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PART 6




Meditation, something maan was expert in, through out the summer, there wasn't a single day when geet wouldn't leave him alone. Sometime he have this doubt, he perhaps shouldn't have started this conversation. He looked at her then Rano at the dinning table. Geet was so much like her mother. No difference. Actually lucky she wasn't like mr handa. He is pretty ugly!

Maan looked at sammer with questioning eye. He can guess now days as maan slowly have started to open up. "yes?" summer replied.
"I was wondering how can I leave a family member before they leave me?"
"you are so stupid!" Sam instantly replied.
"look, there is a difference between family and outsider. Like me, I would never leave my family, but I will defiantly change girlfriend. Family is special, and they are not to leave, because they will never leave you, but outsider they will. Like your orphanage. they gave you way to us" maan silent starred at him. He wasn't sure what this 5 years of high school will bring him, but surly its not going to effect him any how.

Maan observed geet for while then back to his food, he knew his way, nowadays if he is silent for few minute, Rano, dadi or geet defiantly will come and start her bak bak.

Maan slowly walked up along the long wooden stair, it looked bigger then normal and was taking him ages. Why there was storm of restlessness inside him? Maan sadly smiled and looked back at the living room, he was looking at geet for some reason, it was weird, all this year he didn't speak to her once and now , going to school by him self frighten him.

Next day, maan waited at the bus stop for the school bus with Sam. He left maan half way, to be with his GF.

"my sister is joining to." tony informed Sam. Looking at maan. Thinking at least first day they can be together to bring down the restlessness the first year was having.
"I think maan should go with moly, it will make easy for both of them."
Sam nodes.

moly was very sigh girl, not like geet or geets friend maan have met, or his class mate like maya.
She came across and stood there next to him, silently, quietly. Maan did not have friends, or have who refused to go to same school as maan. Specially after all those painful football game.

He sat next to her restlessly, then went to class restlessly. Mostly all new girls were eying him. He was one of the most handsome looking boy, and to be precise he loved that attention, boys hating him while girl loving him.

Later on that day, when it came to sport, mostly all boys was rather shocked and petrified while girls were falling head over hill.

Surprise enough maan was back home quick. And that shocked geet. "you are home on time?"
"so..."
"but you were always late when I was with you... Then why are you on time now?"
"because I wanted to!"
"no... Now I understand you used to do that only to irate me!"
"no..."
"yes you were!"
Geet angrily looked at him as he came in and out of the kitchen telling Rano and dadi something. Geet frustratingly came by, staring at him. You are such show off...
"yes?"
"what happen?" Rano wondered.
"mum look, he is early... When I was with him he was never early. Late & late..."
"well that's a good thing that maan is improving..."

Maan kept quit, staring from one to another. Looking at them how they all are talking about him. SAMs family thing was still in his mind, but then why he is so scared to open up? That's the question was buzzing in his head without limitation.

"I am going!" maan informed other, which again surprised Rano and geet. Usually he will be running around, doing something silly to grab there attention. Geet surprisingly looked at him with confusion, twisting her lips, first day in school and this much chance, god knows what will happen after 2 years...

Weeks have passed, then months, maan with such a demanding attitude, before he was desperate for attention but now, arrogant with attention. He surly was getting allot of attention.

One day geet along with simi and ridzy was walking by the high school. They knew well, it's only a year until there life will be completely devoted to this high school.
"I have noticed maan have changed so much through our the year"
Geet nodes, wondering how and why exactly.
"he talks allot now days!"
"yes but sometime scary. I know my sister have crash on him" simi replied.
"oh... So does my brother GF" readzy complained.

"yak!" geet retored back. "what's wrong with him?"
"I hare all the boys changes as they go to high school..." simi again added.
"and girls"... Ridzy went along. "more makeup!"

"anyway whatever... Let him be. It's good that he talks..."
"I guss so..."

...

Another year ran by, without a doubt maan was a complete changer. Sam have successfully changed from his clothing to deodorant.

Geet stood there stating at him, along with Rano. And dadi. "don't you think you have changed just a little too much!" maan again ignored geet like she don't exgiest. He came to Rano as usal, spoke to her before walking out.
"oy hello, I am talking to you..." maan didn't listen instead shut the door on his face.

"MOOOM..." geet screamed.

...
next- leap... :)
next part is on its way :)


Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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love the update
after such a long time maan has started to talk to geet & now again in not talking moods 😒
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like is nt working
ossum dear
i think sam leaves him
and geet ll be with him
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Geet in year 9 age 14
Maan in year 11 age 16 (last year)


During all this year many thing have changed, first it was a new maan with old aim. Attention, he loved attention, and surly all the girls were there to provide him with that.

(i will describe the whole last year of maan in details and surly there will be no long jump in years until I think I have explained enough for the future track... The real story began :D :))


Maan gently steps in to the collage. His black brown hair jailed back, white t-shirt with black trouser and shoe. For a 16 years old boy, he looked very older and mature. Maan lazily looked down, with his light brown eyes then at the teacher with a smile. A clear dimple visible.

Of course it was a rule, no teacher should or not allowed to have crush on there students but this mrs Ashley couldn't control her self. She is 27 years old Maths teacher an every time when maan walks in her heart beat seems to be on its highest.
"oh- maan, good morning..."
Mostly all student giggled. It was clearly visible how bad was miss ashley crash was on maan.
"good morning..." he simply replied. Walking along the chair which surly wasn't big enough for him. A blond girl at the back bench removed her bag to the side, making a space for him. A instant smile came on his face as mostly all the girls were doing that. Now the question was where to sit! Maan looked at moly, he was least bothered. She was a topper in the Maths department and she surly had no intention to capture this weird maan in her net. She looked up once then moved her bag to the spare seat so no one can seat.
Maan walked to her then deliberately questioned "may I?" a clear anger was visible on Molly's face. If she have the chance she would through the bag at his face.

"oh..."
"miss moly, I don't have all day. Please remove your bag!" the teacher managed to knock some brain in Molly's mind. All the girls cursed her from top to bottom. In anger killing her.

Molly was only counting second by second. Wondering when this lesson will finish. The bell couldn't even buzz properly when she stood up and rushed out.

...

"di... Di... Molly di.." geet was screaming across the hall. Molly stopped in half way. Hearing geet. "what happen? Geet worriedly asked her.
"that maan, I don't know what he thinks of him self, I just...uggg..." she picks her chandel up, "if I had the chance I would have slapped him with the chandel billions of time."
"per, what have he done?"
"same thing... How to irritate me. Just because I don't give him dam attention like those blond bitch."
Geet looked at her best friend cat, who was pure blond. They both looked at her embarrassingly.
"not all blond I mean. Those idiot girls in my Maths class"

"let it go..." cat comforts.
"
can you please help him to understand..." moly begged geet. "I am not interested in him. He broke up with me, I didn't..."

Geet twisted her lips. "if he actually listens to me, then I will na..."

Geet slowly walked off, and headed towards maan. Looking at cat who also had huge crash on maan.
"what number is Molly?" cat wondered. Geet gave her a annoying glare. Geet her self couldn't understand how maan become such a player. A boy who never really bothered about anything els then spot and now he is a famous heart breaker in the town...
"maan..." geet taps on maans shoulder. He was so tall compare to her. Wasn't she growing or is just him...
Maan turns around, she wouldn't refuge what a gorgeous handsome boy he is, but it's just sometime little to much.
"what is it?" his rude manner talk will never disappear with her.
"au- au.." few off his sick friends along with group of girls were staring at her with anger. "au- ... Au" she couldn't speak any more with everyone's eyes. And maan clearly have noticed that. He holds her hand, and pulls her way from there. She kept looking back, how they were staining at the burning gaze, girls with jealousy.
He came to a quit room, looked at her with anger "what is it?"
"au... Molly..."
"how many time I have told you geet, don't intifear with my life!" he spat the last few words.
"she don't like you any more. Why you annoying her?" she retorts back. "she was so upset..."
"geet! Get out before I scream at you."
"I am not scared of your scream. And you stay way from Molly." she points her finger at him and then walks out, slamming the door. Of course she is not scared, she was never scared of him. They live under same roof, same family since young. She have seen him change so much, somewhere she still doubts about him.

At lunch geet came to Molly, who seems fine. Busy in her study. "did you talk to him..."
"yes but he never listen. I don't know what happen to him... He changed so much. He was never like that."
"all due to your brother. Wish he was never here.."
Geet looked down in shame. Now what she to say, one side is maan, who is one of her family member an one side her brother, who she loves allot...
"umm..."
"couldn't he see, he is not one of those typical boy! He listens to his family more then anyone els, and it had to be idiot sammer!" Molly snaps her Maths book and walks off...

At the end of the day, geet silently sat at the front of the bus while maan at the back with his new found GF. She just wonders... Sammer have left for uni otherwise she would have asked him to fix everything. "stupid heart Breaker"

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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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awesooome...loved it...
finally maan talking to geet...🤗
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pls continue soon!!
Waiting...
Edited by Shimmerr - 13 years ago
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Good going,like the buildup to the story,what happens now...Waiting for the next update.
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THe change inMaan is wow.. From quiet n clingy his arrogant n proud.. Aww I hunk he cares for geet already in his own way.. Him taking her away from people's stares n looks.. Don't think he liked the way everyone was looking at her.. Awesome update b x
Edited by Saj110 - 13 years ago

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