FF: Serendipity [Completed] - Page 29

wow... absolutely amazing. i would say a unique one. kudos to you :) The journey of maan n geet to maaneet was beautifully written :) :) Though i would have loved to read more but i Am very much satisfied with the way you ended it. i don't know what more to say... i simply loved it :) :) :)

Read all parys in one go..!
Amazing Chapters.. Loved Maan's character.. A scientist 😳
Write more stories on Maaneet plzzz..
PM me if u can..

Unique 😃 tats all I could say.

Loved the concept and the beautiful updates 😳

I have become a fan of your writing !!!! 😃 I admired each & every update with all my heart !! ⭐️ The subtle way with which u implied the changes in Maaneet & Devtara's lifes & relationships , was what which made the impact on the readers stronger !! 👏 I loved Maaneet's bond with straight forwardness verrryyy much !!! 😳 Serendipity was a serendipitous discovery on IF for me !!! 👍🏼 Loved it & read it in one go !!!! Please write more on Maaneet !!! Will always love to read ur works on Maaneet !! 🤗

Just read all parts of the story 'Convergence'.

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Just read all parts of the story 'Convergence'.

The story thread is closed, so putting my comment here.

I do not have any idea about The Sandman Series and it's Characters, but Convergence is such a gripping and intriguing story, that I read it in a go...

beautifully written, the convergence of dreams, imaginations, reality and psychical fantasies...and it's amazing to see the knowledge and effort behind it.

Geet decides to change like Morpheus !! and Morpheus, who was unable take in for the changes had decided to die in the end (though I feel the decision itself is some kind of change to himself and to the dreaming)...it's scary to speculate that she might take a similar path.

Her mother has already crossed the gate and Geet is on the verge of it, where they are interconnecting the two worlds...her father leaving them had a severe impact on their lives...and to add to that Geet had the darkness, the mysterious mansion, it's secrets, the fantasies from the books, the thoughts about her mother's state surrounding her all the time.

I am wondering how she is surviving with this till now..she is helpless for her mother, weak that she takes Anjali's support to face her mother..a bit detached, may be because her mother too was not there in her lonely childhood..and a lot scared about all the things that are happening around, particularly something miserable that she has experienced when she was made captive, the memory which she wants to keep hidden deep down, or is it her own dark side that she is afraid of as she did not agree to accept the reflection as her own..

and at times, she is innocent, curious and inquisitive to know about the dreaming..what is it that makes her so fascinated to know, search and meet the Dream, to make her follow his path...Is it Maan whom she is searching for so long.

Hope you would continue with the story soon..😊 waiting for it eagerly.

You know, I had this huge story, back stories and parallels drawn. But Geet became meh and I lost interest in writing for a while. When I came back to writing, this was already lost. One of the stories I am sure I will complete some time in future. Just not as Sookie, though. :=)

Originally posted by: RockBarbie

You know, I had this huge story, back stories and parallels drawn. But Geet became meh and I lost interest in writing for a while. When I came back to writing, this was already lost. One of the stories I am sure I will complete some time in future. Just not as Sookie, though. :=)

Loved maan and geet in this. The thought process of each person is quite interesting, the said and unsaid makes you think more and shows all is not as shown. Liked it so much.