Geet Screenplay(Stalker track) Update Pg5

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Krishna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Monguins? NOOO!!! I loved it! If only. This was awesome! :)

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riyaan01

@riyaan01

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

this is just brilliant. you are too good.👏

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Amazing OS 👏
loved it xx
Very well written 😃[

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Lily201

@Lily201

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Faria -my due gratitude to Miss Boogly aka pink,fluffy doodle -to have made such a brilliant screenplay-you know if they execute it I'll be in 7th heaven though it'd be miraculous to see KM draped in expensive curtains & nice decor again -as it is to have Geet in a nightie with (preferably) shirtless MSK😳-what with the pavitra Cvs 'n' Mr Pighead writer

But it was exactly the way I'd like to see the scene on my telly down to the last detail-and that is what gives me the goosebumpy feeling.

Did I mention that Geet whining for masquerade party for undiscriminated mingling while Maan worrying for her safety -was just so like them?-and that'd be breather especially for mending their character-consistency 😃

Moi lubs the part with stuttering Adi & Sholon-si dance with an enraged stalker ruing the scenario & ofcourse cam zooming on Geet's waist(yup I'm besharam sumtimes-but who wouldn't be?)☺️

I'd have jewelry removing or vice versa exclusively by MSK anytime(both has been done once -when Geet wore Khurana's khaandani jewels that Daadi gave 'n' kanjoos MSK had to come to take them but the guy grabbed the oppurtunity & did the honours himself -taking his time to do so😉 . While jewelry adorning complete with waist band -when Ballu's spirit overtook the slowww Khurana😆Yet I still I can't get over the effect such a scne has over me if it comes again*Sigh*)

And-yup-'clash of titans' precap has sumthing to keep us hooked⭐️

Edited by Lily201 - 14 years ago

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

part 1
wow thats interesting...
cont soon dear...

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Hahaha! As if I'm going to tell you that!

@rahmona_pakswe

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Woaha Faria! I bow down to your creative awesomeness.

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ExpectoPatronum

@ExpectoPatronum

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Wonder who that mystery man was...curse him...

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Lavanya

@maahifun

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Jimzi2716
Its awesome...👏

With Sundeep's direction it can come out brilliantly..I wish they'll add this as an epi..😳

Undoubtedly Sundeep will do a brilliant job with this, 😉but the writer is MP na 😲...so no hopes at all

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613528

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: walkintomylifex
DUN DUN DUN!

This was insanely well written.

You have a stalker too btw.

;)

Yay! I loved getting stalked and then pulling a scary face to chase'em off. But no one ever stalks me, because they're scared of my rabid unicorn :(

I so gotta start posting my FF's and OS's here, you get way more viewers 😆😆

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613528

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

A super small screenplay dedicated to our dearest Jugnu. Now, this scene would only take effin' five minutes to show!!! I tried to keep the character consistency whilst showing something we ALL want :\

[Jugnu sitting in the bar, with a glass of alcohol in front of him, He reaches out to take it but then stops]

Jugnu:- No Jugnu, you shouldn't. Try and refrain yourself from drinking. You can't be avadhe vadhe jasoos in Amreeca if you're drunk all the time! No wonder your cases never succeed, you're always drunk. Nahi Jugnus You can't drink, you shouldn't. What if you die tomorrow, Jugnus? Then how will you go to Amreeca? I bet even that Simranjeet ji, is in Amreeca all 'appy shappy and our neighber, Jaspreet ji, she's all alone. I think she wants you Jugnus, you're a vadhe handsome spy. From now on, you'll not touch this forbidden sinful drink, you'll move on and go to Amreeca with Jaspreet ji and become a vadhe spy.

[Scene ends, with Jugnu pushing away the glass and walks away]

Edited by Boogleton.Schiz - 13 years ago