OS:Love Forever and Always..epi pg 12/13

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maankigeet4ever

@maankigeet4ever

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

meee

sowiwwweee...sowwwieee...*holds her ears*...i am generally never this late with comments...but i forgot all abt it...my bad

Firstly...kudus to you...because u gave us such a long happy types epilogue...i mean...i have no idea how u manage to write so much...u know how i struggle to make my updates longer...but this was fab 😃

Loved the beautiful Khushi...the adorableness that she was...i wanted to pull her ckeeks...and give her a kissy wissy for being such a darling of a child for her parents 😳..may god give me children that are this easy to handle...😆

And maaneet...the cuteness that they were...loved them...their love kept growing and growing as they took care of each other...and sighhhsss...totally a happilt ever afters types e-story...😳

And then princess Khushi got two siblings to play with 😳...so so so sweet...

Loved the epilogue sheryu,,,it was awesome...and it was totally happy types...😃

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

hey dear that was really long but i absolutely loved it...
so beautifully written...

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bindu

@bangalores

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

loved the OS but the PS made me😕😕😭

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mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: bangalores
loved the OS but the PS made me😕😕😭

Bindu..thts my work..i mean being a DQ..not u..😉😉

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hopehot

@hopehot

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Loved it

thanks for pm

sad to know u won't be writing any more

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-Elfin-

@-Elfin-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

I read the entire story again from the beginning and loved it even more.😃

The first part raises a very important and pragmatic issue specially for working women these days. I am more than happy that they were able to keep aside their differences and ego and bonded for life.😳

The epilogue is fantastic.👏

The changing relationship between Maan and Geet with the growth of the baby is beautifully portrayed. 👏

The mother-daughter bond is amazing. 😊

As students of science, we have been taught the importance of the dense yellow source of life or breast milk which contains the basic nutrients in perfect ratio and the correct temperature, but the most important thing is the emotional security provided to a child during a feed is unique and non-replaceable.😊

I somehow felt, even though it was Maan who insisted on having a child, it was Geet who discovered herself more after actually having her.😳

And of course the ahem ahem scenes were HOT as usual.☺️

Great story and I am conveniently ignoring your "P.S." Shre.😉

I will waiting till you write your next OS and dedicate it to me.😃😆

Thanx for the pm love.🤗

Mwahhh ❤️

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mchopra

@mchopra

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Yes mana u are allowed to ignore it..i promised u and u will get it pakka..

and abt changiing Geet...Finally somone Got it..yes i so wanted ppl to get that..and girl who anted a crrier became a mother and never regretted it and she gave 3 yrs of life to Khwaish without a whim..and even at 2 and half yrs she wanted to be breastfed she never objected...only few mothers can do that...and Geet did that..

she had lost her parents..she gave all the love she wanted to khwaish..and she will shower the sme on azaan and sahara...

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-Elfin-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: mchopra
Yes mana u are allowed to ignore it..i promised u and u will get it pakka..
and abt changiing Geet...Finally somone Got it..yes i so wanted ppl to get that..and girl who anted a crrier became a mother and never regretted it and she gave 3 yrs of life to Khwaish without a whim..and even at 2 and half yrs she wanted to be breastfed she never objected...only few mothers can do that...and Geet did that..
she had lost her parents..she gave all the love she wanted to khwaish..and she will shower the sme on azaan and sahara...

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