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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#251

part 18
OMG my head is swirling...
fantastic...
but hope Maan doesnt face any punishment later...
cont soon dear...

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LuvScooby

@LuvScooby

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#252

Finally, the truth is out in open, finally Maan opened himself up to Geet, finally he showed what he truely felt for her...The last part gave me goosebumps, cannot wait for the continuation.

Although, I just hope that there are not dire consequences of this action by Maan, but right now, I just don't want to think about that 😛

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samaira jain

@samaira39

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#253

awesome... !!! gal i like the way you write... :D

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Lena

@.Lina.

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Originally posted by: misssmily

Hey ! How are you Saba ? i posted my essay on the previous page !
Is was a wonderfull part wasn't it ? 😳

Post urs quickly so that Lena read it with her tea and then post the next part ^^

oye! stop making fun of my tea routine! *goes off to make more tea* 🤣

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Saba

@Eccentric.Being

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: .Lena.

oye! stop making fun of my tea routine! *goes off to make more tea* 🤣

@Zubi--- Sorry, did not notice ur post earlier & had to go.

am good. will read ur essay after reading update & posing mine😉😆

@Lena--- send some to me as well as this time, mom is going to kill me for sure if she sees me again in kitchen. I already had 4 cups in 5 hours. still 1 cup is less, u see. 😆

o.k. off to read & write mine.

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Aww!!soo short!eagerly waiting for more!

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Shalini

@shalini01

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

Lena, beautiful update especially the last piece when maan revealed why he cant be with her and the fact that geet heard him well and at that moment dropped the thought of her wanting to be with him and she comforted him and said that WE will find him. that touched me and it touched maan as well and of course desire overtaking him made me squeal in joy 😳 i am one of your shameless fans when it comes to maaneet giving in to their urges 😆 excited to see how this turns out. i believe that now that maan told her why he cant be with her, she just might not push him like she was doing in the previous updates. please continue tomorrow like you said you would 🤣 😃

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shristi1

@shristi1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

Amazing part.

Feeling sad 4 maan.

He is trapped so badly in this situation.

Update soon.

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basicquestion1

@basicquestion1

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#259

fabulous update sweetums.

yash's character is still a bit confusing to me. i'm wondering if all of his anger was reality or a facade . what's within these layers i guess only u'd know. may b he is genuinely concerned about maaneet...then again mayb not.

as for how the update was. it was truly indulging. i'm glad u updated in two turns. gave me an excuse to read it twice.

i think maan just had it enough. first yash accusing him, the constant pressure n then geet's remarks. i'm glad for once he shattered into pieces n came to geet for his soul to b rescued.

she consoled him n as a payback gift he made luv to her. what a beautiful way of uniting the evident.

u know i'm openly a shameless sucker for intimate scenes n i certainly enjoyed it. plzzz let this b one of many more to come ;) ( did u miss liz whn u were writing this? coz i surely missed her reading this )

lena as always ...thanx for writing so well n putting u'r work here.

Edited by basicquestion1 - 13 years ago