wow.. Faria. And I could so imagine that actor playing here too. The sketch of the stillness he wakes up in, the despondence on nothingness, could almost feel the halfhearted crunch of dry soggy leaves, browned ,scrunched , covering the ground, and smelling of dismal hopelessness.
Every question they asked, the curiosity among others that dies almost the instant it was born, the 'mentor' , it added to the atmosphere ,making it almost immovable yet not heavy.
Vikram's past, and how his obsession came to be, the tragic fall innate to a loveless lonely life, makes one pity how helplessly some people get stuck and never move on. and what then the consequences are.
a super start Faria, somehow loved the setting too much, or the imagination your words brought about.. and when are you going to deign to continue madam.. ? I will hate to wait.😳
Edited by ninand - 14 years ago
