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Originally posted by: abinash079

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amazing updates

AWESOME!
interesting precap
cont soon
thanks for the pm!

awsome update der freindship iz relii nyc

lovely upd...
Wow geet msk per etna hak... 😉

N vicky u devil 😡
Upd soon dear...

Guys I am so sorry for the delay in updating this part and it is Ramadhan and so I was busy.

Maan's house(Khurana Mansion):
Maan is sleeping in his room.Dadi comes in.
Dadi:Good Morning Maan beta!
Maan opens his eyes and looks towards Dadi.
Maan:Good Morning dadi ma.
Dadi:Maan bete Geet ka phn aya tha.Wo keh ri thi k wo abhi thori der me tmse milne ayi gi.Shayid koi kam tha use.
Maan:ji Dadi ma.Me zara fresh ho jaon.

The hall:
Vicky is sitting in the hall reading a girls magazine:p
The door bell rangs.
Vicky:Nakul! Nakul!
Uff pta ni kaha chala gya!!Mjhe hi kholna pre ga ab.
He walks to the door and opens it.Geet is standing at the door step.
Vicky:Oh Geet.Kese ho tum??(gives her a flirting look)
Geet ignores him and comes in.
Geet:Maan kaha he.Mjhe kam that us se...
Vicky comes near Geet.
Vicky:Kaam to mjhe bhi he tmse!
Geet:Mene pucha Maan kaha he??
Vicky:Ghusa kyn hoti he.Wo apne kamre me he.
Geet is oing to leave that Vicky holds his hand.Geet turns.
Geet:Mera hath choro!
Vicky:Itni jldi kya he meri Jaan.

VICKY!!!!!

Geet and Vicky both turn back.Maan is standing there.He comes to them.
He pushes Vicky away.
Maan:Dafa ho jao yaha se warna aik lgao ga!
He raises his hand.
Geet:Maan ruko! Choro is se.
Vicky looks at Geet and leaves.
Maan:I am so sorry Geet.Ye Vicky...
Geet:Koi bat ni Maan.
Maan:Betho Geet!
Both sit down in lounge.
Maan:Dadi ma bta ri thi k tme mjhse koi kaam he.
Geet:Han Maan.Mjhe do din se faltoo calls aa ri he.Or wo mjhe kisi hotel me bula rha he.
Maan:Kese calls.Me kch smjha ni
Geet:Maan wo aik larke ki calls aati hen.Wo kehta he mjhse Pearl hotel k crystal hall me milo.
Maan stands up.
Maan:Do din se tme wo tang kr rha he aur tum mjhe ab bta ri ho.Me choru ga ni use.
Geet:Is liye to tmare pass ayi hun.Usne mjhe aaj raat 12 bje Pearl hotel bulaya he,Or me chahti hun k tum waha jao.
Maan:Theek he Geet.Tm fikr mat kro.
Geet:Acha me ab chalti hun.
Maan:Theek he.Bye
Geet:BYe.

In car:
Its night.And Maan is driving the car in a full angry mood.He looks at his watch wher 5 min are left in 12pm.
Maan:Choru ga ni use.
He reaches pearl hotel.He goes in.

In hotel:
Maan comes to the reception.
Receptionist:Yes sir
Maan:Where is crystal hall??
Receptionist:Go straight sir!
Maan:Ok thanks.

He goes straight and enters the hall
"HAPPY BIRTH DAY TO YOU"
Everyone is standing there.All office staff,Dadi ma ang Geet comes from his back singing birthday song.
Maan smiles looking at her.
Geet:So kya hua Maan...sir???
Maan:Geet!! tum ni na!

Precap:A new entry.

superb update loved it
loved the surprise bday party that geet planned for him

aww that was nice a surprise party! love the friendship between them