FF-More piya - THREAD 1 (MAAN & GEET) - Page 26

It would be fun to see Geet starting to get jealous and Maan gets feeling to her, but she doesn't confess and he tries with his attitude to make her confess...

awesome part n vm
i loved it!!!

another story of Maan being rude to Geet...having lots of girl friend but does not like Geet having any male attention... I hate hypocrite Maan...sorry to say but I did not like the story...where Geet has to go through this sort of rudeness and later on pain...

Or you will change it to Geet having lots of boyfriends...sleeping around...typical story...not like your FF Mahsoos...which I loved the most...

Loved both part !
Waiting for teh next

Originally posted by: adorableyosh

another story of Maan being rude to Geet...having lots of girl friend but does not like Geet having any male attention... I hate hypocrite Maan...sorry to say but I did not like the story...where Geet has to go through this sort of rudeness and later on pain...

Or you will change it to Geet having lots of boyfriends...sleeping around...typical story...not like your FF Mahsoos...which I loved the most...

i hevnt even start.. :(...
i dont flow the typical rule..
well try not to...
far as i am concern.. in mannet.. my animosity.. my dark lover..
i think me the only one who managed to type it.. and i proudly claim.. :)
if its typical then its my story.. but i try not to repeat..
and you will be surprised :)

also read the first three part again.. the whole ff is related to that :)

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

i hevnt even start.. :(...
i dont flow the typical rule..
well try not to...
far as i am concern.. in mannet.. my animosity.. my dark lover..
i think me the only one who managed to type it.. and i proudly claim.. :)
if its typical then its my story.. but i try not to repeat..
and you will be surprised :)

will it be like Mahsoos? I am crazy about it...

Originally posted by: adorableyosh

will it be like Mahsoos? I am crazy about it...

i cant say anything i will try to update fast as possible to set the plot...
i will try to touch your heart again with maans dilema... with maans pain.. with maans anager & most importantly with maans love 😉

Originally posted by: FIRESafiReFIRE

i cant say anything i will try to update fast as possible to set the plot...
i will try to touch your heart again with maans dilema... with maans pain.. with maans anager & most importantly with maans love 😉

To be honest, lots of story in this FFF are full of like this...Maan is shown as arrogant, rude, sleeping with women, raping Geet still he is right. No matter how wrong Maan does but still people/readers want to forgive him. Yaar I hate that. Why it should be like that? why cannot a writer write neat clean story...and on top of that they are using very dramatic words to show pain , torture...only few writers like you and MuskanP I have seen never used those dramatic words but still able to create the effect they wanted to create. if they wnat to show pain or mishaps or torture...in one your FF 'Remorse' you have created Maan very rude. arrogant and also made him kill his own child but in the end before getting Geet and Him together you made him repent a lot. It was your way of writing that even you have created character like him but never had to exaggerated anything to show that. That was the beauty of that FF.

About your FF, I have one small request - he can have as many girlfriends as he wants but no sleeping around with them and please no ignoring Geet because of those stupid GFs. Same goes for Geet...please...

otherwise mein unke chhote chhote tukde karke apne doggie ko khila doongi. bol dena un do no ko...😆😆😆

love you a lot...


😆

Originally posted by: adorableyosh

To be honest, lots of story in this FFF are full of like this...Maan is shown as arrogant, rude, sleeping with women, raping Geet still he is right. No matter how wrong Maan does but still people/readers want to forgive him. Yaar I hate that. Why it should be like that? why cannot a writer write neat clean story...and on top of that they are using very dramatic words to show pain , torture...only few writers like you and MuskanP I have seen never used those dramatic words but still able to create the effect they wanted to create. if they wnat to show pain or mishaps or torture...in one your FF 'Remorse' you have created Maan very rude. arrogant and also made him kill his own child but in the end before getting Geet and Him together you made him repent a lot. It was your way of writing that even you have created character like him but never had to exaggerated anything to show that. That was the beauty of that FF.

About your FF, I have one small request - he can have as many girlfriends as he wants but no sleeping around with them and please no ignoring Geet because of those stupid GFs. Same goes for Geet...please...

otherwise mein unke chhote chhote tukde karke apne doggie ko khila doongi. bol dena un do no ko...😆😆😆

love you a lot...


😆

:)
i like that..
exactly ... there are difference between understanding a chracter and taking every aspect in considiration, if a person is a bad, there must be a reson.. you are not evil without a reason, you are not rude without a reason... there are always a areason.. and i try my best to explain...
:)

thats true there are many with arrogant and rude... but i still claim my story to be special and uniqe and not flowed on or copied anyone ideas.. i belive in different.. and surly this MP ...😳 (i will try my best ) to something special as mahsoos...😳
& thank you so much for the nice complement.. even after with my crapy grammer & spelling 😃😳

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i hope your view changes within 10 parts :D😃
i hope this happen like mahsoos.. as most people hated my mahsoos at the beggining... bcs i made maan blind.. but who said blind people cant love😉