Maaneet OS-The evening that did it

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Let me get back after having a glass full of water. Damn! Why am i blushing??!!

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Awesome piece of work! The beginning itself made me glue my eyes to the screen. A simple n common concept.. Yes there r ppl like Maan. I've two frnds like Maan n Geet n we so wanna go n shake them 2life. They both love each other but they fight with each other all the time.. When their love is visible for a third person like me. After reading da os, i felt like showing this story 2both of them. Haha. The entire story was straight,with NO NONSENSE kinda approach. Ur thoughts r clear,straight n beautiful..bought a smile on my face. Well not Only smile..i was grinning like a fool. Maan's last but one poem caused goosebumps..especially the last line. Hayye. Plz write more :D

Edited by --Shika-- - 13 years ago

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preethia

@preethia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

loved the os...

their expression of love thro poetry was awesome...

pl cont soon

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maaneetsangel

@maaneetsangel

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

superb ... awesome ... beautiful ...

loved it ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

loved ur poetry

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@mitzi11

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

brilliant & mindblowing OS

lovely poem

thank yu so much

bless yu

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rnvdbhavani

@rnvdbhavani

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

superb dear... continue it soon

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-knirwal-

@-knirwal-

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

OMGeee it was soo beautiful...Loved it...Do write more

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princess163

@princess163

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: mrk_1
wow nice shot yaar ... i loved it

Thanks a lot dear😊

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princess163

@princess163

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: abinash079
awesome os

Thanks😊

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

yes..i know i am so late with my comment but eid prep and eid killed me...so me very sowieee...

but this OS was just so awesomeee 😍😳...u described maan and geet's emotions so well that i was like awwwinggg away.the poetry without a doubt was too gud...i couldn't choose a fav one...but they were all great...honestly it was adorable...they really have great friends who made this happen...

i lovvveeeddd it so much...i demand more OSs from you now

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

...😊

...4 Pm me dear...😛

ur updates r

wid ...😃 ... & ...dear i ..just ..😃😛😉.. 4 ur updates dear...👏... 4 u.😳.. HAPPY GANESH UTSAV TO U DEAR..😊.. lov,❤️ Tama

P.S.: plz donn't copy paste my comments...i only make it 4 my frndz...if anyone do it again as i saw many of my comments r copied i'll report it...u guys plz make comment urself...u can use my componets indevisual...but donn't coppied it whole as my post...😡 P.S.S.: Plz guys also comment on my stuff...i tried to post comment in everyones...but my most of buddies didn't comment...if u not liked tell also...plz guys...😲😕 Note: guys...me sad...i PM ed almost 500 but comment only...17-18..increased 30 now...😕 i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update... but i updated 4 whom woh waited...i knoe just few..but i updated for them surely...but that surely ime said..that me really hurt abut u guys...😭me uncontorled sob.sob..😭