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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

nahi re...see it shows as a link for you "My Work" but I was not able to add a link...it just comes as text. How did you add the link in the signature

oh...me was sorta of confused...for that..go to forum codes and and the 2nd category of 'images and links' and use the 2nd one which says 'my link'...just add the URL..and replace my link with what u want it to say..like mine says: 'My Works'...it should work...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

I love Reya...it is quite a lovely anme and it stuck with me when I first read your OS

yup...i love it too...my sis came up with it...it has no meaning or anything but still 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
U know Naz...i should be suggesting sleep and meds for ur 'sickness' but i feel like it won't be much help to u 🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
where is sherya madam? i have class in like 10 mins 😭..sheryu...me waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

oh...me was sorta of confused...for that..go to forum codes and and the 2nd category of 'images and links' and use the 2nd one which says 'my link'...just add the URL..and replace my link with what u want it to say..like mine says: 'My Works'...it should work...

Thanks it worked...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

U know Naz...i should be suggesting sleep and meds for ur 'sickness' but i feel like it won't be much help to u 🤣

Nah man!! ROFLROFL
I mean my foot doesn't hurt much anymore but when i walk it kills after a bit.. 😭
and its still swollen... 😕
and its been that way for 2 weeks...
i walk like a penguin now.. 😳
its embarassing..
The meds work for pain.. 😊😊
and well sleep wont work..
i hurt my right foot and i ssleep mainly on my right..
so its a pain tryin to sleep on my lefft! :~~
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 19

Doctor came out with a forlorn expression on his face. Maan who had raised his hands to hold Sameera dropped his hands and moved her back from him and rushed to the doctor.

Sameera stood there shocked at his cold demeanor towards her.

Maan: Doctor..Geet..Meri Geet..woh theek..

Dr: I am sorry Mr.Khurana she had lost too much blood already and her body was bleeding at various places too. We couldn't do anything. We are extremely sorry.

Hearing that her body was bleeding at various spots his hands curled into fists and he wanted to kill that B****** arjun with his bare hands even if that meant spending the rest of his life in jail.

He charged towards the dr and held his collar

U are lying..use kuch nahi ho sakta..use waada kiya tha mujse..woh..

DR:Mr. Khuaran pls control urself as he pried his hands off her..we couldn't do..

Before the dr could complete his sentence he rushed into the OT and saw the nurse was going to cover her face.

He shouted at her..LEAVE.. the nurse stared at him in blank horror.

He shouted again Leave . The nurse left the sheet and went out.

He walked to her and held her cold hand in his.

He bent to her and spoke..

Geet utho na..dekho meera bahaar khadi hai..

He looked at meera and then back at her and held her face in his palms.

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na phone pe bulaoge
Na shaam ki karaari chai, labo'n se yun pilaoge
Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na din dhale sataoge
Na raat ki nashili bye se neendh mein jagaoge
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

Aise bhi koi mazaak karta hai..chalo utho..dekho agar tum nahi uthi na,,toh main..

And he bent towards her ear and whispered..main tumhe bahut gud gudi karoonga..

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na dooriyaan dhikhaoge
Na thaam ke woh josh mein yun hosh se udaoge
Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na jhoot se sunaoge
Na rooth ke sirhane mein, remote ko chhupaoge
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

When he didn't see any movement from her still..he looked at her hand and then he gently placed the ring that he had given her that day on the beach on her finger again.

Dekho yeh kitni sundar lag rahi hai..

Aankh bhi tham gayi, na thaki
Raat bhi na bati, na kati
Raat bhi chherti marrti
Neend bhi lutt gayi, chiin gayi
Raat bhi na sahi, na rahi
Raat bhi laazmi, zaalmi
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na phone pe bulaoge
Na shaam ki karaari chai, labo'n se yun chhudaoge

Geet utho na..dekho ab na main Dusht Danav mode mein chala jaaonga phir mujhe mat kehna ke maine tumhe kaha nahi tha..aur phir tum mujhe jitna marzi manati rehna main manoonga bhi nahi.aur haan tumhare saath dhabbe par bhi nahi jaaonga..

Geet bahut ho gaya mazaak utho..when she still made no movements he took her lips in his and kissed her on her mouth.

He opened her mouth and probed into her while his hands caressed the marks on her skin wherever he could find them.

He left her mouth in a few minutes and then he felt her gurgule..

He looked at her again and her breath was coming in gasps, and he held her hand. She immediately tightened her hold on his hand.

He pressed the switch to call the doctor and kissed her face and forehead upteem no of times.

In a matter of seconds he heard the footsteps he informed them and dr checked her and immediately began the procedure of setting on the oxygen on her and her breaths which were labored now returned to normal.

The dr told him to leave but seeing the grip on his hand he didn't want to.

Mr.khurana we will have to remove the covers and we cant allow u inside.

He looked at their hands and then at the dr. SHE IS MY WIFE…now can u continue with the procedures cant u.

Meera and sameera standing outside heard the declaration and gasped..Meera in joy and Sameera in shock.

She was about to move in when Maan saw her and told her.

Ms.Deekshit u can leave from here and don't u dare show ur face to me or I may forget that u are woman.

With this he turned his attention back to geet and the dr who were busy giving her various medications though his gaze never travelled to her body and even if it did all the saw the marks that those brutes had left on her and his promise to avenge those who had done this to her and he also remembered that he would never cross her path if she asked him to but would remain as her shadow even if it would kill him day and night.

now tell me did that make u CRY..pls say yes..i so want that..😈

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazmaa

Nah man!! ROFLROFL
I mean my foot doesn't hurt much anymore but when i walk it kills after a bit.. 😭
and its still swollen... 😕
and its been that way for 2 weeks...
i walk like a penguin now.. 😳
its embarassing..
The meds work for pain.. 😊😊
and well sleep wont work..
i hurt my right foot and i ssleep mainly on my right..
so its a pain tryin to sleep on my lefft! :~~

oh dear that sounds bad...what happened
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Posted: 13 years ago

OMG!!😲

I Can't believe geet died... 😭
thank god the kiss of life worked lmao x
Good job shreya
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Nazmaa

Nah man!! 🤣🤣
I mean my foot doesn't hurt much anymore but when i walk it kills after a bit.. 😭
and its still swollen... 😕
and its been that way for 2 weeks...
i walk like a penguin now.. 😳
its embarassing..
The meds work for pain.. 😊😊
and well sleep wont work..
i hurt my right foot and i ssleep mainly on my right..
so its a pain tryin to sleep on my lefft! :~~

awww...get well soon hun..hope ur foot gets well soon 😊

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