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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#201

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh
OH don't you DARE do a KHNH on us!! I don't want anymore heartbreak !! 😡 I think this story was enough for heartbreak for a while ya know. LOL!

Z

aare...it wont be same to same...vaise...i just realized...main Maan ko sirf ek baar maara hai...in There YOu'll be...the other stories...Geet dies...i dont know why i like killing her more 😆😆 chal...let me balance it out 😛
JAZ

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
You know me...i am always ready for a sad piece...😆...so i say u go for it...
or even the KHNH one that some ppl are already threatening to kill you for..
what can i say...we are just...unique 😃

he he...we are totally unique...we pave the path and everyone follows...saab dhamki aur galiyaan dete zaroor hai...but peeche peeche paden zaroor aate hai 😆😆😆
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Sameenaas

@Sameenaas

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#203

Originally posted by: sindu555

am ready with the dandas already ... for both of you

ummm ... i guess i've read an OS on a similar story ... I guess It was called "the last kiss"

U can hit me with that danda for sure... But not Jaz di...huh
'coz I hav already taken the responsibility...😆
Bhaago Di... 😲

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@roseinbloom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: jnawaz

aare...it wont be same to same...vaise...i just realized...main Maan ko sirf ek baar maara hai...in There YOu'll be...the other stories...Geet dies...i dont know why i like killing her more 😆😆 chal...let me balance it out 😛
JAZ

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"Let me balance it out" .. what is wrong with you woman!!! Just WHAT?! Who is the person responsible for feeding her with this idea .. look it .. my goodness she plans on making at least 3 more stories where she'll kill off our Maan .. koi isse samjhao .. balancing it out isn't ALWAYS necessary!! Wahahhh you've gone crazy and in the process mujhe bhi paagal kardiya .. I'm done complaining .. you keep killing .. I'll keep reading and weeping .. kyunki you're a gone case. *folds hands in defeat* 😭

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Sameenaas

@Sameenaas

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

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"Let me balance it out" .. what is wrong with you woman!!! Just WHAT?! Who is the person responsible for feeding her with this idea .. look it .. my goodness she plans on making at least 3 more stories where she'll kill off our Maan .. koi isse samjhao .. balancing it out isn't ALWAYS necessary!! Wahahhh you've gone crazy and in the process mujhe bhi paagal kardiya .. I'm done complaining .. you keep killing .. I'll keep reading and weeping .. kyunki you're a gone case. *folds hands in defeat* 😭
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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: Sameenaas

U can hit me with that danda for sure... But not Jaz di...huh
'coz I hav already taken the responsibility...😆
Bhaago Di... 😲

thank you!! at least someone is on my side!! 🤗 between you and reya i should be safe...but still...me bhaging for my life!! 😲 *jaz runs*
JAZ

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: Mk.Gh

😲

"Let me balance it out" .. what is wrong with you woman!!! Just WHAT?! Who is the person responsible for feeding her with this idea .. look it .. my goodness she plans on making at least 3 more stories where she'll kill off our Maan .. koi isse samjhao .. balancing it out isn't ALWAYS necessary!! Wahahhh you've gone crazy and in the process mujhe bhi paagal kardiya .. I'm done complaining .. you keep killing .. I'll keep reading and weeping .. kyunki you're a gone case. *folds hands in defeat* 😭

Z

im just saying...the sides are lopsided... the teeter totter is no fun if one side has all the weight...no teetering or tottering 😆😆😆...tune haar maan liya...haila...itni jaldi...no bribes or anything...tauba tauba zster...you should know that chocolate cake will pretty much get you anything...well almost...as for the idea giver...this time surprisingly it wasnt ashu 😉😉...woh joh tere comment pe haans rahi hai...under your comment here...she gave idea...😛 oh oh...and you throw hands up in defeat...not fold in defeat...kg ki baachi hai kya 🤣
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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#208

Beautiful story,altough u r fasinated 4 murderng one of leads but still I luvd it

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#209

@ Jazzy...don't worry girl..i got ur back 😃...oh ya...ur stalkerji might be late today...cause i have two tests tom...so i might sleep early...😳

@ Z...honey...u have my sympathy...😆...but i can understand ur pain...at least we can all cry together...and bond 😆😳

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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#210

I have no idea what its about but I love the title :) Here we go:

- Ok, that intro was amazing! It grasped my attention immediately. With such a glamorous place like Los Angeles, add in Hollywood and a beautiful starry sky, Maan and Geet...its perfect...

- I love how you know so much about the topic you write about. So many details about the library and Maan being a business law major...its great as a reader.

- Awww this reminds me of the Mayank and Nupur scene in the library. Where she takes his wallet and runs around, I think she trips on the ladder or just trips and they have their first kiss. Cheek kiss obviously. Its a very sweet scene.

- "I tell you to hurry up and get the book but what do you do?" the girl asked as she gripped Geet's arm more tightly. "You decide to go and fall into the arms of a law school hunk."

You're amazing :P

- I like how you're still using the name of characters in the show. With Yash and Nandini, I think its really cool...it gives you this feeling that you know the character even if their personality is different from the show.

- I really like this conversation with Maan and Nandini. With the Mr. Khurana and Ms. Malhotra thing. It almost sounds like they're teasing each other as friends.

- I like how you described Geet as she was exiting the lecture hall. How her look his SO simple but she still looks pretty and Maan is speechless upon seeing her. And of course Geets a freshman, younger than Maan :)

- HAHA to Adi saying "spiffy"! That was too funny.

- She's the sister I never hand? Had?

- I don't even know what to say. How did you think of a concept like that? Its incredible. Jaz hun, you've turned into a professional writer on me! I mean, feeling sad how Geet rejected Maan, Maan not realizing what he did wrong when it was right in front of him, Maan walking into the girls eating pizza and drinking soda...just subtly showing the contrast. It was amazing!

- Awww so there is a really Maan behind all the glitz :)

- Hmmm interesting...I like how the both keep their goals and priorities aligned...putting school first like that. I wish I did that, put school first I mean...but then I wouldnt be commenting on this FF. :P

- *cries* I hope I get into med school...

- I like your Maan and Mark conversation. You're just full of good morals today! I feel like this is your way of telling all us kids to stay in school :P Who knows what handsome guy we might find in the library...

- I should have said this a long time ago but I like how Maan calls her Angel instead of Geet but strangely, Geets never said anything about him calling her Angel.

- *Jas's not amused face* I'M TIRED and I have homework to do and three more updates to read and you give me THIS?! *NOT AMUSED*

Sigh, that was mean.

- Ahhh...so she admits to liking the nickname after all. I'm trying to ignore all the parts about cancer, its too depressing right now. No wonder he called her angel. Angels do their part and then they leave, they're not here to stay. What hurts the most is that she didnt even tell him...she just left. You know how hard that must have been for him? She leaves without telling him where shes going or when shes coming back and then he gets this stupid letter thats shes gone up to visit his mom. No goodbye. no nothing.

- You didnt say anything about this but I have this vision of Maan and Nandini ending up together. Because they were so alike and Geet kept on saying take good care of my Nandu. Great now I'm the horrible person! I always yell at you for not putting Maan and Geet together and pairing Maan off with Sameera and etc and here I am pairing Maan with Nandini myself!

Anyways...on to the next one. I feel like I'm trekking through mountains in terms of reading this updates...its so slow and takes so much time but you get to stop and enjoy the scenery for a while but then you fall... only to get up again and continue the journey...ok that was very strange...