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HiddenTruths

@HiddenTruths

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Posted: 13 years ago

#101

Loved it
So she knew maan was there 😳
Fab part ⭐️

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

happy new year to u too
loved it
well what if yash thinks tht i love u was for if
well all confused
update soon

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LuvScooby

@LuvScooby

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

I think this is perfect revenge from Geet for Maan...this little act of hers is most likely to give Maan a heart-attack

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Seher

@Speechless

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#104

Is Maan mad or what snow glob koi pocket mein le ke ghomta hai kia now she knows somewhere that Maan Singh Khurana is her MaanYash is so mysterious just Like other characters in this storyMaan, Dev, Rano, Vicky everyoneYash took Geet out with himWHY geet agreed on 1st place when maan told her to stay awayShe felt Maan's presence What is she doing??she loosened the rope and ready to jump Cont. soon waiting for the next part already

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Seher

@Speechless

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

May New Year's Eve find you seated around the table,

together with your beloved family and cherished friends.

May you find the food better, the environment quieter,

the cost much cheaper, and the pleasure more fulfilling

than anything else you might ordinarily do that night.

Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#106

Is it so or is it me only who thinks Yash is mysterious (showing he is a kind of good guy but he is not)????😕 What Geet want to do??? She wants to put herself in trouble so that Maan will come to her rescue. Nice update Lena. Plz continue soon...😊

WISH U A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!!😊

Edited by CutieTeju - 13 years ago

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286pearl

@286pearl

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

thx 4 update...

its really very mistrious story...

enjoying it...

its really very interesting...

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Saba

@Eccentric.Being

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#108

Hey Lena,

U Updated though it ended on cliffhanger again *long sigh*. U sure love to torture us, don't u?

Thank God, Geet added the two & two but off course Maan is faster than her so disappeared again.

Yash says one thing then next said words spoils the previous ones effect & again he starts on rebuffing after that. Wonder if all of it was witnessed by Maan & Yash is what Maan warned Geet about then what his actual purpose is being all friendly in front of many people.

Geet knew Yash's mindless act(s) can be problematic but still she accompanied him & she knows Maan will be watching.

One side Maan's warning keeping me on toes to see if Yash intends to harm Geet & camouflage the whole thing as accident but what Geet is upto is more considerable situation.

Waiting Waiting Waiting ……..

Edited by serenelove - 13 years ago

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Zubi

@misssmily

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#109

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So wonderfull updt 👏 I so loved it, yaar sans to lene do, cliffhanger pe cliffhanger...
In fact, at this moment geet needs more fresh air than me... 😆
what is she doing ? maan k pyar me sab hosh kho bethi ! 😳 ahhh poor girl

You put so much expression in this part, it was so well written, from geets frustation to her crazyness... i felt each of the emotions she felt, very well done 👏

This yash, i thought for a while that he will just push her ... he didn't do it, but there is definatly something fishy about him ! After all maan warned her about him... there must be a reason !
But loved the way you turned the situation, the longing, the wait, the questions... everything...came out in a really unexpected way : it was as if geet was possesed...the whole effect was really mesmerising ! 👏

Ab maan kaise bachega hmmm ??? 😳

My piece of critic : hmmm...let me think...nothing... that's cheating yaar there is nothing to complain about 😆... everything was in it's place ^^ hatt off 👍🏼

Plz updt soon me eagerly waiting ! 😊

With al my love and support !
Zubi 😊

Edited by misssmily - 13 years ago