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khwaishfan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

hi congrats on the new SS! all da best! update soon, do pm wen u do! superb start n interesting prologue!

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blue24

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Posted: 14 years ago

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M happy u are back awesome prologue

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 1

She sighed sadly as she put the last dress in the suitcase... She doesn't want to do this... but it's necessary!!!!

She picked up a picture from the nearby night table and looked at it lovingly as one middle-aged man, one 12 year old girl and herself smiled back at her from the picture!!! Those were the happy times...

An involuntary thought escaped her lips "Na jaane hamaari khushion ko kiski nazar lag gayi..."

But then her expressions changes to determination and she wiped a lone tear that has just been successful in making the way out of her eyes...

She knew whose bad eye has ruined their happiness... Maan Singh Khurana's!!!!

But it's time for payback now!!!!

She said determinedly to the empty room "Maan Singh Khurana!! Aapne humse hamaari khushian chheeni hai na, hum aapse aapki zindagi ka sukh-chain chheen lenge!!! Jee haan, hum aapko mout zaroor denge, lekin itni aasaani se nahi!!!" she smirked evilly "Hum aapko itni dardnaak mout denge Maan, ke mout ke farishton ki rooh bhi kaanp uthegi!!! Beware Maan Singh Khurana, you don't know what's coming your way!!!"

Just then the door knocked...

She looked towards the door and saw her little sister standing at the door with tears in her eyes... But she knew she has to control herself!!! She can't let the shreds of pain gets visible in her expressions!!! She knew she has to act stone-hearted...for Arushi's sake!!!!

She said in an emotionless voice while closing the zip of the suitcase "I have packed all your stuff!!! Your new school starts from tomorrow, so you have to leave today only!! I had already told driver to drop you!!!"

Arushi said crying "Geet Di, why is it so necessary to go to boarding school??!! I don't want to go to the boarding school!!"

Geet said angrily "Arushi!!!"

Arushi instantly becomes mum...

Geet said glaring at her angrily "Aap shayad ye bhool rahi hain Arushi, ke aap kis se baat kar rahi hain!!! Humne aapse aapki marzi nahi poochhi hai!!! Aap boarding school jaa rahi hain, aur ye hamaara aakhiri faisla hai!!!" she said determinedly.

Geet hated the fact that she has to be so harsh on Arushi!! She didn't liked that she has to use the elderly authority on her!!! But it was not a matter of choice--but a necessity!!!

Arushi didn't say anything more because Arushi and Geet were brought up while following all the rules of Handa Haveli!!!

And one of the rule is that youngsters CAN NOT question elders' decision!!! Whatever the elders decide, the youngsters had to follow it with their heads down...whether they like it or they don't like it!!!

Both Handa sisters walked down the stairs silently...

Geet didnt liked Arushi's silence... She knew somewhere she is responsible for her silence!! She didn't want to talk to Arushi like this...when it's probably the last time that she's seeing her!!!

Geet felt bad and said sweetly "Arushi, princess, even I don't want to send you away from me!!! But it's necessary!!! Di has to go out of town for unlimited period of time, so Di can't leave princess alone at home right??!!"

Arushi said crying seeing her loving sister back in authoritative Geet "But Di, you promised me that Papa is gonna be home soon!! If papa would've been home, then you didn't have to go na!! When is papa coming back??" she asked innocently.

Geet felt like she is gonna break down by seeing Arushi's innocent face, but she controlled herself. She knew she has to be strong!!!

Geet said "Papa will come back soon princess, I promise!!! That's why I have to go, so that papa can come back soon!!!"

After a lot of crying and snotting, Arushi left for boarding school...

x-x-x-x

Geet is sitting in Arushi's room crying when her phone rang...

Geet's expressions changed as she looked at the phone screen...

She wipes her tears and picks up the phone determinedly...

Geet: Hello

A wicked smirk came on her lips as she heard the person on the other line...

Geet: Make sure nobody touches him!!! I want to talk to him personally!!! I'll be there in 10 minutes!!!

And she hanged up the phone...

She smirked evilly and said to the empty room "The countdown begins now Maan Singh Khurana!!!!"

x-x-x-x-x

The room is dimly lit with just one one light in the huge room.

It is a huge room, almost big as a living room with no furniture!! All the furniture is piled up near the walls carelessly except for one chair and table in the middle of the room. The walls of the room are of pale colour.

But it's neither the atmosphere of the room nor the colour schemes of the walls that's making it spooky, it's a human body tied upside down in the middle of the room that's sending chills to the spine of the spectators!!!

She sits comfortably on the chair and looks coldly at the guy that's tied upside down!!!

She said casually while observing the pistol in her hand "What did you thought Sushant Kaka, that you could run away after betraying us??? Aap shayad ye bhool gaye, ke mout se bhaagne ke liye zameen aksar kam par jaati hai!!!"

The guy looks at Geet with pleading eyes and begged "Please Geet beta!! Please let me go!! Please forgive me!!!"

Geet said coldly "If you were in my place, would you forgive me?? Ye sabak to maine aap hi se seekha hai na Sushant Kaka, ke is duniya mein sorry shabd ke liye koi jagah nahi hai!!!"

Sushant pleads "Please Geet beta, Maine tumhe god mein khilaaya hai!!!"

Geet said angrily "Haan, aur aapne hi humse hamaare papa ka saaya hamaare sar se chheen liya!!! Aapne apni mamta aur wafadari bechi hai!!! Aur gaddari ki kya saza hoti hai Sushant Kaka, ye to aap achchi tarah se jaante hain na??" she asked casually and points her pistol on his head!!

Sushant begged desperately seeing that it's his last chance "Please Geet! Please don't kill me!!!! Main tumhe Maan tak pohancha sakta hoon!!!"

Geet's expressions changes at Maan's name. Sushant Kaka saw her changed expressions and he thought that she is probably melting!! After all, she is not used to all this cruelty!!! She is not an evil person!!!

He said a bit relaxing "I can help you to reach him!! Only I know where he is right now!!! I can help you Geet!!"

He said crying "I'm regretting my act beta!!! I didn't want to betray your father, but Maan had left no other option with me!!! He had my only daughter Sasha in his custody... I got scared for her!!! But I still couldn't save my daughter!!!!! She died at their hands!!!" he started crying bitterly.

After some time, he controlled himself and looked at Geet whose expressions were unreadable.

At last Geet said "I'm sorry about Sasha!!! Alright Sushant Kaka! I'll give you another chance... For old times sake!!!". Sushant Kaka gets happy instantly with her words.

She continued "But you have to prove your loyalty this time!!! Can you do that???"

Sushant nods vigorously and said "Yes I will!! I will do anything for you!!!"

Geet nods meaningfully and said "Alright, then tell me where is Maan Singh Khurana?? I want him!!!"

Sushant gets silent for a moment...

He wasn't intending on giving away Maan's whereabouts, he just said it instinctively to save his neck!! But he knew that if he sold Maan to her, then Maan is not gonna leave him alive!! And if he doesn't tell her, then she's not gonna leave him alive!!! He is stuck between the devil and the deep sea!!!! Either way, he's gonna die!!!

Geet could read his thoughts like a crystal clear mirror and said assuringly "Don't worry Sushant Kaka!! Maan would not be able to reach to you...and that's my promise!!! You tell me his whereabouts, and I promise I'll protect you!!!"

Sushant said hesitantly "He is in Malaysia!!!"

Geet smiled crookedly at his words and said "Thank you!!!"

She turns to leave and then stops at the door and said sweetly "Oh yes, say my hi to Sasha!!!" and she picked up her gun targeting his head and...fired it!!!!

She smirked evilly and said to the dead body "I'm sorry Sushant Kaka!! But I did keep my promise!! Now Maan won't be able to touch you!!!"

She looked at his dead body and a lone tear escaped from her eye...

No, the tear wasn't for her father's best friend's death... It was for her own death!!!

Today she didn't killed Sushant Kaka, she killed herself!!! She killed that innocent and sweet Geet that she was!!! But she was not responsible for her death!!! The hands that killed her might be hers, but the gun with which that Geet was killed was not hers!!! That gun is Maan Singh Khurana's!!! Maan Singh Khurana is responsible for the death of cute and innocent Geet!!!

Yes she is dead now!!! And she will never forgive Maan for killing her!!!

Today she has become a cruel and vile Geet Handa who is the leader of her father's gang now!!! Yes, she is a gangster now!!! Yes she is evil and vicious and execrable now!!!!!

And this Geet Handa will avenge the murder of that innocent Geet from Maan Singh Khurana for sure!!!

She wipes her tears and said determinedly "Beware Maan Singh Khurana!!! Your doom is approaching!!!!"

CHARACTER SKETCH of GEET HANDA:

No animal is more vicious than a woman wanting revenge... the saying goes exactly with Geet Handa who is 19 year old daughter of Mohinder Handa who is an underworld don!!! Geet is the successor of her father's gang and had taken over the gang for her father!!!! She is smart, intelligent, brave, fearless, and...evil!!!!

NEXT: Part 2

AUTHOR'S NOTE

Ok how many have been shocked???? How many have been turned off by Geet??? 😆
I had this idea in my mind of a very different story, as I've never read Geet being totally negative so far!!! So do tell me should I continue????

Will introduce Maan in next part, that is if you want me to continue...

REGARDING PMs: a friend of mine has come forward and offered to send PMs for me... So pls add superlover to get PMs ...

Edited by jazz07_dh - 14 years ago

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Zahra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

congratsss on ur new ss...i just love the concept...it is so so so interesting...continue soon...

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i just loved the first part...i mean i really loved seeing geet so differently...it was awesome...and then the ending part where she thinks how she has killed herself as from that moment and how she holds maan responsible for that...it was amazing...

and now am really awaiting for maan's entry...i wonder what will he be like it...and what could he have done for geet to be hating him like this...

continue soon... :)))

Edited by zahra15 - 14 years ago

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TanuDDian

@TanuDDian

Inactive

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

ossum part dear

loved it...

pls give the link in notifications dear

so that we can get

update other ff do

dear

cant wait more

plzzz

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namita25

@namita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

awww that's so different from what i have read so far...simply superb...

can't wait for the next part

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unknown.

@unknown.

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

amazing part
cont sooon

harneet <3

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

so u dropped ur idea to b absent from here for log that's good.keep on dear

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blue24

@blue24

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Awesome
Part 1 is superb
Awesome concept
Loved this geet
Wonder how maan vl be
Do continue soon

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