Sunset Maaneet SS Last Part - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok so it was indeed plastic surgery and Mandira is somewhat successful in her mission but i m sure maan will recognize geet once he meets her as there is a dil ka connection between the two but maybe geet will b shattered and will avoid maan but maan ka dil ye kahega k this is my geetanjali and then he will find out from the doc the truth
dekhthe hai mera guess sahi hia ya nahi
love-Piya
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
Oh noes...iss mandira ki bachi ki toh aisi ki taisi!
Ok 2 parts dwn...1 more to go...hehehe cnt wait to read hw u mke them meet again. Would mandira's heart melt seeing her only child miserable n gud as. dead? Will mandira tell maan the truth? Will maan instantly feel the spark with geet? Will geet n maan ever b able to forgive mandira? To kmw all this dnt forget to tune in to the nxt update, same thread, same author, same place. til then gud bye :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
Chi hw cruel mandira is..she is separatng maan and geetanjli.feelng bad 4 maan's cndtn.hope he cmes to knw soon that geetanjli is none other than geet.
Waitng 4 next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnx 4 pm


i hate mandira ...seriously i mean how can she do it??she's ruthless mother ..


do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 2
Mandira is really evil...
shes doesnt care for her son's happiness...
poor Geet...
now Maan what happened to him?
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
awesome dear... continue soon dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Hi congrats on the new SS! Thanks 4 da pm, jus read parts 1 n 2 nw! Wonderful updates
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
awesome update
loved it
hate mandira
feel sorry 4 Maaneet
cant wait 4 more
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49

Sunset Part 3

Maan's hand is injured.
M:My God!Maan cut his vein.
She finds his head only injured.
She realizes that he hit his head against the wall to hurt himself.
She bursts into tears:What did you do?
Her eyes strike his suicide note.
"I don't want to live in this world without my Geetanjali".
She cries:I killed my son.My lie took my son away from me.
Suddenly she sees Maan breathing.
She is relieved.
She takes him to the hospital.
She sees Maan's lips shivering:Geetanjali….
She cries again.
She thinks:I did a big mistake by separating him from Geetanjali.
Maan is taken to the operation theatre.
…..
Geetanjali breaks the show pieces.
G:Maan's love is not true.He is just a flirt like any other rich boy.That's why he dumped me.He did'nt even bother to vist me.
"No.He is not a flirt.His love is true".
Hearing someone say this she turns back.
She is shocked to see Mandira.
G:Aunty!
M:I said a lot of lues to you and my son just to separate you from Maan and to get him married to Rucha.
Geetanjali can't believe it.
G:Aunty?
M: I did a big sin by separating him from you.God punished me.I'm losing my son.
G:What are you saying aunty?
M:I told him that you died in the accident.So he tried to commit suicide.He is hospitalized.
Geetanjali is shocked:Aunty,what did you do?You ae so cruel.
M:Please come with me to the hospital.Even though he is unconscious he calling out your name.
She bursts into tears:Maan!
Geetanjali and Mandira go the hospital.
Geetanjali
Looks at the doctor:Doctor..how is Maan?
Dr:He is still unconscious.
Geetanjali and Mandira cry.
Without seeking anyone's permission Geetanjali runs to ICU to see Maan.
Dr:Hey…what are you doing?
M:Let her go doctor.Maan loves her very much.Sometimes her presence may favour him.
Geet cries near Maan.
M:Maan!You can't close your eyes…open your eyes and see me.I am your Geetanjali.I have not gone anywhere.I am here.Maan…please Maan….
Slowly he opens his eyes.
Maan: Geetanjali!
Geetanjali is relieved.
G:Maan!
Maan's vision becomes clear.
Maan:Who are you?
Geetanjali is shocked.Then she remembers that her face is changed.
G:Maan…I am your Geetanjali.
M:What are you saying?
Maan feels her fragrance.
He thinks:Why do you feel that she is my Geetanjali?She smells my Geetanjali.
The doctor and Mandira come there.
M:Maan..your Geetanjali is not dead.She is alive.I lied to separate you from her.
Maan is surprised as well as sad.
Mandira cries:I am sorry beta.
Maan does'nt have time to think about his mother's cruelty.
Maan:Mom…where is Geetanjali?
Mandira looks at Geetanjali.
M:She is Geetanjali.
Maan looks confused.He looks at Geetanjali deeply.
He feels:The same smell..the same eyes…the same hair..the same charm..but the face….how can she be my Geetanjali?
M: After the accident her face got disfigured.
Dr:I did't know how Geetanjali looked before.So I did'nt do plastic surgery keeping her real face in mind.So her face got changed.I'm sorry.
Maan can't believe it.
G:Maan!
He looked at her.
She sheds tears:You did'nt like ,y face?Am I looking that bad?
Slowly he wipes her tears and holds her hand softly: Geetanjali…you look more beautiful now.You are colourful like sunset.Who cannot love sunset?
She smiles emotionlly.

Maan :My love for you is not based on your face.Whether your face is disfigured or changed… whether your face is beautiful or not my love for you will not change.I will always love you Geetanjali.
Geetanjali becomes so emotional that she holds his hand with love:Maan…you are so sweet…
Man:Let us conduct a party to celebrate this.
They smile.

Geet wears a grand green dress.Maan wears a beautiful shervani.
The song 'Suraj hua madham..' is played.Maan went towards Geetanjali and held her arms and caresses them seriously.She smiles.

He leads her to the dance floor and they dance together.

The end
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
simply Amazing part dear...


actually sunset resembels end n sunrise means life in real terms of life but u changed the whole sense in ur story which took onlycbeauty of sunset rather than real meaning...lovely dear...

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