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RockBarbie

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Posted: 10 years ago

#291

THANK YOU!! HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU TOO!!!

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!

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Clairvoyant20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#292

new year glitter graphics, animaged gif images for Orkut, Myspace, Facebook, friendster, hi5

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Clairvoyant20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#293

Stuck in an elevator the girl gives respite to a man having panic attack '... lifts open and the on-lookers address them as "Geet" and "Maan" first part leaving craving for more . Hope I can finish this story amidst work😆😆

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Clairvoyant20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#294

Completed

First of all the whole involvement of cosmic universe clashing of galaxies center of Universe coming of cosmic unions to give birth to newer galaxies and blackholes within this story was unbelievable .

Geet and Dev , Maan & NT are exes with a history the respective singulars breaking their earlier relations to pursue each other . The slow melancholic process of their engagements brings the aloof vulnerable Maan and the seemingly in control Geet together .

What follows is awkward dinners , conscious outings , casual astronomical observations , cautious talks over respective heartbreaks , gradual acceptance of each others' in their personal niches [starting with elevator] to the final day of engagement deciding to not let each other go and find out what they share in comfort 👏

Its really amazing ⭐️👏

Fabulous writing I hope you continue such works & I think I have bmed your ongoing ones so will get back to reading the complete ones that I have missed ❤️

Such a lovely story ⭐️

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Clairvoyant20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#295

I am hopeful you will complete "Eternal Return " if you ever access via that UN I am apologizing in advance for spamming that thread😳😆

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 10 years ago

#296

just read "Adult Content Notice to MSK by Geet Handa" and I was 🤣

Geet's fantasies 😆

because, the lights are still on sir !!

dhoom pichak dhoom pichak dhoom...beeep 🤣

every para of the story was a blast..

superbly awesomely written !!!

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#297

"Amnesia: MSK's anecdote why it is a pathetic idea"

🤣 Wow !! that was another blast in the series...

Geet is sooo d... naive...😆 but she outsmarted Maan this time..

I imagined Maan delivering the line 'main kaha hoon?' after hitting the vase..but then the acting would have been so obvious to Geet..😆

loved this Maaneet and their interactions, the way they casually and playfully talk with each other...in a moment she boosted his ego by telling him what the office staff (female staff) thinks about him and the very next moment she crushed down his ego under her feet..

Maan's smart ways of manipulating her with bargain, blackmail.. and that small disappointment Maan felt with her "we are only boss and secretary.."

and the pinch of sarcasm on ML tracks in the serials also came in a fun way !! wish GHSP ML track had been like this OS..

Superb !!!

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#298

Read this one -- 'Geet - the cheeky little witch, Maan - the target'

the serial, the forum, the MACO club and the open shirt...🤣
super humorous !!

Geet and Sasha 😆

good that the warning bells were not ringing for Maan while signing her appointment letter...she is much capable of knowingly and unknowingly lifting his spirits...and also d.. not dumb it is naive right, naive enough not to understand his hints about the boss and secretary..😆

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

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Posted: 9 years ago

#299

and I came across this another OS of yours while checking your blog link from your signature...

"Geet : A Song of Orpheus"

I had to google it first to find who Orpheus was :) but after reading it, the way its references you have used brilliantly, these felt apt for Dev..when he looked back only to find what he lost now forever, some moments which now slipped from his hands in the game of scheming and deceit...the way his charm played a major role in it and always...
fabulous piece with no glorification of his actions, no reasoning, but just the perspective of a fallen person who failed to achieve anything but a tragic end for himself by all means..

PS -- just noticed there is an extra 'i' in the site link or is it meant to be there..

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#300

Wow. This FF was so different than what I usually read on MG. It was deep and meaningful. Their conversations were also different than what I usually get to read. This was one brilliant piece of writing. Really enjoyed reading it. And I like it more when a story makes me think hard when the characters in the story are shown having an impact full interactions or even their self thoughts rather than reading it for the sake of it and forgetting it later. This story I will remember it and read it again and again.

Thank you for this one.

-Sanjana!

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