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Posted: 13 years ago
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intresting story,
she seems to b the angel in his life
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Part 3


geet was sitting in the balcony when she felt a slight dizziness in her head.she became extremely happy.this dizziness only occurs when she is going to see some vision.normally she hate that but today she was happy bcoz she was going to see maan.last one month she was not able to saw him or any vision.why that happened she don't know.

sometimes geet minds became as a normal people.those times she became perfectly okay and fit.but she didn't actually like this normal life.she was used to her own world.and sometimes she completely became another geet who can see many things which anyone can't.she went into a trance when she saw things and she loved this feeling.

when geet entered the park she saw maan sitting on the bench hiding his face in his palm.she slowly came towards him.she knew he was restless.she put a hand on his shoulder softly and asked...

kaise ho aap maan...?


maan instantly look at her and hugged her tightly...

kaha chali gayi thi tum...?maine tumko kitna dunda...?mujhe laga k maine tumhe kho dia...?gussa thi to saza dia hota per aise dur kyu chali gayi...he said in choked voice.

main aapse gussa kyu hungi maan...aap hi to ho iss puri dunia me jo mere karib ho...mere apne ho...she said lovingly soothing him.

she slowly rubbed his back to calm him then made maan sat in the bench with her.maan just held her closely as if he free her she will be vanish.he held her,hugged her in that manner as if he knew her from ages.their closeness didn't feel odd for him.

agar tum gussa nahi thi to mujhse baat kyu nahi ki jaisi humesha karti thi..?aur mujhse milne bhi nahi ayi...?tumhe to pata tha na main tumhe dhund rahi hu...he complained childishly.

geet smiled seeing his cute face.her all fears about told him her truth vanish in a second.now she is confident maan will not think her mad.he will not hurt her.she decided she will tell him everything
.

maan last one month i was not able to see u... my mind just went blank.it's happened to me sometimes...she said sadly..

isilie tum mujhse baat nahi kar payi?...maan asked.

ha maan jaab dekh hi nahi payi to baat kaise karti...

ussdin jaab gharme aag lagi thi usdin bhi tumne mujhe dekha tha...?

ha..bilkul meri ankho k samne..maine dekha ki aap so gaye fir kuch der baad short circuit ki wajaise curtain pe aag lag gayi...she said with fear.

maan hugged her closer.then asked her curiously,

tum kaise yeh saab dekh sakti ho...?

i don't know maan.did u hear about ESP?.extra sensory perception.lagta hai usme ye saab hota hai..i actually don't know.saab mujhe pagal kehte hai.pehle main bhi sochti thi k ye saab shayad meri pagalpan hai.then gradually i realized that it's a power which only i have...she said sadly.

he cupped her face and pecked her forhead.

tum pagal nahi ho geet...tum bilkul thik ho and sabse acchi ho...tum ek pari ho jisne meri jaan bachayi..mujhe sahi rasta dikhayi na jane kitni bar...


then maan again said,

sirf tumhare karan aaj main ek machine se insaan bana hu..warna mujhe to life k aur important chiz and rishtey k taraf dhayan dene ki fursat hi nahi thi..

wo to hai...pehli bar jaab aap ko dekhi thi tabhi mujhe laga tha aap machin hi ho...geet giggled.

maan amuzud seeing her giggle...

u changed my life geet.last one month jaab tum mujhse baat nahi ki taab maine samjha what u mean to me.tumne mujhe pehli baar kaha dekha tha muje yaad aagaya geet.iss park ke hi paas.tumhara car kharab ho gaya tha.u were trying to get a lift.tumne meri gari roki thi and lift mangi thi.but i was on hurry for work so i just refused u.u stared at me with a astonished look.i didn't care much that time bcoz of my work.

tum bohot gussa ho gayi thi na usdin...?he asked feeling really guilty.

nahi to...ekdum gussa nahi aaya.mujhe laga aap bohot dukhi ho...itna dukhi k akele thodhi der
baithke apni dard ko pehchanoge uske lie bhi samai nahi hai...she said lovingly.

sachme tum ne ye socha tha...?

geet nodded then said,

ussdin k baad aap k saath main na chate hue bhi jur gayi...aisa mere saath pehle kabhi nahi hua.main vision dekhti thi but koi ek person ki nahi.it's random.but from that day i saw u every time.and slowly i am being addicted to it and also u.

when i first hear ur voice i also think i was going to mad.then i used to your voice.tum jaab nahi bolti thi taab pareshan ho jata...he smiled.

mujhe pata hai...geet hugged him tight.

then asked

aap ko ye saab ajib nahi lag raha hai maan...?ye meri baate,meri harkate...?she asked with concern.

nahi to tum to mujhe bohot peyari lag rahi ho...and about your truth i saw and realized that in front of my eyes so ajib kyu lage ga...maan caressed her hair.

they both sat there long time holding each other.then maan said
,

mujhe kabhi chorke maat jana geet.mujhe tumhari aadat ho chuka hai...i can't live without u...and..and...he hesitated little bit.

and what maan...?bolo na...?she asked him longing to hear those three words.she was dieing to hear those words.she loves him she knew it but she want to hear maan's feeling.

wo...wo...

maan was not able to said those words.he was feeling little awkward thinking what will be she thought about him.it's just there second meeting and he wants to say love u...it's little odd..but it's true he loved her.

kya maan aap bhi na...wo..wo ..kar rahe hai..ek i love u bhi nahi bol pa rahe ho...she irritated.

maan amused at her apnapan.how she made all this thing easy for both of them.he pulled her with a jerk and said in a husky voice...

i love u geet..i love u so much..i don't know from when i started to feel for u but i love u...i can't live without u...

i love u too maan...u r the only person who is only mine.who understand me and my feelings...a drop of tear fell from her eyes.

maan cupped her face and kis
sed her tears away.

aaj se tum akeli nahi ho geet.and tum rowogi nahi...ok?

geet smiled in tears.he looked at her eyes lovingly and they got lost in each other's eyes.maan then slowly inch towards and took her lips in his.he kissed her sweetly as if she will get hurt.he rubbed his lips on her then licked it.geet feeling dazed.she felt time stopped for her.she just felt his warm lips giving her pleasure.she responded equally making his control slip.he just went wild in passion.he sucked her lips hard and broke the barrier with his tongue.he just forgot everything and remembered sweet taste of her lips.geet open her mouth and maan's tongue slipped in.he taste her senselessly.he taste every corner of her mouth.geet moaned and responded with equal passion.tasting his mouth.he groaned and went deeply.they didn't remember how long they kissed.when the need of air became unbearable then they broke from the kiss.

geet's whole face was red due to blush and lack of air.her breathing became heavy.she hide her face in maan's chest.maan was also panting.he hugged her closer.

u taste so sweet jaan.i feel like eating u...he whispered in a seductive voice.


geet blushed more..

aap bhi na...chalo ghar chalte hai...sham ho gayi hai...

ha chalo per mere ghar...dadima se milana hai tumhe...

abhi...?nahi ...maan i m scared.dadima kya sochenge...she said with fear.

yehi sochenge ke unke pothe ki choice kitni acchi hai..no more argument.chalo...he held her hand.

geet stopped him and cupped his face.

thank u maan for coming into my life and made me complete...i love u...she kissed his cheek.

i love u too geet...he smiled and caressed her face with so much love.

The End

Love
Saki

thank u to all of u who read this OS and support me...Thank u so much...Love u all
.


Edited by mishty..sakii - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
amazing update...
reallyyy nice... loved it😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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😳
Awesome!!!!!!!! Update mishty
Loved it to the core
Mind blowing
Plz plz update soon next part and also update pure love
Muahhh xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
good to see her back to him
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
Awesome loved the love confession..
Geet was soo sweet..
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geetmaan1234

😳
Awesome!!!!!!!! Update mishty
Loved it to the core
Mind blowing
Plz plz update soon next part and also update pure love
Muahhh xxx



sweety ye OS three parts ki thi...so it's an end...😉

FF ki update jaldi hi milegi...umm...kal sham ko...😆😆😆

love u sweety,,,,
muahhh
...😳😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
great!!!! loved their confession and loved Geet's understanding... it was simply awesome...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow, lovely OS. Just when I though that things will get interestign, it ended and I remembered that this is an OS, not FF. Still nice work, keep it up.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very beautiful work,thanks 4 pm

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