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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: piya-

First of all sorry for the delay dear

Okay acc to me the girl is Sameera maan's exGF hence she is thinking k main maan ki family k saamne kaise jaau
Good to see k geet ko maan k aaspaas hone ka ehsaas ho raha isse toh hum sachhi mohababt kehte hain
well sameera ko tho ghar mein inform karna hi padega...
good to see that atleast maan ko geet ka naam yaad hai warna serial mein toh cvs ne ek major twist hi de diya maan ko geet ko chodkar baaki sab yaad hai...
good start dear continue soon
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thanks dear...not a problem for me if ur like button is not working...!!
ur comments are the real appreciation for me...!!
dn wry main CV's ki tarah nai likhungi yar...ab vo to vo hai or main to main hu na...😆😆
ill keep in mind ki end mein sachi mohabbat ki hi jeet ho...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie



thanks dear...not a problem for me if ur like button is not working...!!
ur comments are the real appreciation for me...!!
dn wry main CV's ki tarah nai likhungi yar...ab vo to vo hai or main to main hu na...😆😆
ill keep in mind ki end mein sachi mohabbat ki hi jeet ho...!!!

yes dear wo toh wo hai aur aap toh aap hai aap toh lajawab hai...i trust u completly i know k end mein maneet ek saath honge. n haan next time pm me otherwise a big katti with u
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Simply awosome
Do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: piya-

yes dear wo toh wo hai aur aap toh aap hai aap toh lajawab hai...i trust u completly i know k end mein maneet ek saath honge. n haan next time pm me otherwise a big katti with u



yar piya dn do that...ill pm u i promise...!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie



yar piya dn do that...ill pm u i promise...!!

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
awesome
plz continue soon & pm me for next part .
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
great one

I think it may be his X
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Posted: 14 years ago
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UPDATE TIME

LOVE BEYOND PAINS

The girl was continuously thinking should she tell at Khurana Mansion that maan is in hospital or not'..!!

Maan was bit tensed about who is he and y is he taking geet 's name again and again'


thinking so he slept because of the medicines he was given.


At KM

Geet condition was getting serious minute by minute'She had a strong feeling that maan was in some trouble and she wanted to find her maan as soon as possible. Everyone was near her'lucky, nandini, daadima, dev but one missing was her maan'!!

Nakul tells everyone that food is ready'..daadima tells everyone to take dinner but geet says she wont eat anything till she sees her maan in front of her. Daadima convinces her very much and told her that she will feed her with her hands'..geet agrees but tells daadima to eat first'..!!

Daadima asks geet to take rest by the time she comes back. Everyone heads towards dinner. Geet in front of Babaji's pic is praying for her maan. " babaji aap to jaante hai na ki aapki geet maan ke bina kitni adhuri hai to aap aisa kyu kar rahe ho mere saath'..please babaji mere maan ko mere pass wapis bhej do'..main unke bina ek pal nahin reh sakti hu'..upar se meri bechani badti ja rahi hai'.pata nahin maan thik to honge na'..please baabji unhe mere pass bhej do na "'and starts crying'.!!!


Geet suddenly faints and fells'' At the dinner table daadima asks nakul to take food in geet's room.

In the hospital the girl finally decides to call up at KM and tell them about maan's condition. She calls up'.!!

The phone rings and daadima gets up to pick the call''as soon as she is about to pick up'Nakul shouts'.. geet madam behosh ho gayi hai'..everyone rushes to geet's room and the call is left unreceived.

Daadima tells dev that we need to take geet to hospital'.she says waise bhi geet ne kuch bhi nahi khaya hai or upar se ab unki tabiyat ka bigadna'.hume inhe jald se jald hospital lejana hoga'.aap car nikalwaiye.

Geet is taken to the same hospital where maan is'' both of them unknowing that they are near to each other. Their rooms are even near to each other. Geet is being checked by doctors'..everyone is tensed for geet.

On the other hand the girl asks the condition about maan,,,,,the doctor says'.ab jaldi hi unke ghar par khabar kar dijiye'.we need to tell them'..waise darne wali baat to nahin hai par aap unhe bata dijiye.

The girl says, doctor maine call kia tha par kisi ne uthaya nahin'..par main unhe jaldi hi inform kar dungi'dn wry'

Doctor nods and leaves''!!!

The girl turns up and sees khurana family sitting in tension'..she is surprised that she dint even informed but how have they reached here'..she walks up towards them''and says daadima aap yaha???

Dadima(shocked);😕😡 aap?

The girl touches her feet but she backs off'..

Dadima: 😡aap yaha par kya kar rahi hai??

The girl: nahi daadi vo maan'

Dadima: maan ka aap naam mat lijiye'.aap ki wajah se unhone itna kuch saha hai'apne unhe kya se kya bana diya''.hamare maan to bilkul jeena hi bhul gaye the'..kyu kia aapne aisa kyu'.chali jaiye aap yaha se sameera''badi mushkil se maan hame wapis mile hai'vo bhi haste khelte maan'..jo jeena jaante hai''!!

(Dev, lucky and nandini are standing behind them and listening)

Sameera: daadi main janti hu ki meri galti hai par aap meri baat sun to lijiye'.

Dadima: kya sune hum''maan ki zindagi mein apke liye ab koi jagah nahi hai''waise bhi hum kafi pareshan hai ek to maan hume nahin mil rahe or ab geet'..!!

Sameera: geet'.maan bhi bar-2 yahi naam le rahe hai'kaha par hai geet dadima??

Dadima(crying) vo andar doctors dekh rahe hai..and suddenly realizes maan bar bar naam le rahe hai'iska matlab apko pata hai ki maan kaha par hai'' Dekhiye sameera hum nahi chahte ki aap maan ki zindagi mein wapis aakar koi or problem create karein'.ab chup chap bataiye maan kaha par hai,,,pata hai hum sab kitne pareshan hai unke liye'.or bechari geet'soch soch kar hospital pahunch gayi hai'..jaldi bataiye kaha par hai maan??

Dadima: waise hum apko ache se jaante hai'aap zaroor maan ko nuksan pahuchana chahti hai par iss bar aisa nahi hoga'kyuki maan apko bhula kar apni zindagi mein aage bad chuke hai'or unki geet se shaadi bhi ho chuki hai'

Sameera in tears😭😭 and says daadima muje apni galti ka ehsaas hai isliye main wapis aayi thi aap sab se maafi maangne''

Daadima: ab apki baatein hum par koi asar nahi karengi😡😡'..please bataiye sameera maan kaha par hai??

Sameera: vo daadi maan muje road par mile the kafi chot lagi thi'main unhe hospital le ayi hu'.or vo uss room mein hai'points towards a room'maine aapko call kia tha par ghar par kisi ne call nai uthaya'.

Everyone happy as well as shocked to hear this'.!!

Daadima: chot ayi hai'..sab thik to hai na'..

Sameera: dadima doctors ne bataya ki maan ki sir pe chot ayi hai jiski wajah se vo sab bhul gaye hai'sirf geet ka naam yaad hai unhe.

Everyone in tears😭😭''rushes towards maan's room''!! See maan from outside who is sleeping'.daadima says'maan ye kya ho gya bte'.and cries'.dev consoles her and makes her sit on the chair.

The doctor comes after examining geet and tells that geet is perfectly fine and there is good news'..geet is pregnant'.!!

Everyone in a state where they don't know how to react'..but the one who gave reaction is sameera'.!

Sameera(thinking) maan sach mein aage bad chuke hai main to sab kuch thik karne ayi thi par lagta hai maan mere liye nahi kisi or ke liye bane hai'.

Daadima enters Geet room and congratulates her.

Geet: daadima jab maan ko pata chalega to vo kitna khush honge na'.bas vo jaldi se mil jaye'muje unhe ye baat jaldi se sunani hai

Daadima starts crying listening this.

Geet: kya baat hai aap ro kyu rahi hai'kahi maan'..

Daadima: nahi geet aisa nahi hai maan ka pata chal gaya hai

Geet: kaha hai vo???

Daadima: yahi par hi hai apke pass

Geet: jaldi bataiye daadima mujse wait nahi ho raha

Daadima: geet bte vo iss hospital mein admit hai

Geet shocked and is in tears'..!!!

Well m sorry friends' I know dint have maan much in this update'but I had to bring out the story that ways'so sorry for that'!! Well maan will be fully present in the next update which will be final as well'.!! Again sincere apologies if I disappointed u'..!!😭😭

Well will be waiting for ur comments please tell how was it'..!!😳😳


Edited by minnie_tweetie - 14 years ago

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