FF: Serendipity [Completed]

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#261

Yo!

Finally the end- a starry one too (Corny, I know)... you're completing stories I see

It was a good read :)

and now can we please have Return of the Eternal Return? 😳

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esk1990

@esk1990

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Posted: 11 years ago

#262

phew... I ve been stalking this thread since forever... and now its over too soon... but must say.. it was beautifully signed off... loved the last part. I understand that u r not gonna be doing an epilogue but personally I'd love to know what became of Maan and Geet...

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@flowers4u

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#263

Loved it a beautiful ending

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atulg

@atulg

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#264

Loved this story RB :)
i just read it from the beginning again to get the full feel of it
Simple story - but you made it incredible with your characterization, clean execution and an apt ending
ALso loved the astrophysics tidbits and the analogy to real life situations...
I am glad that you plan to revive some of your old stories based on Maan/Geet is it?
How many pen names do you have - I had no clue about the ones mentioned in the comments...so cant suggest anything for now, but would love to read anything that you pen...so count me in please
tc
Preethi

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Uhhh...last part...I was hoping for more maaneet parts..
Lovely part...
Loved how geet was fighting to hide her feelings for him and maan fighting to express his feelings...
Loved maan's unique way of expressing his love for her..
And beautifully written.

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