
All are surprised as the prince wants to meet the servant.

Geet is sitting inside the kitchen.Hema:Geet...come...Prince wants to meet you.
Geet can't believe her ears:What?

Geet is taken to the dining room.She raises her eyes to see him.Her eyeballs are rolling on him.She thinks:Like the Prince of Fairytales he is so dashing.
MAAN:Hi...your good name?
GEET:Cinderella.
MAAN:What?
GEET:That is my pet name.My real name is Geet.
MAAN:You have two sweet names.Anyways..your food was very tasty.I'm eating tasty food after a long time.
Geet is flattered by his compliment.
GEET:Thank you so much...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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love the concept sounds interesting please continue thanks for the pm
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wowww loved it
so cute
geet wanted to meet him n somehow fate made them meet
waiting for more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful!!!!
Loveee the starting!!!
Continue soonnn!!
Thanxx for the pm.


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hi
the up is good
the intro is nice
plz cont soona nd pm me
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very cute...
loved the part dear...
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nice beginning!! cant wait to find out how they fall in love!!!!!!!!
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Jasmine love your fast paced stories...great start
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sooo sweet...😳😳😳😳
lovely concept...actually Cinderella is my favourite also...so anything based on dis is my favourite...😊😊😊😊😊😊
but im not getting hw cum geet in palace working as a cook?...
thank u fr giving us such a good story with superb concept...👏👏👏👏
thank u fr d pm...😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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so sweet love it
interesting concept
so excited about the further story
cont. soon
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