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jazzerette

@jazzerette

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

That was beautiful.

Everything may not be permanent in life, but the impact it may leave is ever-lasting.

Edited by jazzerette - 14 years ago

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Nitya

@ChanandlerBong

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: jazzerette
That was beautiful.

Everything may not be permanent in life, but the impact it may leave is ever-lasting.

yes dear glad that u liked it

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Nitya

@ChanandlerBong

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: NANDY_BRU
awesome

thanks nandy and congrats for turning out to be a goldie

Edited by niticool - 14 years ago

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Roshini Mathews

@RoshiniManeet

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Dear Niti
That was awesome...In my previous comment I just wrote I couldnot imagine Maan Blind...but in your next part u even made Geet blind...😆

Jokes apart...

I loved each and evey word in your OS.. It is very well written I should say...Looking forward to more creations from you...

Luv,
Roshini

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Nitya

@ChanandlerBong

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: RoshiniManeet
Dear Niti
That was awesome...In my previous comment I just wrote I couldnot imagine Maan Blind...but in your next part u even made Geet blind...😆

Jokes apart...

I loved each and evey word in your OS.. It is very well written I should say...Looking forward to more creations from you...

Luv,
Roshini

thanks a lot

will surely write more...

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Chandlerbing1

@Chandlerbing1

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

awesome update niti

the poem at the last was really nice

loved the way u picturised it

keep writing dear

the twist at the last was also really unexpected

do write more

or if possible convert this into an ss

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

its really very touchy

loved it

😊😊😊

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

nice one dear...
sent u buddy invite...

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Nitya

@ChanandlerBong

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: spvd
nice one dear...
sent u buddy invite...

thanks n yes i added u to my buddy list

glad that u liked my work

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#20

its a beautiful story... though it doesnt have any ending its really touchy...

i am happy tht its not sad story(bcoz usually I Love happy endings) but just a story tht is awesome...