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Hehe...sorry for being super late but here I am to comment finally😃
yeah the epi was super super balke duper rocking I thorougly enjoyed, one thing which is commendable is that even being so long in length one could not lack the interest in it, that was the best point. Not to forget to mention that it was way tooo steamy hot😉 LOL
But for teh very first time I have a criticism to make on U nonono ur ff😆 ok now that would be rude if I say so that it was short people will definitely hit me including U with rotten tomatoes but don't U think U just abruptly ended...ok I guess esa sirf mujhe laga but srsly shreya at end when U seddenly wrote delivery hogayi I know U could have write it in a more broad way.
P.s. Sorry but I have to go leaving the comment Abruptly yahan chota sa blunder hogya hai glass toot gya n meri finger cut gayi will continue this later n let U know in detail okie😉
yeah the epi was super super balke duper rocking I thorougly enjoyed, one thing which is commendable is that even being so long in length one could not lack the interest in it, that was the best point. Not to forget to mention that it was way tooo steamy hot😉 LOL
But for teh very first time I have a criticism to make on U nonono ur ff😆 ok now that would be rude if I say so that it was short people will definitely hit me including U with rotten tomatoes but don't U think U just abruptly ended...ok I guess esa sirf mujhe laga but srsly shreya at end when U seddenly wrote delivery hogayi I know U could have write it in a more broad way.
P.s. Sorry but I have to go leaving the comment Abruptly yahan chota sa blunder hogya hai glass toot gya n meri finger cut gayi will continue this later n let U know in detail okie😉
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