U r our Half world # 3/Chap-22,23,24epilog p 22-23 - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61
awesome...

they r together...that is what matters,,,,..

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: maansee



<font size="6">hi dear i m so happy to be rockerz at your post...I LOVE U JASS</font>




Hey Maansee Congrats dear
And Jass Buddy isse bhi regulary update karte rehna yaar
waise awesome part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
GEET IS STILL OF GOING TO KM AS SHE HAS BAD MEMORIES ABOUT IT
WILL SHE TELL MAAN WHAT TOOK PLACE THERE
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64


updated after so long...

Geet don't want to go there where her love was disgraced by Pammi...

they will make their own full world in the house where Geet lived so many yrs...

awesome update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
awsmmm yaar
lvd it
i hope maan apni uss pammi mom ko acha sabak sikhaye...😡
cont soonnn
ab iss ff ko bhool mat jana😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
little adda is so innocent ...

hope geet comes out of fear soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67
finally u updated this beautiful part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
finally u updated this one
good one

so maan knows abt trutrh of pammi



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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
part 19
nice part...
Maan knows why Geet doesnt wanna move to his place...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
Chapter 20


Geet: Don b sorry...But plz Maan don ask me to go back with u

Maan: Nahi main tumse kush nahi kahunga...I don want them...mere apne kehne to to mere hai per mujhe se meri zindgi cheen li.(he shrieked his brows)

Geet: Maan main apse yeh nahi keh rahi aap unse alag ho jaaye main...I don wanna b reason

Maan: Kisne kaha that u r reason.Tumse shaddi karne ka faisla mera tha...aur us shaddi k saat phero ko nibhana bhi mera farz hai

Geet: Per aap mere liye sabh chod main nahi chahti (she cupped his face)

Maan: Geet let me do what ever I want.Un rishto ka mere liye koi matlab nahi n business that is mine.I spent 10 years waiting for u in this business.Meri beti ka hai yeh sabh n she deserves every thing which a child should hav (he hugged tightly)

Geet: Usse sirf uske Papa cha-hea...her complete world.She has jst mother kabhi nahi boli k mujhe Papa cha-hea..she knew it ll hurt me.But I know she was in pain

Maan: Geet jo ho gaya let it go.But now nothing lik this gonna happen.Maine Karan se kaha hai don tell any body where I m Dekhta hu mere privaar ko meri kitni fikar hai especially Daddi Maa

Both heard Adda yelling for some thing to eat.So they left room n come to her .

Adda: Maa mujhe bhukh laggi hai...

Geet: Rekha Aunty khana bana kar gayi hai..main laati hu ..

Adda: But mujhe wo boring khana nahi khana maine dekh liya hai...Aunty ne khichdi bana k rakhi hai mere liye (she made face)

Maan: Agar tumko boaring khana nahi khana let it go Papa ll cook for u (he took her in his lap)

Adda: Papa aap ..aap khana bana sakte hai ..no no Shankar kaka ne bhi ek din sabji banayi thi..jab kaki ghar per nahi thi very yuck...app to male ho aur sirf females he acha khana bana sakti hai

Maan: But ur Papa is a good cook..let me try

Geet: Maan aap rehne dejiye I ll manage (even she didn't want Maan to cook )

Maan: Geet plz...bread aur cheese hai ghar main..

Geet: Bread to hai..per cheese yaha kahan...

Maan: Per paneer to hoga...wo corner main sweet shop hai wahan maine paneer pakode dekhay thay...rukko main le kar aata hu (he moved out saying this)

Adda: Maa isse acha to main khichdi kha lu..Papa kya bana sakte hai we don know

Geet: Adda let Papa cook aur beta don break his heart...jo bhi cook kare kha lena...

Adda:okey Maa ...I know Papa was also very much sad without us

Maan came running with a packet having paneer in it.He copped onions.coriander,mashes panner ..added ljst bit of spices in it..as it was not good for Adda.Both Geet n Adda were looking at him what he was doing.

coincidentally Geet had a toaster n sandwich maker which Sister Linda gifted her few years back.But Geet never used. Maan found it in kitchen rack so he took it out n made sandwiches for three.

First Adda made face.But when tasted she had two more then her need.Maan was much happy with his achievement.

Maan: I know Geet tum darr rahi thi aur Adda bhi khaane se now hows it

Geet: Maan I know u r a perfectionist but itne acche cook bhi hai..this is new to me...(she placed her hand on his shoulder)

Maan: Jab aapne aap se haar jaata to lagta kahi dur chala jaau..to tab kahi dur chala jaata sabh se for days..tab khud he cook karta tha..so (Maan was bit tensed)

Geet: u became a good cook. (she tried to cheer him up know) u r really.

Adda : Maa now I can go to school ?

Maan: No baby not now...u r not okey ...kush din baad aap ja sakti ho

Adda: Per Papa mere exams hone waale hai

Maan: So what Papa hai na...main apko prepare karunga...aur apki Maa to hai he teacher (he kissed her )

Geet: Tum fikar mat karo Adda sabh theek ho jaa-a-ga...I know u ll cover..aur is baar jaroori nahi aap ko first he aana hai...jst aap next grade main ho jaa-o next year u ll top

Maan: Your Mom is rite Adda

Both convinced Adda not to worry.Lil girl was much tired so she went to sleep.Maan n Geet both arranged home which was untidy .Maan he had jst some cloths.Which he had for his trip.So he went to local market for some more cloths.He had to choose stuff which was not according to his taste but to liv hear he needed it.He was happy even after this becoz he had got his world back.

After three days

Geet she was in wash room to change her nite dress.But forget to take her shirt .So she put her towel around her arms n moved out .But before she could move out . Shirtless Maan bumped in her.He also had to change

Geet: Maan aap ?

Maan:Mujhe nahi pata tha k tum bhi

Geet: wo meri shirt yahi bed per reh gayi thi to...

Maan: Its okey

Both stared each other for some time.When her towel fell on floor she was unaware.But when Adda was about to open door they came back to senses.Geet ran to washroom n Maan he put on his shirt.

Adda: Maa Papa (she opened door)

Maan: Adda beta aap kya hua (he lifted her up)

Adda: Papa aap yahan hai aur main dar gayi thi (she made face)

Maan: kyo beta Papa aur Maa hai na

Adda: Main akeli thi na ..Maa kaha hai

Maan: She is changing aur Papa bhi apne cloths lene aaye thay.(he kissed her ) aur apko akela kaise chod sakte hai

Adda noticed Geet's shirt.

Adda: Papa Maa ki dress to yahi hai...main de du unko wo bhul gayi (Maan placed her down n she knocked door taking shirt in hand ) Maa apki shirt

Geet: Beta main bhul gayi (she took her hand out for shirt )

After changing she came out.But both were not able to look at each other.This incident made them realize what relation they share.Might they hav got attracted physically but they realized they had missed so many important things in their so called married life.
Hop u ll lik.If any one interested plz comment n hit lik.From now onwards I not gonna pm any body


Lov


Jass

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago

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