MY FIRST OS - THOSE PAIR OF EYES updated Last part - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
#11
That was beautiful.

Everything may not be permanent in life, but the impact it may leave is ever-lasting.
Edited by jazzerette - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazzerette

That was beautiful.


Everything may not be permanent in life, but the impact it may leave is ever-lasting.


yes dear glad that u liked it
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Posted: 13 years ago
#13
thanks nandy and congrats for turning out to be a goldie
Edited by niticool - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear Niti
That was awesome...In my previous comment I just wrote I couldnot imagine Maan Blind...but in your next part u even made Geet blind...😆

Jokes apart...

I loved each and evey word in your OS.. It is very well written I should say...Looking forward to more creations from you...

Luv,
Roshini
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet

Dear Niti
That was awesome...In my previous comment I just wrote I couldnot imagine Maan Blind...but in your next part u even made Geet blind...😆

Jokes apart...

I loved each and evey word in your OS.. It is very well written I should say...Looking forward to more creations from you...

Luv,
Roshini

thanks a lot
will surely write more...

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Posted: 13 years ago
#16
awesome update niti
the poem at the last was really nice
loved the way u picturised it
keep writing dear
the twist at the last was also really unexpected
do write more
or if possible convert this into an ss
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Posted: 13 years ago
#17
its really very touchy
loved it
😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#18
nice one dear...
sent u buddy invite...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

nice one dear...
sent u buddy invite...


thanks n yes i added u to my buddy list
glad that u liked my work
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
its a beautiful story... though it doesnt have any ending its really touchy...

i am happy tht its not sad story(bcoz usually I Love happy endings) but just a story tht is awesome...

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