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Posted: 13 years ago

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I'll be waiting for your comment Nina :)

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ninand

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow.. Faria. And I could so imagine that actor playing here too. The sketch of the stillness he wakes up in, the despondence on nothingness, could almost feel the halfhearted crunch of dry soggy leaves, browned ,scrunched , covering the ground, and smelling of dismal hopelessness.

Every question they asked, the curiosity among others that dies almost the instant it was born, the 'mentor' , it added to the atmosphere ,making it almost immovable yet not heavy.

Vikram's past, and how his obsession came to be, the tragic fall innate to a loveless lonely life, makes one pity how helplessly some people get stuck and never move on. and what then the consequences are.

a super start Faria, somehow loved the setting too much, or the imagination your words brought about.. and when are you going to deign to continue madam.. ? I will hate to wait.😳

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mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Bookmarked..will read once u give the sec update..

and long u cant beat 50 page OS..😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

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@Nina, Thank you for the far too generous comment. I'm glad you could picture the scenes. I think I'm being mean by making you guys wait, I'll start writing tomorrow but I don't guarantee an update soon. I'm far to lazy for that. Next update will be in Geet's POV BTW, and I have a little surprise for you too 😉

And no, Maan does not die and reunite with Geet 😳

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