OS...Love Beyond Pains..updated final part page 14 - Page 8

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FINAL PART


LOVE BEYOND PAINS


Geet: daadima maan yaha pe admit hai'sab thik to hai na

Daadima: haan bte vo thik hai par'.she stops

Geet: please daadima jaldi bataiye muje ghabrahat si ho rahi hai

Daadima: bte maan apni yadasht kho chuke hai'unhe kuch bhi yaad nahi hai'..

Geet in shocked and in tears '..is speechless'..daadima tries to talk to her'..takes her name twice or thrice'.


Daadima: geet'geet..geeet

She starts crying'..and hugs her''daadima ye kya ho gaya hai''aaj itni khushi ka din tha''aap jaanti hai maan ko iss din ka kab se intezar tha'..or jab vo khushi hame mil rahi hai to'..maan'..

Daadima: housla rakho bte sab thik ho jaega

Geet(getting impatient): daadima maan kaha hai muje abhi unse milna hai

Daadima: bete vo saath wale room mein hai'..par geet suniye meri baat'.

Geet doesnot listens to her and starts moving towards her maan''she is madly running towards maan'shouting her name'.and approaches maan's room'.Daadima is running after her.


Meanwhile Sameera is standing close to maan's room. She is really shocked to see geet in that situation''and says GEET'.

Geet hears someone calling out her name and stops''

Sameera: to aap hi hai maan ki geet jinka naam maan baar- baar le rahe hai'.

Geet: kya?

Sameera: haan geet maan bar- bar aap hi ka naam le rahe hai

Geet: par aap maan ko kaise jaante ho??

Daadima comes and tries to interrupt in between. Geet asks her about that girl'..daadi says she is maan's old friend, sameera and she has saved maan and brought her to the hospital. Sameera is bit shocked hearing this.

Geet: aap jaanti nahi hai ki maan ko aapne wapis lakar mujh pe kitna bada ehsaan kia hai'..main kis taras se aapka shukariya aada karu'.maan ke bina geet adhuri hai''(sees maan from outside who is sleeping).

Geet: pata nahi baabji ne hamari kismat mein kya likha hai'..jab maan or main apni zindagi mein khush hote hai tab koi na koi pareshani aake hamara saamne khadi ho jaati hai. Aaj maan ke liye kitni khushi ka din hai'.par naa jane taqdeer ko hamare liye kya manzoor hai and starts crying''

Daadima consoles her'geet aap bilkul stress mat lijiye ye aapki sehat ke liye bilkul thik nahin hai'..tells her to sit on the chair.

Sameera is bit anxious to know what has happened'..and finally decides to ask daadima.

Sameera: daadima sab thik to hai na..?

Daadima: jee sab thik hai'..actually geet pregnant hai'or hum nahin chahte vo kisi wajas se stress le'..

Sameera's hopes to return back to maan's life are completely shattered after hearing this''but she is really happy that maan is moved ahead in his life and has got a life partner who loves him and could do anything for him.

Sameera(self-thought): maan aaj hume iss baat ka poora yakeen ho gaya hai ki hum dono ek dusre ke lye kabhi bane hi nahin the'..mera aapki zindagi se jaana ektarah se acha hi hua apko geet ke roop mein ek aisa jeevan-saathi mil gaya hai jo aapke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai or geet or daadima ki baatein sun kar ye bhi yakeen ho gaya ki maan sirf or sirf geet ka hai.

Sameera: geet tum tension mat lo maan jaldi hi thik ho jaenge'.dekhna tumhare pyar or vishwas unhe jald hi bilkul thik kar dega or waise bhi vo maan singh khurana hai ithi jaldi kissi bhi baat se nahi khabrate'..kissi bhi cheez ki zarurat ho to muje yaad kar lena'.hum maan ke dost hi nahi ab aapke bhi dost hai''tum apna dhyan rakhna'.main chalti hu

Sameera is about to leave and daadi stops her''

Dadima: bete humne shayad apko galat samaj lia'ho sake to muje maaf kar dena

Sameera: daadima please aisa kehkar aap mujhe sharminda na karein'..maine itni galatiyan ki hai ki main maafi ke kaabil nahin hu'..bas ab yahi chahti hu ki maan or geet hamesha khush rahein'..!!!

Sameera leaves''!!

Geet goes into maan's room and sits besides him'..maan is sleeping''geet continuously stares maan and waits for him to gain back his conscious.

Maan in his dreams is recalling that he was beaten up on his head ''could not see any face'..and finally gets up calling GEET'..

Geet is happy hearing her name from maan's mouth''.and says maan'hold her hand'." Main apke pass hu maan


Maan sees geet and both of them share an eyelock''maan is bit confused to see her'..on the other hand geet is quite happy to see maan alright.

Maan finally, " kya tum muje bata sakti ho ye geet kaun hai "???

Geet in tears and does not say anything'keeps staring her maan'.geet( self thought): ye kya majbori hai maan aapko ye to yad hai ki geet apki zindagi ka hissa hai par ye yaad nahi ki jo aapke saamne jo ladki baithi hai vo hi aapki geet hai'.maan ki geet'.."

Maan: kuch to bata do??

Doctors come in and tell geet to go out as they wanted to examine maan's state of mind. Geet is about to go and again sees maan'.both of them share an eyelock'sad maahi in BG'!!

Maan(self thought) na jaane muje aisa lag raha hai ki ye ladki mere sawalon ke jawab de sakti hai

Geet comes out of ICU and starts crying''tells daadima the whole incident'."ab kya hoga daadima"

Meanwhile Doctors examine maan and anyhow convinces him that savitri devi is his daadima and dev is his brother'..dint tell anything about geet. maan kept asking but doctors kept silent as they dint wanted him to stress much.

Geet(self thought) maan hamara pyar itna kamzoor nahin hai'.muje yakeen hai apne pyar pe ki chahe kitni bhi muskil'.pareshani aa jaye''hamare pyar un sabhi dardo ko paar kar jaega maan' Maan aap khud muje bahut jald apne aap pehchan jaenge kyuki maan ke bina geet adhuri hai or geet ke bina maan.

Daadima went to meet maan but maan's eyes was searching for her geet'.he wanted to talk to the same girl'but could not find her''.!! Maan asked daadima about that girl but she dint tell anything and told she was an employee at KC and lives at their place'.doctors had strictly adviced not to strain him much otherwise he could loose his life.

Finally maan was discharged and taken back home'. Geet could not say anything about her real identity but she used to take care of maan'..his medicines'used to take him for walk''dint leave him alone.

Days passed but maan could not recall anything'he used to have a shadow of someone in his dreams'..all the good times he has spent'but could see the actual face''!! He always felt geet was someone very close to her.

Geet was even losing her patience with time'.she had suffered a lot'..but could not share her pains with anyone'.!! she then cheered herself by asking strength from her babaji'..used to talk to her kid who was within her''.maan used to see her crying but dint say anything''!!!

Days were passing'..but geet kept losing her patience day by day''. dadima used to cheer her up'.but maan wasn't able to recall''but geet kept faith in her babaji that a day will come when maan will recall her geet back'..she went to gurudwaras '.offered prayers for maan's health'.!!

3 months later

It was night'.. geet was in her room talking to her babaji''maan was sleeping''maan again saw the same shadow in his dreams he was getting restless'..wanting to know desperately who is the person behind the shadow''everything was coming in his mind clearly''the time he left geet and went to the market'..the time he met pammi'and then being hit on his head''.everything in shadows''all played back and went on till the time of his marriage''and there he saw his geet'..in a dulhan get-up and that was not a shadow now'.!!

He recalled his memory'..now he was being guilty of what all happened'.straightaway went into geet's room'..saw her talking to her kid'.. " baby dekhna papa jaldi hi thik ho jaenge'or phir papa, mumma or baby khushi se rahenge"'..she was crying'.had maan's pic in her hand'..maan dekh rahe hai na aap baby or uski mumma ko aapki zarurat hai'please wapis aa jaiye maan'ab or pariksha mat lejiye'..please maan'.and closes her eyes'

Maan had tears in his eyes listening all that..he was about to become a father and the time geet needed him he forgot everything'..''and with a low voice says'..geet'..


Geet for a while thought she had dreamt of maan calling her'.and then again hears "geet- main wapis aa gaya hu'."'. Geet got up and saw maan standing in front of her'..she could not have faith on her eyes'she was so happy''and hugs maan.



M sorry geet mujhe maaf kar do'..main tumhe itna dukh diya''jab tumhe muje sabse zyada zarurat thi main tumhare pass nahi tha''par ab main wapis aa gaya hu''.he keeps on saying but geet is silent. Finally maan'..geet kya hua''.?😕😕

Geet: kuch mat kahiye maan'..muje apko apne saath mehsus karne dijiye'..aap jaante nahi maine ye 3 mahine '3 janamo ki tarah bitaye hai''. muje babaji or apne pyar par pura bharosa tha ki sab kuch thik ho jaega or dekhiye aisa hi hua'.please maan muje dubara chod ke mat jaiyega'.ab ye geet aapke bina mar jaegi''.


Maan apologises and says that wont leave her ever again''maan says geet tum jaanti ho main aaj itna khush hu''main papa banne wala hu'..main apne baby ko zindagi ki har khushi dunga geet or main promise bhi karta hu ki ab dubara baby or uski mumma se door nahin jauga'..!!!


This is how their love overcomed all hurdles and pains'.and they were yet together again with their MAHII all the way'.!!😳😳





Well this was all about my OS- Love beyond pains'.. it was just a try from my side'... Sincere apologies if u dint like it'...u can now throw rotten eggs tomatoes if u like'..well I know I don't write well...'but once again a big thanku to all those who appreciated me throughout'.!! It was just because of u guys that I could write that'..and above all a special thanks to Sai who forced me to post this OS on GF she pm'ed u guys with my first part''.and to Piya who encouraged me in my writing'' 😃😃

Once again Thanku so very much'.!!😃😃

Please come up with ur comments''will be waiting'..!!!😳😳

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its beautifully written ... loved it ... write more

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful ending
Loved it x
Gr8 OS
Thx 4 the Pm!!
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Its Awesome dear. Really very happy endng... Loved it.
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loved it yaar very nice i am reading this first time but really very nice.thanks for the PM.
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hi
loved the os .
i hope apne maan ki memorie bhi aesi hi wapas aajaye .
lovely os . & the pics were awesome .
thanx for pm .

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