MY FIRST OS - THOSE PAIR OF EYES updated Last part - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey dear! first of All congrats for ur new work.m happy dat u too decided to show ur Creativity over here.

Nd nw cuming to ur OS. i totally loved it. i havent read dis story written by Ruskin Bond but nw i think i should read it. D way u show everything over here was just awesome. very beautifully Written. i loved each nd every bit of it. m speechless rite nw

nd u knw wat dis story really touches my heart. its definitely going to be in d list of my favourites.

it happens several tymes dat we encounter to sum people during journey nd wished to meet dem again but it doesnt happen everytym so as per d ending well for dat no Jutis nd chappals for u as u havent shown any thing fictitious. its d realuty. not every encounter can turn into a Love story.

At d end wen u showed dat Geet is also Blind well i was totally speechless at dat tym. i mean i know it from d start dat Maan is blind nd derefore he's trying to cover up d fact dat he's not blind to d stranger but d way Geet was conversing i swear i didnt felt in d whole update dat she's blind too.

For me i give 100000000000000000000000000000 stars for dis nd m looking forward for ur future work nd ya if u want to continue dis OS den u can continue. its all ur choice

Ok i guess i said dat m speechless but still have written so much. but i had written watever came into my heart.

Totally Loved it. Awesome. keep up d gud work nd ya thanx for PM due to which i read such an beautiful OS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG nithi just now got time to read ur 2nd part dear simply superb i cant believe this kutty u wrote very well keep writing dear plz don stop wonderful dear an sorry for commenting so late dear u knw na i m not well past one week dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

its a beautiful story... though it doesnt have any ending its really touchy...

i am happy tht its not sad story(bcoz usually I Love happy endings) but just a story tht is awesome...


thanks a lot dear
yup me too... i also love happy endings

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

hey dear! first of All congrats for ur new work.m happy dat u too decided to show ur Creativity over here.

Nd nw cuming to ur OS. i totally loved it. i havent read dis story written by Ruskin Bond but nw i think i should read it. D way u show everything over here was just awesome. very beautifully Written. i loved each nd every bit of it. m speechless rite nw

nd u knw wat dis story really touches my heart. its definitely going to be in d list of my favourites.

it happens several tymes dat we encounter to sum people during journey nd wished to meet dem again but it doesnt happen everytym so as per d ending well for dat no Jutis nd chappals for u as u havent shown any thing fictitious. its d realuty. not every encounter can turn into a Love story.

At d end wen u showed dat Geet is also Blind well i was totally speechless at dat tym. i mean i know it from d start dat Maan is blind nd derefore he's trying to cover up d fact dat he's not blind to d stranger but d way Geet was conversing i swear i didnt felt in d whole update dat she's blind too.

For me i give 100000000000000000000000000000 stars for dis nd m looking forward for ur future work nd ya if u want to continue dis OS den u can continue. its all ur choice

Ok i guess i said dat m speechless but still have written so much. but i had written watever came into my heart.

Totally Loved it. Awesome. keep up d gud work nd ya thanx for PM due to which i read such an beautiful OS


thanks a lot
im thinking of continuing this story
im just waiting for the comments so taht i can proceed
thank u soo much again
very happy that u liked it😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: poongs123

OMG nithi just now got time to read ur 2nd part dear simply superb i cant believe this kutty u wrote very well keep writing dear plz don stop wonderful dear an sorry for commenting so late dear u knw na i m not well past one week dear


thanks akka
wil surely continue writing
ippo neenga eppadi irukeenga ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing OS..
I haven't read this story but I loved your version of it
Awesome
Beautifully written...They met each other only once but she left an impact on him.
A beautiful story.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Amazing OS..
I haven't read this story but I loved your version of it
Awesome
Beautifully written...They met each other only once but she left an impact on him.
A beautiful story.


thanks a lot :)


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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey I want another part I demand another part come on make puppy eyes😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i loved it dear...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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That was such beautiful and delightful story to read

Thank you
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