Maaneet OS-The evening that did it

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princess163

@princess163

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Madhukon
MD..LOVED IT YAAR... YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD POET .. THE SEQUENCE WAS CUTE AND ROMANTIC .. LOVE THE GIFT .. THANKS ONCE AGAIN .. :D

Thanks😊

Poet??😲 me??😲😲

lol😆😆😆😆

glad you liked the gift!

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Sakshi

@SakshiGarg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

lovely OS... i jst loved it!!!!!😃

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Shezi

@sashishezi

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

v.nice os and poetry is awesome

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
lovely OS swati...

being J or association with some1 always does the trick...😆

loved the debate...or should i say the expression of feeling...

both the english n the urdu poetry was amazing...

do continue to write such beautiful shots...

thnx for PM...

Thanks Jyo😃

yeah, the expression of feeling would do, debate to bahana tha😆

glad you liked the poetry coz mujhe urdu nai aati😛

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio
superb OS!

thanks 4 the pm!:)

Thanks for reading😊

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: anks_ams
lovedit swati:)

Thanks 😊

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: mystique_girl
Amazing poetry ... loved it 😃

Thanks for reading😊

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: --Shika--
Let me get back after having a glass full of water. Damn! Why am i blushing??!!

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Edit:
Awesome piece of work! The beginning itself made me glue my eyes to the screen. A simple n common concept.. Yes there r ppl like Maan. I've two frnds like Maan n Geet n we so wanna go n shake them 2life. They both love each other but they fight with each other all the time.. When their love is visible for a third person like me. After reading da os, i felt like showing this story 2both of them. Haha. The entire story was straight,with NO NONSENSE kinda approach. Ur thoughts r clear,straight n beautiful..bought a smile on my face. Well not Only smile..i was grinning like a fool. Maan's last but one poem caused goosebumps..especially the last line. Hayye. Plz write more :D

I am flattered!

Someone actually liked my work to this extent?😲

Thanks a lot😃 Yeah...a very common concept, just propped up in my mind during a train journey and I wrote the poems during that journey...the rest as soon as I reached home😆

Your friends? Go SHAKE THEM TO LIFE😉 maybe show them the story, or do something similar as Maaneet's friends did😆

The best compliment you can get from a person is that you made that person smile, and I am honoured to be the reason for that One smile😊

Thanks again!😳