MG OS...Connected Souls part 3 updated

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Posted: 13 years ago
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i got an new story in my mind and cant stop myself to share it with all of u...i hope u will like it...it's an OS which will be end in three parts.


OS: Connected souls


Part 1

geet woke up from her sleep and went slowly towards her window.she opened it and fresh wind touch her face.she closed hr eyes to feel the warm touch of the air.in the sun rays she is looking like a blooming flower.her white silky skin glowed with the sunlight,her silky hair blowing with the air,her beautiful eyes spoke volumes of unspoken words.she is oblivious of her beauty.she always remain in her own world which is very different from any normal people.she knew it's just her world.her destiny and she can't change that fact.

her parents died in a car accident 3years ago.she is totally alone in this cruel world.she have relatives but they don't want her.
after freshen up she made two cup of tea and sit on the balcony.she took one cup in her hand and put other in her other side.
she took a sip and said as if some one sitting in her front,

acchi hai na...aaj ki chai bohot acchi bani hai...i think i m improving...
.

then made a sorry face...

oops..main to vul hi gayi thi aap ko chai nahi pasand..aap to coffie pithe ho..sorry..

then smiled at herself.if anyone saw her like this they will be sure think that she is mad.everyone thought that.that's why they don't meld with her.even dev thought like that.everything was perfect with them.they don't love each other it's arranged by their parents.they don't have any problem with their decision.everything changed one day when she told him she saw the vision of his mothers death.when he realised that it's true then he called her mad and broke the engagement.she didn't understand first what's the matter then slowly realise that she is the only one who have that weird power.she is now used to it.

koi samajhta nahi k main wo saab sachme dekhti ho...koi mujhpe bishwas nahi karta..a lone tear drop from her eyes.but when she thought about maan, her face lit up.

maan was sleeping on his bed when he heard her sweet voice.as if she scared...
maan uthie na aap ki curtain pe aag lag gayi hai...pls uthie...she repeated her sentence in a scared voice.

maan opened his eyes slowly and listening her voice he shivered. then looked at the curtain its really burning.he instantly got up and torn the curtain with one jerk and off the fire.he found out that fire ignited bcoz of short circuit.he thanked her in his mind.

he heard this voice past six month.first he thought he is going mad then slowly understood that it's real.he noticed that her voice spoke with him when he is in any trouble or dilemma.he is now used to it.he can't speak with her only hear her.he is in love with that voice now.he is always craved to hear her now.

geet felt relief sensing maan is safe now.one incident changed her life.the day when she met maan.from that day she can see him in her vision.why that happen she don't know but whenever he is in trouble she can sense him.his presence filled her lonely life with happiness.she is now in love with him.she didn't try to tell him about herself bcoz she feared that he also think her mad and leave her.

maan try to find her but he didn't know single thing about her except her voice.thats also ocassionaly he hear.


after one month of that fire incident geet make her mind to meet with maan.she knw where she could be find him.so she wear a beautiful green anarakli and let her hair open.she is looking like an angel.she went to a park near the place where she could find him and wait for him.then she saw him coming with his car.

he was driving when his car stopped abruptly with a jerk near the park on the road.he came out from the car making irritated face and opened the bonnet to find the problem.geet smiled lovingly and slowly went towards him...

Love
Saki

pls do read it and give ur lovely comment.

Part 2
Part 3
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blue24 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome dear 👏
Its such a different and lovely concept..
Geet can Visualise future things
dev is really insane to think that geet is mad..
and even maan can hear geet
superb
excited about the next prat
do continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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a gr88 power of 6th sense... loved it tht they cn communciate in such a way... nice concept...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awe, lovely OS. I am waiting for more, plz update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsome os mishty loved it very very much
Plz plz continue soon
Thanks for pm
Muahhh love u cont soon pure love as well
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I always thought os means one scene and it finishes
with one go but for some reason new os comes in parts
Which is not fair
It shouldn't be os it should b ss or ff

But sayin that it's a good concept so
Pls do cont.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow what a concept...kind of reminds me of Telepathy by Shruti but there both could talk to each other and only to each other. There were no visions so it kind of different...
loved it...cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing dear
i loved it
the way u have written was mindblowing
i really love it
plz cont soon dear
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats !!!!!! 4 d new os ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

awesome ... superb ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome concept dear loved it
waiting for the next part

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