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Posted: 13 years ago
omg... Shreya... what did u ve in dinner/ lunch...😛


I just read the last part... n that was... woo hooo... great...

after that sad story where u killed Maan n baby... this is amazing smooth writing...😳

n why r u stop writing on Gee Maan...??


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phewww... finally read it all...

i read the last part 1st and then i n 2 part...

Shreya... it has great messages hidden in it...

1.when happiness hails in troubles life... accept it and dont let your ego kill khushi or relationship...

2. It is good that Geet left or freezed her job for time being... and gave her full attention to herself n baby... which is good for both...

I ve a colleague with me in office... she got married some 3-3.5 years back... had a baby girl... n wanted to do job... her family gave green signal... but result her baby has become irritant because her mother is not with her... n she doesn't comes to her n the lady complain all the time my girl is going away from me... we have get loads of work to do n naturally one get tired... the lady is ignoring her home n result she having regular arguments between her n her husband... n when we joined office 8 months back she was again pregnant... right now shes is on maternity leave n ll come back after month... again leaving 2 babies behind n home to suffer...

I m not saying that married woman should not work or anything... but being a mother her daughter has first right on her time n energies... just because of her stubbornness the lady is suffering... she can take break from job for few years... when her kids start to go school and are grown up she can join back n get all the achievements... education experience n knowledge are things no one can take away n one can utilize them at any stage of life...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Arwenish

omg... Shreya... what did u ve in dinner/ lunch...😛



I just read the last part... n that was... woo hooo... great...

after that sad story where u killed Maan n baby... this is amazing smooth writing...😳

n why r u stop writing on Gee Maan...?? Nope i am not..i just went mad..😉

Thnks..hope u read all three..there were three posts for last part..hehe

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phewww... finally read it all...

i read the last part 1st and then i n 2 part... Why is this Arwenish..i am 😕

Shreya... it has great messages hidden in it...

1.when happiness hails in troubles life... accept it and dont let your ego kill khushi or relationship...

2. It is good that Geet left or freezed her job for time being... and gave her full attention to herself n baby... which is good for both...

I ve a colleague with me in office... she got married some 3-3.5 years back... had a baby girl... n wanted to do job... her family gave green signal... but result her baby has become irritant because her mother is not with her... n she doesn't comes to her n the lady complain all the time my girl is going away from me... we have get loads of work to do n naturally one get tired... the lady is ignoring her home n result she having regular arguments between her n her husband... n when we joined office 8 months back she was again pregnant... right now shes is on maternity leave n ll come back after month... again leaving 2 babies behind n home to suffer...

I m not saying that married woman should not work or anything... but being a mother her daughter has first right on her time n energies... just because of her stubbornness the lady is suffering... she can take break from job for few years... when her kids start to go school and are grown up she can join back n get all the achievements... education experience n knowledge are things no one can take away n one can utilize them at any stage of life... i So agree to this..u cant leave a kid on ur own..i am not very old but i understand the mechanics of relationships..and thts why i made sure that GEET is not working and also to tell that pps gotta realise the value of such a strong bond..Embarrassed

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice os..can you pls send me the links of your other works too..
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Posted: 13 years ago
shreya its awesome... shocked to see that u gonna stop writting...
well thank god err thank that person who changed ur mind set... love her... love u too😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: riya27

shreya its awesome... shocked to see that u gonna stop writting...

well thank god err thank that person who changed ur mind set... love her... love u too😳

mmm sure i will convey the msg to tht person..but hango hwo do u know my name..did i forget u or something again..Embarrassed
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

meee


sowiwwweee...sowwwieee...*holds her ears*...i am generally never this late with comments...but i forgot all abt it...my bad

Firstly...kudus to you...because u gave us such a long happy types epilogue...i mean...i have no idea how u manage to write so much...u know how i struggle to make my updates longer...but this was fab 😃
Loved the beautiful Khushi...the adorableness that she was...i wanted to pull her ckeeks...and give her a kissy wissy for being such a darling of a child for her parents 😳..may god give me children that are this easy to handle...😆
And maaneet...the cuteness that they were...loved them...their love kept growing and growing as they took care of each other...and sighhhsss...totally a happilt ever afters types e-story...😳
And then princess Khushi got two siblings to play with 😳...so so so sweet...

Loved the epilogue sheryu,,,it was awesome...and it was totally happy types...😃

REYA..baby its khwaish..not KHUSHI..as far as i remember..haha..and its ok..i was waiting from all..atleast one came out of 17..gosh i shall go kill the rest..😉
and abt happy...sana would have died had i killed someone here and jia too..so i thought chalo ek baar let everyone be alive..i shall take my revenge next time..😈..
thnks for the lovely comemnbt and abt length..i stopped warna i bet i could write another two or three pages..😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely os ... awsome ... luvvvd it 😊 pls write more stories
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Posted: 13 years ago
arre wah this 1 a suprise i never knew u cud write happy things u surely deserve a round of applause 4 this 1
nyc story it conpleted all aspects of maan nd geet's life their meeting courtship marriage fights and parenthood also
the way maan proposed 2 geet was awesome nd he loved her so very much so amazing
must say very well written u described all d incidents so very beautifully
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey how cud i miss d epi. it was most certainly d longest epi ever in h/o if
so cute long nd sweet epi
sweetest 1
thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnks amitha..this is abt 50 pages on word..hehe

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