OS...Love Beyond Pains..updated final part page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Well thought to write an OS on the current track going on in GHSP'..!!! will continue to a total of 3 parts if u will like it'..!!


LOVE BEYOND PAINS



Here is it...hope u like it...!!!

Maan has been beaten up by the goons and has got serious injuries on his head and has not met geet till now. He somehow escapes himself from pammi but is bleeding badly, running to get a ray of hope so that he gets back to his place.

He looks so tired, restless, thirsty''can't even walk'..wanting somebody to help him but all in vain'.the forest area makes things difficult for him to find the actual path. He falls on a tree'.and gets support by a branch..!!



Meanwhile geet in a gurudwara praying to her babaji so that she could meet her maan as soon as possible. She prays, "maan jaha bhi ho thik ko'..sahi salamat ho, babaji mere maan ka khyal rakhna, please jaldi se unhe mujse milwa do". Her prayer generates strength in maan and maan starts walking.

He manages and comes on a highway. Cars are passing here and there but maan is helpless. He doesnot have that much power in him so that he could ask for help. He is still walking but the condition worsens for him. Finally he met with an accident and he is unconscious. The people gather around him.

Geet on the otherhand is getting more restless, has tears in her eyes, she feels that something wrong is going on and again prays to babaji, " babaji muje aisa lag raha hai maan kisi musebat main hai'.unhe har musebat se bachana babaji". Lucky takes her back and consoles her that everything will be fine soon.



Geet and lucky are passing the highway where they see some crowd around a person. Geet is lost in maan's thoughts and doesnot reacts. She feels maan's presence around her. Tells lucky that maan is somewhere very near to her but lucky says how is it possible, jijaji will be back with us very soon and they passed.


No body is ready to help maan. He is still lying on the road. A car passes by him and suddenly stops. A girl comes out from the car who is shocked to see him in such a situation and shouts- "maan". She asks the crowd to help her so that she could take maan with her.



She takes maan to the hospital. The doctors bandaged his wounds and did his MRI and CT scan. The girl asks doctors about maan's condition on which they say that he has got serious injuries on his head but the reports will make things clearer.


Maan is in the ICU and that girl seeing him from outside. Girl (self-thought) ghar pe sabko batana hoga ki maan hospital mein hai. Par main sab logo ke saamne kaise augi.

Maan gains conscious and he first word that comes out from his mouth is Geet, on the other hand geet sitting in her room feels that maan is calling her. She is running madly but dadima stops her.

Dadima " ye kya pagalpan hai geet'kaha pe bhaagi ja rahi hai'.hum jaante hai aap maan ko lekar paresha hai'par apki aisi haalat humse dekhi nahi jati" and hugs geet.

Geet tells dadima that she is feeling that maan is calling her' and shouts "mere maan ko wapis la do"

Dadima too has tears in her eyes. She consoles her " dekhna geet maan jald hi hamare pass honge" aap shant ho jaiye"



The girl is stunned to listen that name from maan's mouth but more than this she immediately rushes to the doctor and tells that maan is awake.

The doctor tells her that maan has got badly hurt on his head due to which there is a possibility that he has lost his memory but lets check about the present state.

Maan is continuously saying geet's name. Doctors come and ask maan about how is he feeling? he nods his head and again says geet.

Doctor tells that girl that in order to see maan in good health they have to find out geet'.! The girl says I know each and everyone from maan's family but has never heard about geet. but we will try and find her out.

The doctor leaves. The girl sees maan from outside and says maan apki zindagi mein to sirf main thi ye geet kaun aa gayi??

In the night maan gets up but he is unable to recognize himself''.ye kya hua hai mere sath'.kaun hu main or ye geet kaun hai?? Kyu baar baar ye naam muje itna pareshan kar raha hai''kaun dega in sab ke jawab?????


[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AUeJWsxqRgs[/YOUTUBE]


Precap: who is that girl???😕😕 Will she call up at KM and tell about maan's condition''will geet find her maan''..I will continue if u think its worth continuing'..!!!😳😳


Waiting for your valuable comments...!!!


Next Update: Page 7

Final Update: Page 14

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Posted: 14 years ago
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finally
me first for the first time in your posts
this one shot is really awesome
too good
the pics you chose were very apt
overall loved it
very interesting and gripping story
even bit suspense too
would love to read next parts asap
thank you so so very much for posting it in a new thread
love you dear

continue soon
eagerly waiting
Edited by millie_maaneet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

finally

me first for the first time in your posts



now what do i say,,,,,i always wanted u to be the first...but this time m damm nervous yar...sirf tere liye post kia hai maine
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie



now what do i say,,,,,i always wanted u to be the first...but this time m damm nervous yar...sirf tere liye post kia hai maine


tu chinta nath kar
you will get a brilliant response
me sure😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Interesting... loved it
Pls add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oooh interesting
Is the girl sameera?
Cont soon Xx...
Du pm me :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey awesome...is that girl sameera...cont soon i would like 2 get pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its great i think the girl is sameera continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome start.
loved it
let me guest that girl is sameera and I don't think she will tell or may be she will
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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congrats !!!!!!! 4 d new os ...

interesting start ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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