New SS: My Lover, My ENEMY!!!! Part 2 Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
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PROLOGUE

It has been consecutively 3 days since she's coming to the police station!! She sat outside on the bench everyday, but she has never been allowed to meet him even once!!!

She begged the police officers, she cried in front of them, she pleaded them to let her see him just once... But nobody paid any heed to her pleadings!!! They were just as stone-hearted as the walls of the cell!!!

But she was not ready to give up so soon!!!!

She was determined to meet him... to get him out of the prison... but most importantly, to take her revenge!!!

She looked at the time... 3:00pm!!!

It was time to go to Arushi's school!!!

She wiped her tears, and left the police station to pick up her 12-year younger sister Arushi from school!!!

If it hasn't been because of Arushi, she had had her revenge by now!!!! She would've killed him and handed herself to the police by now!!! But the responsibility of her little sister has held her back from committing the worst sin of the world...murder!!!!

But her hatred for him was winning from the love and responsibility towards her sister with each passing minute that she spends sitting on the bench outside the police station!!!

She knew she was very close to loosing the fight and giving in to the temptation of revenge!!!

She was burning with hatred, and she knew that this burning of her heart can only be cooled by seeing only one man's dead body... Maan Singh Khurana!!!!!!



So how was it??? Should I continue???Ok friends, don't be mad at me for writing something when I hadn't updated anything else!!! Actually I've been very busy lately!!! And there's gonna be no PMs as u all know!!! This was just an idea yet!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Grt prologue...wil b waitng 4 it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ohh interesting! Do continue!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats on new ss...
i think maan is thpolice officer who wud have killed someone close to her and she wants to take revenge for that...
waiting eagerly for the updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
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interesting concept
continue soon dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing prologue
and yes do continue :)

harneet <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
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really interesting!

please do cont & add me to the pm list :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome back...

loving the concept 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice proliuge dear
but dear
give link in
mitification first page only
dont.give somewhete
give the li.k of new ss and ff
where otjr ss and ff r presemt
so that we can easily check dear
dont give somewhere dear
waiting for the next
paet dear
update otjer ff soon
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Sounds interesting...
Nice prologue dear...
Continue soon...
Update other ff's also...

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