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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
just from title I knew Maan's gonna be dead 😆 ... dont ask me how ... i dunno ... may be i know u well now 😉

and guess wat I dint read the whole thing last para was more than enuff ...

sadist kaheen ki ... her waqt Maan ki jaan ke peechay pari rehti hai ... khush nahin dekh sakti na tu Maan aur Geet ko ... kuch qatal o ghaarat chahiye hi hai tujhay ...

plzz charlie chaplin dekh subha shaam for one full year ...

werna kisi din to apnay saath saath hum sab ko pagal karay gi

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Sana
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
Awesome OS
Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
MADDY NOOO 😡
me no like sad & tragic endings 😭
next time you have to write a warning at the start because i dont think i can handle another explosive tragic bomb from you
but i have to say very well written 👏


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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
OMG Maanddy ...U never seems to give up ur passion.

But as always Beautifully penned down ...loved it!!!

Next time come up with a happy one ...please ...I beg u😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I just can't stop my tears!😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
Hiii
What a sad os yaar
How can geet kill her maan
But interesting concept
Loved it
Thanks 4 ur hard work
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
awesum...! 😉
i loooveeedd iitt..!
sad though...! 😛😆
but i feel baad for maan.! 😭
but as usual u were perfect in ure job..!
perfectly written..!
n again...i just loved it.!😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
gosh...

maddy...❤️

what do i say? You left me speechless...girl...Trust me this was one of the best OS of yours...I keep saying this after i read all your work...but this time I think...this is the one..it was short...sweet...great and so powerful yaarrr...i loved it..👏

and the way maan died was so heartbreaking and sad...i was crying like anything...from starting to end point i was connected...the rain and how she hit him with her heelss...man tat was cruel...and then...she shot her...i imagined everything...just everything...and girl you did it once again...👍🏼👍🏼

how maan trusted her and how she was being strong and not showin all love for him...she loved him but she did not realised it...man,..it was great...last kiss was awesome...i cried after she hit him with heelsss...and then till the end...😭😭😭

you said survived it...?? well...i hardly came out from this...i read it in eve after tat i read it once again and then again...and then i was stable and i came jst nw to comment...i cud nt stop me...

it was a great piece of work...you are a very good, rare writer coz only few people can make laugh or cry...u always make us cry...so u r rare...take a bow...👏👏👏 though i want to kill you for killing maan...but your writing is so magical and terrific tat by the end i change my desicion everytime and start commenting...

pls never stop writing...whtevr sad or happy..but don stop writing...u have unique kind of style...simple yet touching...😆 chalo...enough of my chit chat...bye...hate you and love you...ha ha ha...i read previous comments...you tragedy queen, sadist, dukhi atma, devdas. lady dilip kumar...meenakumari...and wt else..?? 🤣🤣🤣

sorry ha..if you felt bad...but i love you and your writing so much...tat even sad OS i love to read again and again...and this piece will haunt me for next few days...😭😭😭😭




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Posted: 14 years ago
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first of all maddy ur charge for making me cry has been increased 100 folds
secondly I HATE U more than before...😡😡
😡😡maddy doctors itny cruel nae hty yar trust me😭😭😭
itna cruel CA student ho skta hy...to write sucha stuff😭😆
i fall in love wid maan all over again...uff he is a matchless personality...his love is smthing beyond this world...
even when he was dying cz of her, his love was having same passion n purity...i loved that scene...👏
this is probably for the first tym i hated ur geet...urrgghhh idiot 😡😡😡
i mean how ud any woman kill her own husband...wo bhi maan jesa husband...wo bhi dev jesy gadhy k lye😡
this story remind me Richard Matheson's ss...name was probably..."button button"
girl was same like geet...in her stupidity lost her husband n later on spent her life in regret
geet's life ud be worst like hell all cz of her own nonsence...😭
dev is a;ways like a thorn in a rose in maneet life...😡
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wesy i was overwhelmed seeing ur os...was really a best surprise😳
thanx for writing buddy...
love u..🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Omg tht was painful story but I luvd it... It was written beautifully and u managed to make me shed some tears 😭 plz write some more os or ss or maybe an ff 😲 plz I'm eagerly waiting 😃
Edited by rockin_gal - 14 years ago

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