Sunset Maaneet SS Last Part - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
#21
hiii
congrats on da new ss
interesting start
love da concept
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Interesting!
I wish there is some sort of prologue rather than straight way part one...

not just this story but your other FFs too...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i don't think u 'll be able to complete the story in 3 parts. bt lets w8 & watch. nice start continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24

r u going to give us update of this ss today dear😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
#25

Sunset Part 2

Doctor:You did not show the patience to hear the whole matter.
Mandira can't understand anything.
Dr:I'm sorry Ma'am..Geetanjali's face was disfigured.So I had to put an effort to make her face normal.So after the plastic surgery…
M: After the plastic surgery…?Tell doctor….
Mandira has no peace of mind.
Dr:I guess her face got changed.
Mandira is shocked:What?
Dr:I did'nt have any other option.Her face was damaged completely.So I had a doubt whether her face would change completely.But I was sure that there is some change in her face as I have not seen Geetanjali before.From you I also realize that she got a completely different face.
Mandira becomes upset.Then she thinks:Why should I worry?I have always hated Maan's relationship with Geetanjali.Good thing that her face got changed.Maan won't believe that she is his Geetanjali.
She has an evil smile on her face.
Geetanjali opens her face.
She sees her face on mirror.
She is shocked.She screams:Nooo!This is not my face.
Mandira and the doctor go inside the room hearing her cry.
She cries:Aunty…my face…
Mandira tries to console her:Geetanjali…please try to understand..don't get scared or anything.Listen carefully…due to the accident your face got disfigured.So doctor did plastic surgery and thus your face got changed.
Geetanjali cries:Oh nooo…
Mandira takes her to another place.
M:You can stay here.When Maan returns from London I will tell him.
G:Did you tell him about the accident?
M:No.I did'nt want him to lose his peace of mind.Let him complete his work peacefully.
One more thing…don't tell the neighbours who you are.Don't reveal your real name to them.You can just tell them that your name is Geet.
G:Ok.But why?
M:Geetanjali…I'm helping you.I saved you from a major accident.So don't question me.
Her face becomes dim.
Maan comes back from London.
Maan dresses.
Mandira:Where are you going Maan?
M:To visit Geetanjali.I miss her.
Man:No use of going there.You cannot meet her.
M:Why?
Man:Because she is no more.
Maan is shocked.
M:What did you say mom?
Man:I did'nt want to destroy your peace of mind.That's why I hid it from you.I thought I will tell you peacefully after returning from London.Geetanjali died in an accident.
Maan is shattered:Nooo!
….
Mandira visits Geetanjali.
G:Aunty..did Maan come back?
M:Yes.
Geetanjali is happy.did you tell Maan about me?Did you tell him that my face got changed?
Mandira tells a lie:Yes.
G:I can't wait to see him.When will he come to see me?
M: Maan won't come here.
G:What?Why?
M:I showed your new photograph to him.He did'nt like your new face.So he is not interested in you.He is dating a girl now.Rucha.
Geetanjali is shocked.She is shattered completely.
She bursts into tears:How can Maan reject me?
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Mandira gives an evil smile which Geetanjali does'nt see.
Mandira thinks:Now the route is clear.Like I wished Maan will get married to Rucha.She is beautiful,modern and rich.She suits our family.She deserves to be our daughter in law.
Mandira goes home.
She is shocked to see Maan lying down unconscious.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh gosh this mandira is so bad 😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
omg!such an evil lady..
kya hua if face got changed..
deir hearts can recognize each other na..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28
awesome part!!!!!!!!

but r u going to kill both of them... bcoz th title says tht... but i hope for the best
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
hi
the up is good
so geetanjali face got changed due to tha plastic surgery
and mandira is happy to see this as she dont like her
she tells mann that geetanjali is died mann is shattered due to this whereas here she tells geet that mann dont like her new face
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
@ part 2
mandira is not only selfish but coward
she knew she cant win against their love so used these traits

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