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Posted: 13 years ago
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Pls continue soon


Thnx 4 pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dreaminvincible

I always thought os means one scene and it finishes

with one go but for some reason new os comes in parts
Which is not fair
It shouldn't be os it should b ss or ff

But sayin that it's a good concept so
Pls do cont.




yeah i knew that but sometimes we don't have enough time to write it in one go or concept is little long which we can't put as ss...bcoz it's should be atleast 10 parts to be a ss...so what to do...!!!!!

thank u for appreciating my work...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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my god...it beautifully awesome dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept...loved it..
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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this is so different!
amazing!
continue soon!
thnx 4 the pm!:)
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Part 2

maan aap kaise ho...?she asked lovingly.

maan turn back and looked at her...he surprised at her sudden appearance.he try to remember where he seen her but couldn't remember.but her face is known to him and also that voice.

kya main aap ko penchanta hu...i think i saw u somewhere...he said in a confused tone.

aapne mujhe pehchana nahi maan...she said with a smile.

i think i know u but i can't remember u now...maan said again try to remembering where he would be seen her and hear her voice.

abhi yaad nahi aa rahi to koi baat nahi...baad me yaad aa jaegi...

so aap yaha kya kar rahe ho wo bhi iss time pe...?maan asked her.he didn't even notice he started to talk with her as he knew her.

aap ki intezar..she said lovingly.

what..how can u know that my car will stop here...he said her suspiciously.

i knew everything about u...she said.

maan now became more confused.what was happening.he is little angry now but said nothing bcoz he thought she is familiar to him.he remain silent.

aap ke car ki us plug pe problem hai...she indicatd him
.

he again surprised but said nothing.silently check the car and saw that problem is actually there.he now being curious and stare at her,she cutely smiled at him.he mesmerized seeing closely her beauty.her cute smile,her beautiful face took his breath away.he lost in her.geet also looking at him without blinking.he is so handsome.his well built body,tight jaw,m shaped lip dazed her.she just gaped at him shamelessly.

their gaze broke by the passing car's horn.maan sat on the car and try to start the car and it's started.he felt relieved.

chalie aap ko aap k ghar chor deta hu...how can u go home from here.it's not safe...he said in a worried tone.

mujhe yaha se teen block samne chor dijie maan...she said sitting in the car.

maan started driving.he tried hard to remember her but couldn't.so he asked,

mujhe kuch yaad nahi aaraha...pls tell me who r u..?


i am geet...

geet what...?

sirf geet...

he now more confused.what the hell...who is this girl...

dekho don't play with me...park ke paas mera car kharab hua aur ussi samai tum hajir hui mare paas...don't u think that it's too much co-incident..?he asked her with rage.

if it's not co-incident then...?why r u bothering about it so much..is it that importanat...?she asked in a sad tone.

maan stopped the car with a jerk and held her shoulder tightly..

sach sach batao tum koun ho...?aur tum chahti kya ho...?agar sach nahi batayi to abhi main tumhe police station le jaunga...he said in fury.

geet don't try to free herself.she looked at him painfully.

aap mujhe aise maat dekho...koi mujhpe biswas nahi karta to mujhe bohot hurt hota hai..mujhe gaur se dekhie maan...kya aap ko lagta hai k main aap ka koi nuksan karungi...she said in a very sad tone.


maan immediately freed her.there is something in her voice which create guilt in him.he felt a tug in his heart...

sorry i don't mean that...i was just confused..

geet said nothing.she became more hurt.rest of the journey she became silent.maan felt more guilty seeing her sad face.

yehi pe rukh jayie.mujhe yehi utarni hai.main yehi se chali jaungi...

maan try to say something but she just left without turning once at him.he don't knew he felt something closed his heart just lost from him

maan is getting ready for going US for a important work.his mind went to the thought of geet.it's almost 1 month of that day when they met.maan just can't forget her face.he tried to find her but can't.he went that park and the place where he dropped her but couldn't find her.he became more restless now.he just stepping out from the room when he heard her voice again..

maan aap maat jaiye..pls maat jaiye...she repeated.

maan stopped his track and immediately that voice stuck in his brain.it's geet's voice.she is the one who always help him.now he understand why she told that she knew him.his heart ached at
the thought that how much he hurt her.she expected that he would be know her but he failed.he just hate himself to made her sad.
he didn't go US after that.he made some excuse and cancel the trip..after someday of his canceling the trip his grandmom became seriously ill.he admitted her in hospital and take good care of her.after some days later dadi's health recover.he understood why she stopped him.if he gone then his dadi could be died.there's no one to handle the situation better then him.he try to find her madly everywhere.whole one month he just tried to find her.but no result.

he became more sad now.he lost the hope to find her.so to just feel her presence he went to that park where she was on that night and sat on the bench thinking about her...


Love
Saki

pls do comment...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update...I guess Geet can feel his restlessnes and will come to meet him
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved it
cont soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nyc update...
sry bt M unable 2 undrstnd that whats happening??
I mean geet knw maan, bt maan dnt knw her.

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