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Posted: 13 years ago
#51
awww One fine day...haiii it's one of my fav movies...can watch it umpteen
times...moi loved GC aka...george clooney in it...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Hi thanks 4 da pm for part 1..saw u updated part as well. Read both parts ! Awesum updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Awesome...
eagerly waiting for maneet meet...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
Hey guys,

thank you very much for your comments and I hope you guys like this next part..probably three more parts before I end this one shot 😆😆😆

Enjoy!

Part 3

Geet arrived at the day care center with Ajay. Ajay had a sad face on...Geet sighs

Ajay: I don't want to go to this day care. The kids are mean

Geet: Nothing will happen. Now here...(she gives him a watch) take this watch and when its 4:30 I will pick you up

Ajay: But..kids are mean here...I don't want to

Geet: Ajay please...I will pick you up as soon as its 4:30..an alarm will go off...okay (She holds his hand and brings him inside...they saw kids playing with each other..one of the kid turned his attention to Ajay..)

Kid: "He can't come in here...

Geet; Why not?

Kid: because he is a cry baby..look at his face...

Geet: Oh yeah who is going to stop him from coming? (She roles her eyes and takes him inside...there she saw Pari sitting in front of a puppet theater...while someone did the voices in the back...

Puppet: when you see this small hand goes to uhh there (he said pointing to the clock in the front) and the big hand goes to uh there...then its time for you to go home.

Pari: But I don't want to stay here...its no fun here..

Puppet: No fun? No fun? How can you say that? When you uhh got a dancing moo cow here...(A cow puppet pulls out)

Cow: won't you dance with me...(The puppet starts dancing..Geet and Ajay laughs...Maan comes out from behind the theater and looks at Pari...Geet smile vanishes seeing him...)

Maan (looks at Geet and stands up) What are you doing here?

Geet: Desperate times..

Maan: Yeah same here...

Geet (looks at Ajay) look honey now you can play with Pari

Maan: Yeah Pari..come..you got yourself a friend here (Both kids look at their parents and sighs)

Geet: okay now i will be back at 4:30 I promise...

Ajay: Am hungry

Geet (goes through her bag) hmm okay here you go a cookie and juice for you and Pari here you go...(she hands both of them a cookie bag along with juice bottles)

Maan: You got any for me in that marry poppins bag of yours?

Geet (looks at him with anger) No. Sorry the bag is closed...(she kisses Ajay before running out...)

Maan (runs after her) Hey thanks for that

Geet: hmm okay...ohh and here is your phone back

Maan: Thanks

Geet; Fine...(she kept walking while Maan walked behind her)

Maan; you know I don't understand women like you

Geet (stops and looks at him) what do you mean?

Maan: Always angry and bitter at every guy that they can find.

Geet; Excuse me...I am the way I am because of guys like you. Always, saying the right thing at the right time and then bam when the fun is over...you guys call it an end.

Maan: Excuse me not every guy is the same. and in fact its because of women like you made me who I am

Geet (scoffs) Ohh yeah what would that be? A kid? You know what I don't have time for this...I need to get back to work

Maan: Well so do I

Geet: Fine

Maan: Fine..
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She gets into the taxi and leaves while Maan calls someone on the phone. His source: Vicky...

Maan: Vicky I need to talk to you. Where are you?

Vicky: I can't see you Maan...

Maan; I know where you live Vicky..so don't play any games with me...where are you?

Vicky: okay meet me here in 10 minutes...

Maan: okay great...I will be there..(Maan catches the taxi and goes after him. He sees Vicky standing in the park. He runs up to him)

Vicky: don't hit me

Maan: Am not gonna hit you..now I need you to give me a name

Vicky: I can't..I told you what I saw

Maan: I know..there has to be something..a name or any other type of information that could help me. I don't want to lose this job. Too much is at stake here

Vicky: okay okay...I saw Rahul Chopra name there...

Maan: Rahul..hmm okay..I will figure this out...thanks Vicky

Vicky: No problem. (Both go their separate way)
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1pm
Geet sat in her office waiting for the clients to come in. She had finally gotten her model ready on time and was now over looking at the last minute details for her presentation.

Geet (picks up the phone when it started ringing) yeah

Ajay: mom...

Geet: what happened?

Ajay: I don't want to stay here..Pari doesn't want to stay here either

Geet: But what happened? Everything okay?

Ajay: This kid took our snacks

Geet: Let me talk to the teacher

Ajay: The teacher is busy talking to the kid...about not using a bad word

Geet (sighs) listen honey

Ajay (interupted her) What is ftd?

Geet (confused) FTD?

Ajay: Yeah this kid was talking to Pari about how his brother has ftd

Geet (stands up) Don't move..I will be there soon.
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Maan: Hey boss so I got a name

"Who is it?"

Maan: Rahul Chopra

"Rahul? hmm but how would we get hold of him? He is on vacation the last time I heard."

Maan: ohh um...what about the people that work with him?

"I don't think they will speak..."

Maan: What about his wife? She could be of help?

"hmmm okay try her..."

Maan (smiles) okay am coming up right now...am inside the building..bye (As soon as he hangs up the phone Geet calls) What?

Geet: Maan its Geet

Maan: umm hi

Geet; listen the kids need to be picked up from the day care center now. I can't go because I have my meeting soon...so can you do it?

Maan (hits the elevator button) me? I can't

Geet: Why not? I am going to loose my job if I go...I can't

Maan: And you think am going to keep my job? Listen I have to go talk to someone.

Geet: Can you do it on the phone?

Maan: wuh

Geet; okay great...so you pick up kids now till 3 and I will take care of them till 5. You have a press conference then right/

Maan: yeah

Geet: okay then it works out for both of us.

Maan; can't you get someone else?

Geet: I wouldn't have called you if I could. Please

Maan (smiles) okay but first you have to say Maan is the best person in the world and so handsome

Geet (roles her eyes) don't be an ass and go pick up the kids now.

Maan: okay

Geet: ohh yeah one more thing...Ajay is alergic to peanuts..and he is not allowed to cross the road without holding hands and no matter what he says dont let him watch any tv..and also...uhh okay thats it

Maan: okay fine...

Geet: Fine...we will meet at the lobby of my work. bye (she hangs up the phone)

Maan (calls the receptionist before pressing the down button) find me the Rahul Chopra's wife house number. Thanks.
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2:20 PM

Maan: Hey

Geet; Hey its me

Maan (smiles) Me who?

Geet (roles her eyes) its Geet..did you pick up the kids?

Maan: ohh shoot..I totally forgot

Geet (stands up panicking) You mean you didn't pick up the kids?

Maan: ohh you mean those kids?

Geet (smiles) look I just wanted to know

Maan: You wanted to know if kids are safe with me or not...hey Ajay dont play with guns..its not even loaded yet..(he winks at the kids while they smile and play with each other) and you cannot admit that the kids are safer with me then at the day care center with std kids...

Geet :no that is not true..I just wanted to let you know that Ajay can get into a lot of trouble when he wants to...

Maan: hmm or maybe you called to flirt with me

Geet; you are so full of yourself you know that

Maan: and am proud of it babe

Geet: don't call me babe

Maan: what should I call you then?

Geet: good bye (She hangs up the phone)

Precap: Ajay how long has your mom been divorced?

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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
Awesome work precap seems interesting!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
mmm hey kya ho raha hai..and where is this leading to..i am confused abt that..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57
awesome...caught up with all three parts now..and it's going great...looking forward to the next part :)

Reya <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
Awesome update...he tryes to flirt woth geet...precap is intersting!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
wow...superb.
Maan is really something.
Fab part.
Loved it.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
too good...very interesting indeed...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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