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Hey Lena,

At last u got the time to complete update amidst all busy life of urs. Thnx 4 that 😃 & All the Best for ur College application. May Allah give u what u desire for.

Maan & Geet both have their reasons to behave the way they did in confrontation but now I am seriously thinking what was Maan's purpose being intimate with Geet. Geet need to analyze the situation calmly & then decide her next move or at least let Maan maneuver her if she is not willing to do anything herself.

Maybe if MSK came after Geet to talk to her because Yash is in the same class. I don't think, he was there from start & if he was then why he did not make a move already to befriend Geet.

I doubt, if Yash was drunk enough to loose the righteous sense & loved it when MSK punched him to knock out.

Well, I don't have any idea if the situation will turn out the way it seems. Yes, Geet knows, she gave the globe to Maan not MSK but then the poesy is making me conscious as it can be construed in double meaning.

Waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: misssmily

Great updt Lena sweety but a bit short 😛
I've updated the full thing.😊
So... the part entirely goes to maan's possessivness 😆
Lols. Thats what he is best known for.😉

But before that, poor maan, he just wanted to fullfill her wish and what he got in return ? geet slapped him 😆... must be thinkin yaar kia zamana a gaya hai ek to dusre ka kaam karo upper se thappar kaho 😆... But i felt it was a good idea indeed, the situation was like that : geet has confessed to maan but maan doesn't believe her, now all knows that maan ( as msk of her college ) is really handsome and girls drool over him ( so do I 😉 ) and here geet has rejected him. In this situation the slap comes out as source of joy for maan... because somewhere he understood she reserved the right to kiss her only to "her" maan . Well done, hope this kind of situation happens more often...at least maan will start believing her ! 😳
oh leave her alone. its not like she knows. 😛 i think she slapped him because she was hurt that it wasnt maan. she misses him. i dont beleive that it isnt that he believes her. simply put, he is in denial. wen i am writing, keep in mind that i am writing in perspective of Maan/Geet. so evn if they feel something, they may think otherwise. he's not very joyful, cus he wasnt planning to show his face. but the idiot decided to turn on the light 😆he's trying to hide so badly but she is making it very difficult.

ok now geet being friendly with this yash...i dnt remember well, but i think maan had warned her abt him... Is this yash playing some game ??? But fikar not maan ( as msk ^^ ) will keep an eye on her, or should i say: will not set his eyes off her 😆 😳
HE warned her about Yash. Doesnt mean that he is necessarily right.😉

Oh and yeah of course geet felt something wrong abt maan as msk... good that u didn't rushed things, because for now she can't be suspicious she hasn't enough clues ! You balanced it really well 👏 she hates msk for "being like her maan", even the slightest thought of msk being maan didn't come to her... She is on the very beginning of discovering the truth, so i really liked the way u didn't emphasize her confusion ! Well done !
poor girl, she's been confused her entire life. betrayed and deceived. suspicious but wavering.

And of course my piece of critic : I dnt know how long maan act like this... but one thing is sue, a day or another geet will find out... it would be could to have a monologue from maan on that, like him wondering what geet would think, how will she reacts...i know according to him she will never know, but if he isrealistic enough he knows that it's impossible and she will know sooner or later... so it would be to have maan's pov on that... rest is up to you 😊
arree yaar. thats not a critic. thats a request. 🤣
I'll see. if it fits with the story then i will try my best to add it in. 😊

Ok with that me eargerly waiting for the rest of the chap !
Plz plz updt soon !

With my love and support !
Zubi ! 😊

thank you so much for everything. 🤗 your comments and your love is so much appreciated. i cannot describe it in words. 😳

Originally posted by: basicquestion1

Did I ever tell u that I luvd how u used u'r intro of the ff in the update? Absolutely luvable. I adored that it was maan and no one else. Call me a sick person but I'm luving the fact that maan
Is teasing her as MSK. That's what she gets after seeing dev n then being casual with yash. Ha ha ha evil laugh.
Lenaaa plz update soon naa.