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Posted: 13 years ago
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by any chance can we get the update of this ff also today
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: maansee

by any chance can we get the update of this ff also today



main to trap ho gayi hu how i write three thems meri help karo 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
hey jass...
read all parts in one go dear...
its awesome ff... i loved it...
plzz update soon n add me in...
sent u buddy request... plz accept..

jyothi
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Posted: 13 years ago
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If I hav not updated...why I should forgot ? I think it has more potential my forgotten work.I ll update most probably within two days or may b a shock for u all
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jass.KN

If I hav not updated...why I should forgot ? I think it has more potential my forgotten work.I ll update most probably within two days or may b a shock for u all


or kiya katri to tum normally giving us 😲
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 19

Maan: Geet let us discharge from here..we ll return to our world

Geet: Our world.But our world means me u n our daughter then bout what u r talking Maan (she was surprised what he was talking about )

Maan: Geet hamara ghar ..Khuraanaa mension

Geet: Khuraana mension(she repeated when that moment flashed in her mind...she was sent back )

Maan: Ya KM which is waiting for u..jo aab tak mere liye sirf ek Makaan (house ) tha but only u can make KM home Geet (he had tears in his eyes )

Geet looked at him.How she could tell him what had happened Whether he gonna trust her ? It was also true she can do every thing for the sake of Maan.She could hide every thing for him.Before taking any decision she has to wait.To observe things.How she could go back to that place where she treated as a stray dog.She was happy in this world.Wanna complete her world here.

Maan: Geet what u r thinking ? (he jerked her hand )

Geet: Nothing Maan.

Maan: No tell me ...But before any thing Adda ko bed per leta de...okey Adda (he tried to take her up from chair )

Geet: Maan what u r doing sit down...let me do this...(she held Maan from hand )

Maan: Itna bhi kamzoor nahi..apni beti ko godd main to nahi khila saka per utha to sakta hu (he lifted her up n placed on bed)

Geet: Adda try to sleep

Maan: Geet agar need nahi aa rahi to rehne do na

Addi: ha Maa mujhe neend nahi aa rahi aur agar Papa fir se chale gaye to (she made pity face)

Maan: Per aab Papa kahin nahi jaaye gay..we all go back to our home (he cupped her face)

Addi: Sachi Papa

Geet: But Maan I don't wanna go main yahi rehna chahti hu (there was determination in her voice..she saod what she what thinking )

Maan: But why Geet...Kya tum is baat se darti ho k log kya kahay-gay.

Geet: No Maan...main nahi darti..per main nahi jaana chahti kya aap mere sath nahi dena chahte...fir se hath chodna chahte hai(Geet said with tear filled eyes)

Maan: Main kahin nahi jaa sakta..tum yahan chahti ho we ll liv there.I can understand jis daur se main gujara hu usse bhi kahi jayada tumne saha hai...take ur time Geet.

Geet: To kya Maan hum hamare ghar jaa sakte hai wahi ghar jisme Adda k sath maine itne saal bita diye

Maan: Ha hum wahi jaa-a-gay(he grinned ear to ear)

Adda: To Papa aab main apne saare frinds se apko mil-va akti hu...sabh ko aab pata chalega mere papa kaise hai

Maan: Aur sabko pata chalega apke Papa n apki Maa se kyo pyar kiya...

Adda: Aur main

Maan: Aap to apni Maa ki chaaya (shadow) ho

Adda: Per main to Adda hu Adda Handa

Maan: Adda Maan Singh Khuraana

Adda: Maan Singh Khuraana Mere Papa

Maan: To apko apne Papa ka naam yaad ho gaya

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Geet: Maan ek baat kahu

Maan: Kya

Geet: Aap aabhi kissi ko mat batana hamare baare

Maan: But why

Geet: Plz Maan don ask me why

Maan: okey as u wish

Geet she not wanted to let Maana's family know about them.She wanted to observe things first.Otherwise how they gonna react good or bad way ...she was not ready as now in hurry.

Within three days Maan was discharged n after one week Addi was discharged.Maan cleared all bills.As all knew Maan has habit to wander alone here n there.So when he informed Daddi that he gonna stay in HP..Daddi said nothing.

Maan n Geet both spend all days here till Adda was here.After her discharge both left for home with their daughter.Geet opened main door which she had closed in darkness..where her all hopes had been vanished with that incident with Adda.

Geet: Maan yeh mera ghar hai..yahan maine Adda k sath 11 saal bita diye apke intzaar main..isko to kehti thi..We both competes our world.But that was not true Maan(she had a lump in her throat)

Maan: Geet u know what u hav said.Mera ghar..to mera ghar kahan hai.(he was in much pain saying this)

Geet: Aadat nahi hai na...Sorry Maan hamara ghar..(she cupped his face)

Adda: oh ho aab andhar to chalo (to get her parents attention Adda yelled)

Maan: Apni Maa se push lo Adda she gonna giv ur Papa permission or not (he teased cradling her daughter )

Adda: I m owner of this house..so I hav to giv permission.

Geet: Maan kyo sharminda kar rahe hai..chaliye (she grabbed her wrist n take him inside)

Rekha has arranged every thing.But had other works.So she informed Geet to take kye from neighbour n she did same.Maan examined every corner every room of this home.

Geet: Kya dhund rahe hai aap.

Maan: Apna ghar dekh raha hu Geet.Jis ghar main tumne wo pal bitaa diye jin per meri haq tha.apni beti ko apni god main le kar ek kamre se dusre kamre main nahi ghum paya taki wo chup ho jaaye..js so jaaye...Apni bibi k sath gussa ho kar yahan bahar sofa per nahi so paaya...sabh cheen gaya (he wiped his tears)

Geet: Kush nahi cheena apse Maan..hum fir se wo sabh pal ji sakte hai agar aap sath hai

Adda came running.Both Maan n Geet were shocked.

Maan: Adda beta aap bhago mat...

Adda: Papa maine abhi apna beg dekha...Maa kahti thi wo next month aur le kar dengi...per Papa aap to mujhe le kar dogay an aab (she made sad face)

Tears rolled down from his cheeks.Looking at his daughter how she was asking for lil things.Only daughter of a great businessman ..she had not that money to buy new bag.v He hugged Adda with fll force.

Maan: Addi apko wo sabh milega jo apka haq hai..Papa hai na apke pass.

Adda: Sach

Maan: Ha sach (he kissed her )

Geet: Maan iski aadat mat biga-diye

Maan: Geet main janta hu kahi na kahi tum mujhe se abhi bhi dur rehna chahti ho ussi dar ki wajah se..per aab aisa kush nahi hoga

Geet: Adda tum jayo fir baat karte hai

Adda: Per Maa mera beg (she was much sad)

Maan: Adda apke Papa apko wahi lakar den-gay what u want mujhe apki Maa se kush baat karni hai

Adda left room.Maan looked at Geet shrieked his brows n placed himself beside open window.

Geet: Maan mera matlab apko hurt karna nahi tha..but try to understand.(she took Maan's hands in her hands)

Maan: Kya samjhu...samjh to main gaya hu...Karan ne sabh bata diya hai mujhe what had happened.Pammi Maa ne kya kiya.

Geet: What ?

Maan: Ha .bahut shram aa rahi hai mujhe..I m sorry Geet (he busted in tears)

ll try to update soome.Hop u l lik.Plz comment n hit tab.I updates after long so many of u hav forgotten what was there.But now I ll keep pace.N gonna try 'Kis Morrh Pe Milay ho'

Lov

Jass

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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finally my cry baby is smiling... waiting for update dear...

and yes my 5000 post only and ony for u😉

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