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namita25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

amazing update...I just loved it.

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nishi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

omg omg...totally diff. Concept...
Fst prt is awesome numraah...
Precap is so touching...
One line is comin' in my mind...
Tht ye dosti hm nhi choraingai...he he he

Update soon dear...
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Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Gr8 start
Oooh so in office thers no friendship just boss and employee
Cont soon Xx...
Thx 4 the PM

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-NSKluvsSRK-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: geet06
omg omg...totally diff. Concept...
Fst prt is awesome numraah...
Precap is so touching...
One line is comin' in my mind...
Tht ye dosti hm nhi choraingai...he he he

Update soon dear...
Waiting

Thanx so much nishi dear.I love u alot.

Thanx very much again😃

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TeamMcSwarek

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Great part!
cont soon
thanks for the pm!

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-NSKluvsSRK-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Thanx guys😃😃😃

Edited by sliaan - 14 years ago

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afsha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Nice strt

Loved the 1st part

Update soon

Plz add me to ur pm list

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soni4eva

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

awsome update lovd it

relii relii cute plzz update soon x

fanx 4 da pm 😊

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Mishti13

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

nice intro and nice starting do continue...

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-NSKluvsSRK-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Ye Dosti hum ni toren ge

Toren ge hum magar tera sath na chore ge

Conference room:
Maan:Ye tum kya k rhi ho Geet?
Geet:Sorry sir.
Mr.Rathore:Mr.Maan.Sb kch theek to he na?
Maan:Ji Mr.Rathore.Everything is fine.Just give me a minute.
Maan:Geet tum mere sath chalo.
Geet(to herself):Aaj to tu gyi kam se Geet!

They both went out,Maan takes her to his cabin.He picksup a file nd gives it to Geet.
Maan:Ye lo Geet.
Geet:Ye kya he Maan mera matlab he Maan sir!
Maan:Us file ki copy.
Geet:Kya?
Maan:Han Geet.Mjhe pta tha k tume koi kaam diya jaye aur tum garbar na kro.Aesa ho hi ni skta.
Maan and Geet smiles.
Maan:Ab chale.
Geet:Ji chaliye.

Both enters in Conference room.Geet gives a superb presentation.
Mr.Rathore stands and claps for Geet.
Mr.Rathore:Excellent Miss Geet.
Geet:Thanks.
Geet looks towards Maan and smiles.He also smiles back to her.

Mr.Rathore:Now I am going.I shall come tomorrow to discuss details.
Maan:Ofcourse Mr.Rathore.

Everyone leaves.
Geet comes to Maan.
Geet:Maan Thanx to you.Tmari mera matlab he aapne meri izzat rakh li.
Maan:Its ok Geet.Ye to aik dost ka farz he.
Hmari ye dosti kbhi ni toote gi.
Geet:Han Maan kbhi bhi ni!
Maan:Ab chale.

Office timings are over.Geet comes in Maan's room.
Geet:Chalo mjhe ghar drop kro Mr Maan Singh Khurana.
Maan:Kya matlab he tmara?
Geet:Ji han mera dil ni kr rha taxi me jane ka.
Maan:Dekho Geet mjhe kaam he.
Geet:Kaam gya bhar me.
She holds his hand and pulls him.
Maan:Ok ok Lets go.(both smiles)

In Car:
Geet:Maan gari roko!
Maan stops the car.
Maan:What happened Geet?
Geet:Mene icecream khaani he.
Maan:Uff ho Geet!
Geet:Mjhe ni pta.Chalo na Maan please please please.
Maan:Ni Geet.
Geet:Han Maan.
Maan:Ni Geet.
Geet gets out of car.
Geet:Han Maan.
Maan puts his hand on his head.
Maan:Pta ni mene is ladki se dosti kyun ki?
Maan also gets out of car.Both walk towards ice-cream stall.

At Stall:
Geet:Bhai Sahab do icecream dena.
The man gives her 2 ice creams.
She holds both of them and starts eating both.
Maan:Geet meri icecream?
Geet:Khudi le lo.Ye to meri hen.
Maan:UFF! aik ur icecream do.
He gives 1 more icecream to Maan.Both eats the icecream laughing and talking.

Precap:Geet is in Maan's house.
Geet is going to leave but Vicky holds her hand.Geet says leave me

Edited by sliaan - 14 years ago